I never completed 50 shades of grey myself since it's wasn't my type of novel.
Writing in first person can be a challenge sometimes but you seem to be doing a good job with it 😊
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Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim
Ok I got the time and checked out some of this like you asked me too and I have one question. Did you read fifty shades of grey? 😆I noticed some similarities hence the question.
I never completed 50 shades of grey myself since it's wasn't my type of novel.
Writing in first person can be a challenge sometimes but you seem to be doing a good job with it😊Keep writing. Have fun.😊
Finally unres...unres page 30
Chapter 6:
Ummm...so not only kalpi..raghav too is attractd towards her...he is torturing her with lil kisses n his words...
N kalpi😆 she is all fida on him...😆
Kiss *shock* raghav kissed that stella that too in frnt of kalpi...n y he is angry by mentioning her name...
He was all silent till reaching the ELEVATOR...😳
And then...
HOT!!!HOT!!!HOT!!!
What the punishment...raghav is too much...without saying anything he made her sry for asking abt that stella...gud raghav😆
Poor kalpi,,,,,she wanna cry out of pain...bt again he surprise her taking her in his arms n soothing her...😕
He is weird😆
Chapter 7:
Fabulas update...
Kalpi was soo lost in his arms that she didn't listen hat was raghav saying to her😳
She was enjoying comfort of raghav's arms...n he picked her kalpi's 1 dream comes true😆
Shi is cursing herself for smiling...indeed raghav affect her too much...[L]
Who is this stella? Thinking abt her kalpi get insecure evrytym...😕
Raghav chuckling on her actions...😆
What is this agreement raghav asking...y kalpi is so confusd..what he wanna do wid her nw..😕...
(well,I knw now😉)
And again his mood swings what was he thinking of pinning her to the wall,toring her shirt n then pushed her to floor
N commanding her to leave...idiot.
Kalpi😭 trying hard to not cry bt atlast give up...n again he come forward to pacify her...😳
Nw I have 1 more question y he said dnt leave me AGAIN...😕...is she left his house bcz of that stella...
And he jerk...what he did that bcz of kalpi is hurt so much...that she dnt wannacm here again...
Raghav want to make love with her😳...n she says yes too...😳
Awsm update...
Chapter 8:
Smriti di...do u wanna kill us with hotness...😆
This was damm HOT!!!
Raghav I stoo hot...making her beg for him...😳
What!!! He was doing push-ups????😕 what a place raghav?😆😆
Sparrow😆...(this was the first name u give me,swthrt Remember😳)
Did he called her "KALPANA RAGHAV SINGHANIA"...what is running is his mind...n this girl she is so lost that she didn't listen what he said...
He wanna torture her bt table turns shiftly...kalpi torture him...😳
Rghav was nt all hpy to knw that she watchd those types of moveies..😆😆
It was so sweet whn he said that "This is your position to sleep from now, over me kalpi"😳
Whn r u updating nxt part swthrt😳...waiting..
P.S I was trying to give comments from so many days...bt my phn[L]
Anyways...I comment for all 3 updates together..😳
Read when you're free...😆
Originally posted by: dragonok
Note :
Heyaaa...
I promised of updating the chapter today...
But my story is yet not ready... I feel its now very imp to reveal the some crucial points of the story...
Thus today I ammendend a part of it
Sunny... I m seriously sorry to u..
But tomorrow the story will be updated
Have a beautiful night
Gn 😃Note
Originally posted by: rachufan
Koi nahi no problem we will wait
hi candy how r u , 😛
Originally posted by: dragonok
Note :
Heyaaa...
I promised of updating the chapter today...
But my story is yet not ready... I feel its now very imp to reveal the some crucial points of the story...
Thus today I ammendend a part of it
Sunny... I m seriously sorry to u..
But tomorrow the story will be updated
Have a beautiful night
Gn 😃Note
its ohk..we'l wait..😳
i'm going out of city...wil cmnt later😊