Ragna ff: 'Quest of love' chapter 6 updated pg-33

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Swara

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice cs dear

Update prologue soon

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Nice CS

update prologue

i like the title 'humdard'

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Oh ! Buddies.

Pls suggest tittle guys from the list given below CS..

M so confused, pls naa help me

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Heyyllooo sana!
Just read the CS and indeed it was interesting and a lovely one!😉😳
Im lookng forward fr d story!

And abt the title.. I found "quest of love" as one interesting one! 😳
LOL!

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Originally posted by: vyshuu..
Heyyllooo sana!
Just read the CS and indeed it was interesting and a lovely one!😉😳
Im lookng forward fr d story!

And abt the title.. I found "quest of love" as one interesting one! 😳
LOL!

Thanks visuu darling.

LOL..i know dear u love me.hehehe

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vyshuu..

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Originally posted by: sana4Zz

Thanks visuu darling.
LOL..i know dear u love me.hehehe

😆 😆

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Originally posted by: vyshuu..

😆 😆

Very funny.😡

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Originally posted by: sana4Zz

Very funny.😡

Arey.. kuch nahi baba.. 😛
I agree with wat u said. 😳
Aab jaldi se title decide kar aur story bhi update karo.. 😉

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Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Arey.. kuch nahi baba.. 😛
I agree with wat u said. 😳
Aab jaldi se title decide kar aur story bhi update karo.. 😉

Chalo di mafi..

Ohk boss..

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SsaNaZz90

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Prologue

The scene start from a beautiful girl with ocean eyed exploring the views of nature, she try to speak with them, she loved to spend some times with this nature..

She took out her mobile and started recording the chirping sound of birds while a smile spread on her cute face which made her more beauriful...

While returning, she heard a low voice of something..she chased that sound and found a person facing his and tried to shared his pain with this nature..she felt so connected to that voice as she knew fr eternity..the voice contained lots of pain which pierced her heart as the pain belonged to her only...automatically she moved toward that voice snd tried to heard the person selftalk...

Person( self talk)- oh! God ..' Why are you giving this much punishment to me, i cant hold it any more".

Why is my life full of pain only, i have no right to live happily..

I love her to the core of my heart, " is this my mistake'..

I full filled all her desires," is this also my mistake"..

I only showed her love and care, is this the punishment you are giving for loving someone whole heartly...

What i found in returned that " the girl i loved slept with my biggest enemy for sake of revenge and money...

I never touched without her per permission..i always loyal to her, " is this my bad destiny that i stand lonely here"...

"Why why me only", he roared...

The tears were rolling down from his eyes while talking...

Both were crying..

Boy was crying for his cursed destiny and girl wad crying as she felt his pain...

The boy wiped his tears And said" i hate the feeling of love now" ..thete id no place for love in my life...only loneliness is my destiny and i have to live with that and he left toward his world which is full of dark only...

But the girl frozen on her track..In her entired life she never felt so connected to any stranger...she only wanted to run and hug him tightly and day i am with you , your every pain is mine now ...hHis painful voice ringing in her ears all the time and today her tears also betrayed her because they are flowing down continously...

She said in mind " i will erase all his pain from the life and make his life only full of happinesd, i will bring him from his darkness world to the world which full of light only, with this determination she wiped her tears and moves to achieve her goal...

I know i am not a gud wriyter, this only a trial..pls bear me buddies...sry for spelling and grammerd mistake and pls hit likes button and make a comment , it will only courage to write...thanks and lots of love...

Edited by sana4Zz - 10 years ago

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