The Lion and the Panther (RagNa ff) 2nd Thread REMOVED - Page 25

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

😆Are you my number 1 thunderbrat then? You and Vy could decide on that.😛

Originally posted by: luvragna

hey dear...im vishaka..I now you don't know me but I know you since the twisting kaleidoscope story...can I tell you something..i know you already now it as every member in the forum would have told you so me to be back I will also tell you you are a fantastic, mind blowing, excellent, superb etc,etc writer and honestly im one of the biggest fan of your writings...seriously yaar do you anyway think to publish your stories I'll be the first one to buy it...promise...

and I know that you know I have never commented on any of your stories but that becoz I am a lazy person and was a silent one too but now I promise that I will comment on every chapters and stories..promise!!😃..

ohk so chappy 31..ill start from her hope you wont mind that im not giving review to your previous chappy but you know na im lazy so pardon me...😆😆..but Im telling you that all of your updates is fantastic dear...just loved it...

hmmm so this prem...he is such a cheapo..i thought when raghav declared war and knowing that north has the support of west and south the idiot will realize that the fires has surrounded him and if he move forward he'll be dead...but he is such an idiot , insane man that cant understand anything...even his army's second in command told him that the north will win becoz they are in majority but no idiot man...what to do he don't have mind ..leaving him to you .

hmm so in north they will do partyyy😃😃becoz the heir is on the way😆😆..oh so the temple is ready and while reading ill can just simply imagine the place...even I felt some peace...oh raghav put sindoor in her partition...that's true that red colour is like their love...oh I can just imaging myself standing there and watching them...😳😳...

oh so the practice is going on...yes raghav is right their skills will be tested when they are staring the death on the battle ground...but it true na practice make person perfect however confident we are but we should keep practicing to make ourself perfect becoz no one can get perfect in whole life but we can do practice to improve...ohh raghav is thinking of the families of the army which that jerk didn't...it shows the difference between the king and the lord...I love Thomas can I take him with me when your story is over...pretty please...so kalpi gave him a ball...so this is the raghav and samar's names hidden secret...destined before they meet...friends..so raghav gift is a white handkerchief with R.G and K.G initials...loved it...

so that idiot and army is on their way and south and west is already their.. loved their teasing session but felt bad for arsenio it was not his fault that his wife betrayed him and he became rude...it so good that raghav gave shelter to the east women...all the lords are burning in fury, rage and disgust.. even me too..

when raghav showed kalpi the hidden door and whatever raghav said I felt so much pain but I know you will not let the lord to happen anything ...oh raghav speech was so encouraging and lovely😳 loved it...

raghav was mesmerized by his lady wife's beauty...like always😆😆😆...their love, passion, desire seriously sometimes I think can I ever fell in love with your character then I have already fell in love with...

so in the morning the horn rang indicating the war is going to start soon.. waiting for the war to began and the jerk's head on spike by the lords of north...

so here I finish...update soo...waiting for the next one..

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

Hawww Vids sometimes u miss ur meals also to write updates 😲 very bad Whr s ur hammer I need it 😡 😛

Originally posted by: rani214

Wonderful update

Temple scene was touching ...how she explained significance of sindoor n dat its only his rit to fill her partition wit holy powder n raghav filling her partition ...awww dat moment was beautiful

Loved d cute convo betwn ragna for Thomas n der teasing ...d gift she got for her lord husband was thoughtful😳

Rags showing kalpi d secret path ,der union b4 war n him kissing her stomach, she trying to b strong for raghav n den der passionate kiss...wow u have beautifully portrayed ragna emotion

raghav his men n south n west warriors r all set for d war ...prem is a dead man

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

Ahahahaha yeah. My mother and father would get on my case about it since I once got very sick a few years back for not eating on time. But it is one of my flaws.😛Once I am doing something which interests me then I don't like to interrupt the flow. And if I am writing an update and it is flowing how I want it to I don't like to step away from the computer then.😛

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Heyyllooo VI!!! 😉🤗

this what happens once my clg strts, where they ll give a loads of works to do!! for which i came late now😛

But ur updates are stressbuster for me..😳 An awesome update again!! 😳

Strting with the devil.. he is such a 🤬, when arjun said his men aren't ready for the war, he (prem🤢) speaks about his father's bravery but not abt his!! So this means clearly that he's a coward or he hasn't done anything brave to give a reason for others to fight!! 😡

And VI.. one more thing I like in ur stories is.. when u mention about a thing.. (like in this construction of a holy place for kalpi, which was mentioned before) u never forget to display it to ur readers!! Even in "the twisting kaleidoscope" u mentioned abt kalpi buyng vest jeans to wear for raghav😆.. u did mention that scene, though it was at last!! 😛 and this worship place.. wow.. it was madeup of glass with full of flowers blossoming around!! How peaceful it would be!! and raghav's ignorance at this scene was soo cute!!😉😳

Another interesting thing abt rammy(raghav+Sammy😆).. their friendship strtd even before they knew each other!!😲😃 they are like soul mates in friendship!!⭐️ and not only him.. even with other realm's lords.. they do share a close bond, which was shown by their teasing sessions with each other!!😳

Now the northern men are ready for the war!!😈😃 but still raghav is not ready to lose any of them, though prem's men are clearly outnumbered!! Not only though he knows he can defeat his well.. he isn't ready to take any risk and showed a secret pathway to the forest for kalpi.. that scene was pretty scary!! But his actions are totally justified.. and his encouraging words to keep his strong even in a mental way and his prayer for his fallen was too good read.. indeed he is perfect warrior!!⭐️⭐️ I jus hope prem hasn't done any "cunning" plan to beat raghav!! 😡 🤢

Yet in this situation, u gave us a cute.. nahh..hot romantic scene for us❤️ I njyd reading it!!😳😆

Finally!!! The war is gonna begin!! As the enemies have arrived too!😆 Im waitng for the scene, where raghav will kill that 🤬 prem brutally!!! 😈 (im becumng violent 😆)

VI.. i knw i was already late.. but i missed today's chappy..😒

plsss dear.. do update soon na.. 😳

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

Ohhh Vidsss take care darl don't get more stuck with computer eat on time properly it's good fr health 😃 See I myself don't eat on time bt giving u suggestion 😛

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

🤗You eat on time too. It really isn't good for health.🤢

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

Vidsss 🤗 I'll follow u too follow warna I'll take hammer from u 😈 😆