The Lion and the Panther (RagNa ff) 2nd Thread REMOVED - Page 18

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

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wonderful update😳
Raghav's passion and desire to lost in his wife's warmth and love was amzing. love the way he is gently touching her belly without disturbing her sleep.😊 But, Prem's evilness andhis betrayal is still causing him trouble, his back start paining and not wanted to kalpi wake up he left bed, his concern in that situation is touching, love the way you portrayed raghav's pain and concern at same time.😃 and finnally kalpi wake up feeling his pain though he was not there. Raghav try his best to hide pain but it was not gone unnoticed by kalpi and with care and plead she make him sleep.

Finally, they started their journey to Greyland, at their home giving thanks and bidding adieu to Arsenio. Is Arsenio's wife and Lady Petal of Sera was also from East realm?😕

Ragna reach to greyland at last. But the journey cause so much trouble to Kalpi without proper clothes to cope with weather. Greyland pepole who was waiting for their love ones was get disappointed after noticing army number is decrese coz of Prem😡😡 Kalpi got two new maid was none other than her previous maid's younger sister and they both are proud and desire to serve Kalpi without any negatives thought was am zing. While Kalpi was feeling guilty of their loss with proud to find maid's like Fay and Evy.😊

Love ragna feeding each other soup with concern and care😳 Thomas make me remind Proteus, even Thomas is fond of Kalpi now with ignoring Raghaav's command 😆😆 but love their connection and kalpi's demand for kiss was so sweet😳 😛

Raghav announce Prem's betrayal and loss of their warriors in that situation to his people, while all the people stand for Raghav with great respect was so overwhelmed, and after receiveing this cruel news, also they celebrated news of Heir's arriving with same or more enthusiastically 😃😃

"The North will give him a fitting welcome." waiting for this moment 😎

Fabulous update Vidya 👏😳

Originally posted by: priya_remix

I am simply speechless~!!!!!!

I am giving up writing!!!! LOL! I just realised I cant bloody write!!!!!

Vidyaaa ye tune kya kiyaaa? Awesome awesome awesome and some more awesomeness from you!

Could there be a perfecter Raghav? Or a more lovliest Kalpi?

Superb!!! The discussion of swords and Kalpi's misunderstanding made me ROFL!!!

Raghav is really being too tough on himself!

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

RagNa dose is increasing with each passing update 😃 in i'm getting more n mre greedy for them know

there love hayee i just fell in love with the way the love each other 😳

Raghav true warrior even in pain he did not want to sleep and was alert if prem will attack kalpi only she can handle him 😃😃

the way he took care for her on reaching was so sweet

the addressed people concern and stated them facts 👏 even in their pain they are genuinely happy for the heir of their Lord and Lady 😃 wonderful

awesome update 😃😃

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

Thanks Suku!!!😃Glad you enjoyed the update. Yes Prem will come to the war in the North. He has no choice.😆And Pakhya did come with Raghav to the North. It was indicated in this line.

"Quickly, Raghav dismounted his horse and lifted Kalpana off the saddle before he cradled her close and protectively in his arms- "Samar!"- he shouted at his friend who had come to stop a few feet behind him, Pakhya next to him-"

Originally posted by: gargdia

Wonderful update deary
what a update:*
ragna back home...i'm falling in love with this raghav more day by day...
Please update nxt chapter...will give u a long comment for both chapter PROMISE..i didn't read it till now...update soon...

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

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Heyyllooo VI!! 😉

Wait wait.. u lied to us..?😲 and updated soon.. not fair.. 😒 now even im gonna get a hammer for myself to scare u and defend myself..😈😆 but thank god I checked the forum early today!!😆

Wow.. again a ragnalicious update.. filled with love.. romance.. and concern.. 😳 it's awesome!! Aww.. I really love the way u show their love and concern towards each other!! 😃 (I know I've said this one a no. of times before😛) they are so connected to each other in every way.. they can feel each other's love and pain..(sometimes i do wonder, did u experience these feelngs before/now😛) lyk kalpi felt his pain and made him agree to rest, for which he was protesting for their safety.. and he was apologizing his "lion cub" for making his lady wife awake.. so cute yaar..😳

And arsenio.. yet again u gave a glimpse of hatred, but there's a reason for it!! And we gotta a new character here.. dimitri.. for which arsenio is more annoyed cuz his love!! I jus hope he ll realize that ragna's love is true and strong.. 😳

Finally the lord and lady reached their home.. and u showed that very well.. where they found comfort in their home, in each other arms.. I loved that scene..❤️ and the sisters of fay and ivy are indeed honest!! Here comes Thomas!! Aww I missed him from past few updates!!😆😆 I really love the way when raghav gets annoyed of Thomas or proteus who likes kalpi more than him..😛

And VI.. I really liked the response of northern ppl to towards their lord and the lady!!!⭐️ and they were expressing they are grateful for that and are ready to sacrifice their lives for them!! I soo liked that scene.. 😉 not only that they were even encouraging the lord to kill that idiot prem!! Now im even more excited for the war!!!😃

thaaank u so much VI..🤗 Waiting for the next chappy!!😃😳

Glad you liked it Vy! 😃 And Dimitri. 😆 I always loved the name even more so when I saw the animated movie Anatasia. 😳 So I needed to slip in that name in my story of course. 😆 Raghav just wanted some privacy with his wife so got annoyed when Thomas interrupted. lol That didn't stop their kissing session though. Poor Thomas probably wanted to pounce on them for interrupting his sleep. 😛

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

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So u updated aftr we gone to bed 😡 but ur surprise made my day bcx I read it after I woke up 😳 girl ur making me more in love with this story than ever!!come here I wanna hug u first 🤗 love you fr this update Vidsss!!!

Ragna romance felt each n every word!!! His love fr her s amazing!! He can't take his eyes off his wife who's sleeping peacefully after their love making 😳 Aww he's jealous of moonlight that s touching her scene n he couldn't 😛 well he couldn't control himself n slowly kept his hand on her belly n feeling her scent!! I loved these lines a satisfied smile graced his lips that his own scent s intermingled with hers,,,the fact that her body bore the indications that he had claimed her,touched her n caressed her 😳 These lines are something new which I heard fr the frst tym...The meaning added more beauty to their romance 😃 Raghav back started paining n he's unable to bear 😭 it's bcx f that Prem he can't even take rest as he has to b awake 😡 He went to have his wine but the pain is increasing n he don't want to wake his wife!! Howevr kalpi got up n she saw her husband near the window n she understood that he's hiding his pain as she reminded of the healer words that this night gng to b unbearable 😭 Kalpi told him not to his pain n comforting him!! She laid his head on her chest n requesting him to sleep as he needed it the most now 😊 n he agreed to not disappoint his wife... n slowly both of them drifted to slp!!

So Arsenio is going back to his place to come back to north with his army 😃 n Raghav thanking him again!!! Arsenio looking at Kalpi n telling him that Eastern women bring any man to his knees n his comment fr Raghav that this cold Northern Lord also surrendered 😆 Aww lovely moment!!

Finally they reached their home!!!people are waiting fr their men to return but they are disappointed as less men were there #sad N Kalpi s shivering due to the cold weather n her husband s worrying fr her safety!! So he told the meeting would b tmrw n took her to the palace ordering two maid servants fr lady grimmir!! They are happy n content that they reached their home aftr long days 😃 Aww Rose n Evy r sister's of Fay n Ivy ...Kalpi s feeling bad that bcx f her their sister's had sacrificed their lives n they are telling that lucky to have them as it's there duty to save their Lord n lady 👏 Kalpi n Raghav dresed up n Raghav feeding her soup n she too fed him aww such a cute scene 😳

Suddenly the door opened n Thomas entered Ohhh how I missed him 😭 I sooo love him 😳 Raghav stern expression telling him to leave n kalpi allowed him to sleep there as they missed each other alot n raghv Lol is he jealous 😆 how sternly he's telling to move off from his wife 😛

Kalpi asking him to kiss 😳 n he gave in to her well how can he miss the chance 😛 both felt content in each others arms n slept peacefully!! !

The people assembled to the meeting n he said everything wat has happened as it's their right to know! N he told about how thy are cheated n about prem trying to kil him n rape his wife which made the people furious n they shouted to put prem head on spike n Raghav apologizing their people that bcx f him they died n their people supported him that they are going to b with him in this WAR!! N he announced that The NORTH will have a HEIR n people were so happy forgetting their sadness 😃 n his last sentence The North will give him a fitting welcome 👍🏼

Thnqqq fr this wonderful update now waiting fr Prem death 😡 😃 He should not die easily has to suffer alot 😡
Uff Hope u enjoyed my comment oops essay 😆 😉