Ragna OS: In Rain, I Hear Your Laughter(CH17,18,19,20: PG49,50) - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Wow kalpi ignored rag
Prem jump in
They are so angry on prem pakhi slip of tongue
Update soon



Thanks dear 😛
Rags deserved her ignorance..



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Wonderful update. Rags knows it's going to be hard but bachi is up for tge challenge to win his lady love back. He is confident she is his and only hus abd won't ever go to prem. Prem the almighty protector or the kabab mein haddi. The kabob mein haddi I say rags ko kalpi say baat nahin Karne di. 😕 chal romorseful rags maafi mode mein shuru hoja bachi 😉



Thanks dear😊
Yes, because he knew that kalpi cant give his place to any other person..
Prem?😆



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

nice chappy dear.. Prem kabab mei haddi.. Dear plz update nxt chappy soon waiting..


Thanks dear😛
Prem😆


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Awesome update

Rags trying to make kalpi talk to him but she completely ignored him ... rags u have given her unbearable pain n now u need to put more efforts to manofy her mr. Boxers
Flashback scene was lovely😳
Yaar sacchi ye Prem kaha se kabab me haddi aagaya😡
Pakhi blurting out abt Prem loving kalpi n Mr. boxer was ready to punch him lol...rags in ur jealousy dnt hurt kalpi's frnd warna aur prob ho jaayegi kalpi ko manane me😉
Hope aftr knowing truth Prem b a good frnd n help in ragna milao mission n not turn in to psycho lover😛



Thanks dear😛
Thans for liking fb..
Prem😆
Kalpi is hurt and rags need to work hard..


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Sammy and Pakhi are hilarious
Poor Raghav has his own problem but he has to babysit Sammy and Pakhi too lol
I like Raghav determination to get his love back...
RagNa fb was so beautiful
Kalpi is so hurt that she can't even look at Raghav
Lovely update


Gladu liked gadha and chudail😆
Raghav wont back off..
Thanks for liking their fb..
Thanks dear😛



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan

Awesome updatee

Raghav trying to win kalpi bck but she is not even ready look or even talk to him. Raghav gotta hav to work really hard to win her bck. Prem came out of nowhere and he thought raghav misbehaving with her. Prem care for kalpi so much. Pakhi blurted abt prem that prem loves kalpi but raghav is so confident that kalpi wnt give his place in her heart to anyone else. Hope prem help raghav in his mission to win kalpi bck and pls dnt make him negative. Loved the flashbck.



Thanks dear😛
Kalpi is so hurt and rags need to work hard..
Yeas, prem care for kalpi...



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Posted: 10 years ago


THanks dear😛



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

Kalpi is not ready to talk to him good he deserves it 😛

Raghav should take it slow I mean aramse bath karsakthana manhandling and all ok that is what prem thought when he saw them 😃 how he said Raghav to get out 😆 i liked it he is very caring and protective for her 😃 such a nice guy r u planing to turn him negetive as u r questioning something like that 😕


Raghav ka jealousy i loved it paki ne batha diya that prem love her and even she wanted kalpi to marry him

but but our hero know she is only his 😃

nice update 👏



I thought u dont like seeing my raghav in pain😉😆
Hah.. Yes, prem indirectly asked him to get out 😆
I just askd u guys opinion about prem..😉
Of course yaar.. He knew that she wont give his place to someone else whatever happens...
Thanks dear😃



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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey lovelies... Haha.. I know u guys must be wondering why this girl is continuously giving updates.. Well, i have some free time till i enter the medical school.. I dont know how often i can update when i start my studies.. So, im using my free time to update as much as possible... Now proceed reading the update.. Oops.. Updates... Lol..



PART 7



Kalpi was asking a little girl to stretch her arm to check whether her hand is still paining or not.. Raghav was looking at her with a pleasant smile while sitting on the wooden bench with sammy...

S: " so, as we can stay here for few more days, what is ur plan?"

(The climate become worse.. So, the boats are not available till the water levels becomes normal..this gave an opportunity for sammy and raghav to stay there for longer..)

R: " i dont know.. Let me go and talk to her..", and he left to talk to her..

Raghav came near her but she behaved like he doesnt exist..

R: " how long u gonna ignore me kalpi?", but no response..

K: " diya, dont open the plaster till i say..ok?", she asked smiling kindly towards the little girl..

D: " ok kalpi di..", kalpi kissed the girl on her cheek and left the place to attend another patient..

Raghav followed her like a puppy..

On the other side..

Pa: " hey gadha.. Where is raghav?", she asked sammy who was busy with his phone..

Sammy rolled his eyes..

S: " chudail are u blind? Look there.. He is running behind kalpi..", saying so he busy with his phone again..

Pakhi went behind him and sneakily looked at what he is doing in the phone.. She saw he was reading the comments he got for his photo he posted in the fb..Pakhi laughed loud.. Sammy turn to face her and gave her a deadly glare..

S: " what's so funny chudail?"

Pa: " the girl commented that u look handsome in this picture... I mean she must be blind or she needs a dictionary to know the true meaning of handsome..", and she laughed again..

S: " its not her but u who needs a dictionary.. Oh come on.. Look here.. How many girls comment saying i am so handsome.. U dont know how many girlfriends i have..", he said smirking..

Pakhi didnt know why but she felt a little jealous when he said he has lots of girlfriends.. She brushed the thoughts away immediately..

Pa: " like i will believe.. I dont have time to listen to ur bakwaas.. Im going..", saying so she left..

S(self talk): " why do i feel that she is jealous? Arghh.. Sammy, beta.. Concentrate on ur work.. U have itni sari admirers..so chalo reply their comments.."

However, raghav was busy behind kalpi asking her to give a chance.. But she was too adamant.. All the other looked at them that raghav felt so embarrassed but he has to do it to get her back..


Three days passes like this..

Night on the fourth day..

Sammy, pakhi and raghav were talking in the canopy... Suddenly, prem came there.. The trio looked at him frowning as his expression showed that he is damn pissed..

Pa: " prem, what happened? Why u look tensed?"

Prem went near raghav and grabbed his collar...

S: " hey, what are u doing? Leave my friend..", saying so he tried to make prem release raghav's collar..

Pa: " prem stop it yaar.. What are u doing?"

Pr: " pakhi u dont know.. I was observing him from the past three days.. He was misbehaving with kalpi...", saying so he punched raghav..

Pakhi covered her mouth in shock when prem punched raghav..

Pa: " prem it is nothing like u think..."

But prem didnt listen..

Pr: " ask him to stay away from kalpi..", he left his collar and turned to go..

R: " i wont.. I wont stay away from her.. What u can do?", he said challenging prem..

Prem returned and fought with raghav.. Sammy was about to beat prem, but raghav asked him not to interfere.. Prem gave repeated punches on ragahv's face causing raghav's nose to bleed.. But raghav didnt fight him back.. He was actually controlling his anger as he knows his anger is his biggest enemy..and if he fight with prem, surely it will make it difficult for him to win back his wife..

Pakhi ran out of the camp and went to meet kalpi..

Pa: " kalpi!! Kalpi!!", she came there panting..

Kalpi stood up and hold pakhi's hand..

K: " what happened pakhi? Any emergency?"

Pa: " a very big emergency... Prem is hitting raghav.."

Kalpi snapped her head towards pakhi..

K: " what?"

Pa: " haan.. Prem thinks raghav is misbehaving with u.. He doesnt know that he is here to get u back in his life and that he loves u..", she said in one breath..

K: " wait what did u say? He is here to.. U knew it all? U r with him too? U r helping him? After knowing everything u r helping him?", she asked with accusing eyes..

Pakhi got that she blurt out everything..

Pa: " kalpi, raghav is.. Ok.. Just leave that for some other time..now come and stop prem..", saying so she dragged kalpi by her hand..

Kalpi shrugged her hand off hers..

K: " i know this is ur plan pakhi.. And for ur kind information, i dont wanna talk to that man.. U want me to believe that prem is hitting him and he is silently getting all the blows? I knew him very well.. I would have believed it if that man is hitting prem..", saying so she went and sat on the chair..

Pakhi sighed and kneeled down in front of her..

Pa: " kalpi believe me.. Raghav is not the same raghav anymore.. U know what? He even quit boxing for u.."

Kalpi looked at her shocked..

K: " stop lying pakhi..", she said frustrated..

Pa: "ok.. It's completely okay if u don't believe me kalpi.. But, pls come and stop prem.. For me pls.."

Kalpi half-heartedly followed pakhi to the camp.. When she reached there she saw prem hitting raghav.. And raghav was silently getting the blows.. He was not hitting him back.. Sammy was trying to get prem away but all goes in vein.. She could see blood oozing in the corner of raghav's lips and his nose..

Seeing blood, kalpi panicked.. (Of course.. She loves him and cant see him in pain).. She went inside the camp..

K: " prem, what are u doing? Stop it.."

Pr: " no kalpi.. U dont know.. I saw everything.. he was disturbing u since the first day he came here.. I will teach him a lesson now.."

Raghav was looking at her only.. He could see the her heart aching seeing him getting beaten..

K: " prem pls stop it.. Listen to me.."

But prem was not listening to her... Tears were flowing from kalpi's eyes.. Pakhi and sammy understood that she still loves raghav..

Kalpi pulled prem's hand away from raghav and she shouted..

K: " HE IS MY HUSBAND PREM!! MY HUSBAND!!", she shouted..

Prem stopped as the words echoed around him.. He looked at her and then at raghav...

Pr: " kalpi...", raghav smiled...

K: " prem, pls go away from here.. Pls..", she begged him folding her hands..

Prem bowed his head and left the place..

S: " dude r u ok?", he asked helping him to get up..

Raghav went near kalpi..

R: " im fine.. In fact better after listening to my wife calling me as her husband..", he said looking at her lovingly..

For the first time since he arrived, she looked straight at his eyes... She got that she mentioned him as her husband... He raised his hand to touch her cheek but she took a step back...

K: " pakhi, i just want prem to stop.. Thats why i said so.. There's nothing else..", saying so she started walking away but stopped hearing his words..

R: " then, u should have said im ur Ex-husband.. In fact thats the truth nah.. We are divorced... So, its rightful to say im ur ex-husband... But u said that im ur husband.. U know why? Because u still love me.."

Kalpi closed her eyes hearing that.. She very well knew every word he said is true... Without uttering a single word, she left the place..Pakhi followed her..

S: " dude, what happened to u yaar? I know u quit boxing but that doesnt mean u keep quiet while that prem is hitting u.. In one punch u could have knocked out him.."

R: " if i have done like that, she would be angry on me for hitting her friend.. And moreover, she called me her husband.. So, im happy..", he said smiling..

S: " i heard that love can make a weak man strong and a strong man weak.. I didnt believe it then.. But i believe it now seeing u...", he said chuckling..

Raghav laughed while wiping his blood..

R: " u will understand that when u fall in love my friend.."

S: " love.. And me? Thats impossible.."

R: " why not? Why dont u try with pakhi?", he asked mischievously..

S: " that chudail..."

R: " ok ok.. I understand..."

On the other side..

Pa: " kalpi im sorry..", she said softly to kalpi who was crying..

K: " its ok..", she said wiping the tears from her cheeks..

After a short silence..

Pa: " kalpi, i..."

K: " no pakhi..pls..no..", she cut short her words..

Pa: " i want u to be happy...", she tried explaining..

K: " but i only want some peace.. Thats enough for me..."

Pa: " kalpi, raghav has changed... He want to start a fresh relationship with u.. Why dont u give him a chance.. And i know u love him, then whats wrong in giving a second chance in love?"

K: " yeah.. I still love raghav.. I love my raghav.. But u know what my raghav died long ago.. My raghav will never hurt me... The person now is not my raghav..."

Pakhi closed her eyes not knowing how to convince her... Kalpi continued..

K: " u know how happy we were? Life full of love.. But all the dreams, love, expectations, eveything.. Everything come to an end... U know why? Because of his anger... Because of his madness about boxing.. Because of his mentality that cant accept failure..."

She remembered the days...




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PART 8




Flashback starts..

Kalpi and raghav were on their bed after making love..Her head was placed on his bare chest and their bodies are covered with blanket..

Raghav was playing with her hair while she was in deep thinking.. He frowned seeing his wife lost in some other thought... He kissed the top of her head.. She came out of her thought and raised her head to look at her husband's face.. She turned around and lie on her stomach with her elbows supporting her head..

R: " where are u lost wifey?", while his eyes looking at the mangalsutra that dangled in his wife's neck...

She brushed the few strands of hair that fell on his handsome face with her fingers..

K: " just wondering how much u love me...", she said softly..

R: " i think i just showed how much i love u an hour ago.. Do u want me to show again? Im ready..Im not tired you know..", he said giving a naughty smile...

Kalpi shook her head and hit his chest slightly at his mischievousness..

K: " love is not just about physical..", she said..

R: " i know my dear.. I love u so much.. The only person i love the most after my boxing is you... U r the most important thing in my life after boxing.. Happy now?", he said giving a peck on her lips..

K: " after boxing?", she asked disappointed..

R: " oh.. Now dont tell me u r jealous of boxing..", he joked laughing but stopped seeing her unaffected face..

He hugged her tightly...

R: " in fact if i ask u.. U would say u love ur profession the most nah? Same goes to me...", she listened to him while her head was comfortably placed on his chest..

K: " i would choose u over my profession.. I love u more than my profession..", she confessed softly but seriously..

Raghav frowned.. He know where the conversation is heading.. And if it continues, he very well knew he would end up hurting her.. So, he decided to change the topic...

He turned her so that she is under him and he kissed her passionately..

K(in mind): " i know raghav.. U wanna change the topic... No matter what happens i know boxing will be ur priority but i hope ur love for boxing never become a big hurdle in our life..."

Soon, they indulge theirselves in their own world...

Two weeks passed..

(Gauri stays in difference place with her late husband's mom and sister who is a widow.. Raghav and kalpi at different place as he has to look after the business)

It was a very hectic day..Kalpi came back home late at around 11pm...

She entered the house using her own keys as she know raghav would be asleep by now.. She entered the house and went straight to the room... It was to dark.. So, she on the table lamp not to disturb raghav.. But she found the bed empty.. She wondered where is raghav.. She searched the bathroom and the balcony but he was nowhere... She went down to the living hall and thats when she heard the sounds coming from the gym..

K(in mind): " what is ragahv is doing in the gym at this time?", she frowned and made way to the gym...

When she entered the gym, she saw her husband was punching the punching bag continuously..

(My this raghav is not so innocent and sweet.. He is romantic but he is actually short tempered.. So dont expect him to be like the raghav in LGPCP & FSOL..Especially when it comes to boxing.. He vents out his anger on the punching bag.. Poor punching bag..lol..)

She was confused and went near him..

K: " ragahv? Why are u working out at this time? What happened?"

He turned to look at her with blood red eyes and continued punching the punching bag.. She understood that something is wrong..

K: " raghav.. Thats enough.. Come.. Lets sleep..", she called but he didnt budge..

She sighed and went to touch his arm.. When she touch him, she could feel his skin burning.. She panicked..

K: " ragahv, u r having fever? Oh god.. What the hell happened?", she asked cupping his face in her hands..

He stopped punching the punching bag and looked at her.. He could see tears in her eyes..

(Yes, even if she is a doctor and sees sick ppl everyday, it hurts her to see him suffering.. Thats what love is..)

She dragged him to their room and made him sit on the bed.. She took the towel and wiped the sweat on his face and arms.. Then, she opened the medicine box and found the fever tablets.. He didnt eat them..

K: " raghav, dont behave like a child.. Open ur mouth..", he obeyed her.

She feed him the medicine and water... She kneeled down in front of him and raised his bowed head using her index finger..

K: " what happened?"

Raghav hugged her tightly..

R: " i lost.. I lost the match..."

Kalpi pulled away from the hug slowly..

K: " raghav its ok.. Its just a match.. If u loose this one, it doesn't mean u will loose forever.. So, just forget it..", she said while her hands holding his.

Raghav snatched his hands from hers roughly and stood up in anger.. He went to stand near the window with his back facing kalpi..

Kalpi sighed softly..

K: " raghav, its ok... Dont stress urself.. I know u will win upcoming matches.. So, its ok.."

R: " IT IS NOT OK!!!", his loud voice echoed in the room making her jump in fear..

He went towards her and gripped her upper arm tightly..

(Just imagine.. He is a boxer... So, just imagine how tight he hold her..)

R: " it is not ok!!", he hissed in anger..

K: " ra.. Raghav.. U.. U r hurting me..", tears dropped from her eyes..

Raghav left her hand and hugged her..

R: " im sorry.. Im sorry dear.. Im really sorry...", he said sorries continuously..

He broke the hug and placed his forehead on hers... His eyes closed..

R: " u don't understand kalpi.. It hurts so much to loose.."

Kalpi caressed his cheek with her hand..

K: " i do understand raghav.. I understand that u hate loosing... U love ur boxing more than anything in the world.. Even more than me..", she said causing him to look at her eyes..

He hugged her again.. They remain like that for a while.. Kalpi broke the hug slowly..

K: " lets sleep.. Its getting late.. And u r not well..", saying so she went towards the bed..

He pulled her by her wrist.. She looked at him questioningly.. He went near her and kissed her forehead..

K: " raghav.."

R:" i need u..", he said kissing her face..

K: " raghav u r not feeling well.. U need to rest.."

R: " pls..", saying so he kissed her lips passionately..

Kalpi didnt get any chance... Soon, she loose herself to him... They end up making wild passionate love... He collapsed over her as he was tired and because of the effect of the medicine.. Kalpi ran her fingers through his hair fondly..

K(in mind): " i dont know why but i feel the fear of loosing u deep down my heart.. I dont wanna loose u raghav... ", she hugged him closely as the fear of loosing him gripped her heart..


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