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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ssna

Wait now d story is so confusing first
U said dat kalpana is a hearr of der parents who loved her immensely even vithal gave his half property on kalpana child name den u said dat kalpi was an orphan n vithal n kamla adopted her n gave hee love n care.
Now u have show dat vithal n kamla only think about der image property n status n dey throw kalpi out of d house
If dey loved kalpi den dey should have talked 2 rag about wat kalpi was saying n den sout out der issues.
Rag only want frm kalpi d child den he will throw her out den how he will take revenge frm pakhi .
D story is too confusing plz dear first clear d confusion n plz tell wat is d story line.

the storyline i plot earlier is different from curent once i've planned to get kalpi pregnent but my one frnd don't want kalpi to get pragnant in earlier stage so i decide to change story plot so with this i need to find a way in which sunny helped me a lot .
sorry for confusing u all soon i'll make changes in character sketch hope it clears ur confusion
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: darkloveriam

the storyline i plot earlier is different from curent once i've planned to get kalpi pregnent but my one frnd don't want kalpi to get pragnant in earlier stage so i decide to change story plot so with this i need to find a way in which sunny helped me a lot .

sorry for confusing u all soon i'll make changes in character sketch hope it clears ur confusion


Neha I agree with Shweta.. its getting bit out of place...
Can you tell.me what was Your Original plan before changing the story ... I read last 5 chapters in one go.. so that sudden change is too clear..
I want to know your *Original* lines too. .. please.. what woulf be in after Preganancy...??
I am assuming the will mentioned in chapter 3 or 4 would stand valid even now... just wondering. ..

And yes.. Nice Update..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha lovely update 😃+ I love the way you put together the twist about Kalpi's past being an orphan ...Let's hope Raghav have a change of heart for Kalpi knowing she is not like her adopted sister Paki 😆...Eventually love will finds its way...Yayy I'm glad my Sunyy Pie was able to help you 😳...Sorry for not commenting earlier... Just let the story flows the way you are going⭐️


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Posted: 10 years ago
Woah ! Mind Blowing , Please Post Long Parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
Happy Friendship Day Neha
please give us one loooggg update if u have time
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shahsb_26


Neha I agree with Shweta.. its getting bit out of place...
Can you tell.me what was Your Original plan before changing the story ... I read last 5 chapters in one go.. so that sudden change is too clear..
I want to know your *Original* lines too. .. please.. what woulf be in after Preganancy...??
I am assuming the will mentioned in chapter 3 or 4 would stand valid even now... just wondering. ..

And yes.. Nice Update..

in original plot despite of changing vitthal & kamala behaviour i start pregnacy track with continued misunderstanding but his care for his child and after u'll see pakhi & Raghav truth out @nd she leave him
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rachufan

Happy Friendship Day Neha
please give us one loooggg update if u have time

happy frienship day to u too😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for likes & comments
i know many of u comfused with the way story heading as i say that kalpi is princess of her fanily and niw she is treating like this by kamala & vithhal sctually i changed my plot from pragnacy track and if u confused with kalpana being partner in jadhav property then let me clear it vitthal 50% property is still on kalpi name and he give her to raghav only because in alliance with Raghav company he get profit more than the property kalpana own
once again thamx for comments & sorry for not rplying a all individually
happy friendship day to all
let me tell u a secret sunny , swati , rucha , preetu , falak & sugi help me a lot whenever i got stuck
chapter 15
He was stunned too stunned after what he witness . Never ever he thought that must be her life he thought she is Princess but here what he saw stunned him.

She was sitting on ground tears continiously flowing from her eyes . Wiping her tears she stand up again and knock door
K- b baba aai
B b aaba a aaii . I i'm s so rry bba ba . Pl zz f fo rrgivve mme .
Bb aba

15 min pass by she continue knock door but get only coldness in return . She apologize she cried but no use .
She sit near door slowly and support her head aganst door she close her eyes sobbing .
Trio was their they what just watched was totally opposite to what they exoect.

A few minutes passes in silance without anymoment she was their with her eyes closed .
Raghav was feeling heavy burned on his heart past half hour and everything changed .
With each passing second guilt overpowering his heart . Wity each passing second what he did with her in past 3 weeks flashes in ftont of his eyes and then this half hour . He did wrong with her he realize it . She was innocent all the time it got clear in some minutes now what?

His chain of thought broken when Gauri put her hand on his shoulder , she was actually to schoked & feeling guilty with the way she behaved with a girl . That have no fault at all .
G- we did wrong Raghav she didn't deserve this !! She was innocent all time not like Pakhi .
We hurt someone innocent in revenge . U married her for revenge but she didn't desrve it.

M- maa we need to take her home .
( maya intruppted)
Gauri nodded
G- Raghav we
Before she say he move toward her when again & again how vitthal throw her outside flashes in front of his eyes .
He walk toward her and sit beside her
R- kalpana
( he say softly)
R- i'm sorry . I i
First time in his life he was speechless .
I
Closing his eyes
I married u for revenge i do this for
Kalpana
( he looked toward her confused she was not reacting )
He touch her hand
R- kalpana
But getting no responce he shake her slightly .
He patted her cheeks
R- kalpana
( he say while getting panicked)
He lift her immidatly in his arms
Gauri come near him
G- what happn ( she say in concerned voice)
R- mom call doctor . I think she get uncoincious.
Gauri nodeed & all went inside car and head toward singhania mantion.
...
Singhania mantion
20 minutes later
All were waiting outside as doctor checking kalpana.
Doctor inject kalpana and comes out of room
G-anything serious doctor?
D- no mrs singhania i think due to stress she fainted and i think she is not taking care of herself properly . just make sure she eat proprly & not take stress
Saying so he left
...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm glad that Raghav and the others realized that all along Kalpi is innocent
Superb update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update wow they so rude t kalpi rag finally realise the truth
Update soon

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