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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: switymango

Update plzzz...

Pehle WhatsApp pe aa main wait kr rahi..😡

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: sugandhii

Pehle WhatsApp pe aa main wait kr rahi..😡

I want update to 😳

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sunyy

I want update to 😳

Working on that.. U'll get it by tomorrow.. 😉

N waiting for u too on whatsaap 😆😆😉

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nikkiarora093

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

wowww nice concept darling..plzzz keep updating...

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nikkiarora093

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

just one request plzz don't kill ragahv in d end...let him live wid kalpi..its really heartbreaking...

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FALAK_SKY

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Very nice start sugi update next shot soon...

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rani214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Fabulous TS dear...amazing first shot

So kalpi is in FBI n rags a mobster...both love each other dearly n want to die for other ...omg rags jumped off d cliff n wanted to save kalpi n his unborn baby...suggi how can u do dis😭

Premna married n she was forced to marry dat jerk...n he used kalpi for his revenge 😡...but lik dat us stupid jerk ke wajah se humare ragna mile😉

Loved ragna meeting...so both saved each others life once

Curious to knw why rags killed prem's family

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vyshuu..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Heyyllooo sugi!!😉

Wow!! Awesome update..😃

U always amaze me with ur plot and the characters in it!! Too different and interesting!!😉 I loved it!❤️

Strt was too good!! When I read that rags saying prem has marked her.. I was lyk.. yeh kya hua.?😲🤢 but then it got totally vanished as I read that kalpi bears his child😳😛 and the dialogues at the strtng was awesome.. I njyd reading it.. but u jus left us at the cliffhanger in the present and took us to the flashback!!😆

Well.. FB is indeed a good.. a bit funny too.. where kalpi was thinking that the lawyer was smiling as if he got married to prem..🤣 not only that, when kalpi kicked prem which made him rest for TWO days..🤣😆 superrr funny!!!

And ragna encounter was as always good!!😳 and the dialogues u use will be always liked by me.. 😳 and sugiii.. u always leave us with sooo many q's..?🥱 I gotta be back to my KBC queen wala post..😳😆 if ,in FB, it was an attack.. then why dint he kill kalpi's dad..?? or prem..? does that mean they escaped from him..? I have doubt on prem for this thing..😛 as he was ready to send kalpi to raghav, even if that means sleeping with him..!!! no matter wat.. I doubt prem..😛😆

I'll be waiting for the next chappy!!!😉😳

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Note..

There's a change in plan, I'm going to give you 3rd n finale shot together on Sunday along with JOURNEY.. yay happy..?? BUT.. Pls don't request me to not kill Raghav, bcz this is d story I plan since d day I jot it down in words, so I'll be really dishearten if you guls keep on saying don't kill him n I do against it.. I always write what you want but only in FF and SS but TS and OS is something which is only a shot so pls go with flow n let me give u my own thoughts in this story.. There will be really sad ending but definitely you won't regret of reading this.. So pls request readers..

This tym I'm really sorry for not writing what you want...!!!

P.S.

Though I read each n every comment, thank u so much for lyking this story.. I just love each n every comment n off course lykers thank u... M not bias bus I need to answer two of the comments..

1,. Charu... Dharam sankat Lol still😆 love you girly.. 🤗 Mwaaah.. N yup I know sad endings you don't lyk.. I remember ur one comment in MK n HS but ye wali aisi hi h iske baad no sad endings wali TS promise.. N haan iski ending sad ho k b sad naee hogi.. 😉

2.. Firstly welcome back my KBC queen I hope you find that answer in 2nd shot.. If no to kalpi will tell him in 3rd shot wese to i mention that answer in this shot also.. Dhundo to jaane..!!! thanks for mentioning those funny scenes, I thought k mera humor marr chuka has nobody mentions that phase.. Glad u lyk that.. Thank u... For loving the concept 🤗

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