Ragna TS: In Love With a Mobster 3rd Shot~ 18 No pm - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

😛 TS girl bhulgaye 😆 Love by Chance jis ka naam bhi nahi janthi tum 🤓



arey nhi bhuli hu JTBT reading😳
Sugu, muje waqt do na
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Sugandhiii 😆
I love this story its fabulous 👏👏

hehe so Kalpi is from FBI and Raghav is a Gangster i guessed it right
N about helping with name I can only suggest funny ones 😛

how about Secret (Love) Mission or Dearly Departed if Raghav is really dead 😃

How can kalpi father marry her with out her will i just hate this practice of forcing their opinion on daughter

uff anyway prem had broke their relation then y is he shouting my wife my wife stupid 😡

😭 Y RagNa had to kill eachother, their love is so deep and intense kalpi is pregnant and she want to dei with raghav but he wants his child to live 😭 so painful

next update jaldi plz 😛😆 i want to know how kalpi escaped from him and finally met him 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
awesome update wow lovely
suggi rag jump😭
wow the meeting of ragna was sizzling
y u make kalpi marry prem
update soon can't wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Awesome story sugi...update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Aww superb update suggi
That jerk prem 😡 marry kalpi so he can use her n take reveng from raghav
Haha kalpi kick prem between his leg when he is trying to touch her 👏 👏
Aww love raghav n kalpana meeting 😉 n the y kalpi snap him at his evry quetion 😛
Aww both is ready to kill each other 😭 n kalpi tell him that she is carring his child
😲 ragna kissed in front of prem 😉
Raghav leave kalpi n say that their child need to alive
I love the live tell our baby his father only work was loving his mother whole ❤️
N he jump 😭 😭 suggi its not fair dear 😡
Hope soon he came back
Update soon next part dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
sugu tell me first, is raghav died?😭

superb start, it was thrilling, Ragna face to face with holding guns to each other forehead, wow what an thrilling scenario. Raghav is thinking kalpi betrayed him, while kalpi is telling she still love him, and their love is growing within her. she wanted to live with her, while raghav wanted to his baby will grow and at last he jump...leaving kalpana n his child to live😒

Whoa it is all revenge plan made by Prem, putting his own wife's life in danger, jerk he is 😡, he promiss her dad he will take care of her, while he himself cause biggest danger for her life😡

Wow..kalpi is black belt champion, and she used it on prem as well once 😎 good going😆

ragna second meeting was amazing, both are having attitude, while both are start affecting each other. Kalpi is gonig to meet him again, superb, waiting for the another meeting.

PS: about name for TS, it is love story with sad ending Mobster's Love Life or The Criminal and FBI's love story,



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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Sugu,pls dnt kill raghav...
U said its sad story,it means u r going to kill raghav...don't do this😭

fabulas update sugu...i was shocked whn i read first 2-3 line...ragna facing each othr and pointing gun to each other's forhead,ready to kill...

Both r so much in pain,where raghav blaming her for her betrayal and she is crying on her helpness...she confesd her dt she loves him...and show that only he has rit to be in her heart saying symbol of their love is growing in her...
In this awful cnditn still they're snapping...
They kissed...pouring each othr feelings in dt 1 kiss.
I was crying whn i read the line of raghav "my baby" he was so hpy bt sad at d same tym for nt able to hold him/her in future.

Prem is a jerk,idiot 😡
using his wife for revenge...whn he told her that do any thing seduce him,sleep wid him i felt lyk beating him blue and black...and my kalpi do that by slapping.i so love tis kalpi,snappy and fiesty...

Sugu tell me honestly what u eat?
Everytym u cm wid a awsm cncpt.how u do that girly...i wish evrytym dt update doesn't end...love u darling 🤗

p.s. About title,it can be "love till heaven"...i knw its nt dt cool bt it cms in my mind whn i was reading update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
@shonali: shona... though m very angry with you😡😡 Still Thank you so mch for the title 🤗
tera title sirf maine thoda sa change kia hope you lyk it... Thank you... Mwaah
Still m 😡😡😡

@santhi 😆😆 girly is title k lie to meko ek nayi solid wali TS likhni pdegi with lot of humor gali ka raja n jhasi ki rani 🤣🤣 too good 👏 par sad ending hai to title dekh k hasoge to ending dekh k rouge kese...???? 😉 will write one more for tghis name surely... Still Thank you🤗

@gargdia: girl, was about to keep that title which u suggest LOve in heaven great... jb tum ending pdogi then u realise y i wanted to chose but this suits only for ending not for entire TS... still Thank you so mch for participating 🤗

Love you girls❤️
Mwaah🤗

P.S. mujhe untitled stories ache naee lgte thank you so mch for helping me... Lots of love❤️❤️
Edited by sugandhii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
me b gussa, coz raghav die😡😭
welcum sugu dear🤗 And i just love title❤️😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

me b gussa, coz raghav die😡😭
welcum sugu dear🤗 And i just love title❤️😳


Aww ending sad hogi but perfect hogi dont worry...
🤗glad u liked it,,,
chlo gud nyt off to writing second shot see u tomorrow 😉❤️🤗

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