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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ch- 6

Raghav and sammy got to know that once again kalpana show pakhi her actual place as they were not present that time in the college...

S: omg!!! She is dangerous package behind the beautiful girl..
A smile spread on raghav lips after listing sammy tone..
S: why are u smiling!????.. I am 100% sure she is more dangerous to jhasi ki rani...
R: hmhmmm...let' go..

I think my fren gone crazy in praise of that "jhasi ki rani"...

R: u said something!!!??
S: nothing yaar,!! Let's go...

If he got to know what am i thinking, he would bury me alive right here.." Thought sammy"...


Next day all student are very exited their dehradun college tour...

All students have their seat except kalpi, raghav, sammy, reet, pakhi and vishal...
As usual sammy sit with reet..pakhi wanted to sit beside raghav but sammy as a gud frend made raghav to sit beside kalpana.. At last , no option left , she had to sit with vishal...

Thank god!! For saving me from that" DYNAMITE" otherwise she will drink me like a soup., " said vishal in low tone as no one can here"...

Some students were playing antakshari, some were busy in their ipod but kalpana and raghav stealing glances of each other which is not unnoticed by sammy and reet...


Finally they reached their destination...
You have to make ur own camp made anouncement bt teachers and students began to making their respective camp...

After dinner all students sat down around to the camp fire and they decided to play " TRUTH AND DARE"...

Pakhi spinned the bottle and it's stopped in front of vishal...
Pakhi : truth or dare..
Vishal: truth
Pakhi: who will going to ask ques from vishal..

I will ask , said sammy...
Sammy: have you severly beaten by any girl ????...

Vishal was completely dumbfound at sammy ques...he don' t know what to say or what to not say...

Vishal: no actually i want dare...
Sammy: are u sure ???
Vishal: yes!
But reet stopped as soon as sammy began to ask..

Reet: i will give him dare...
Samny : of course...
Reet: you are going to perform a dance on song of " SHEILA KI JAWANI"

All girls and boys started laughing...
" As you sow, so shall you reap" , thought reet...

All student continously laughing on the performance of vishal( just imagine the new version of sheila ki jawanii)...

Pakhi again spinned the bottle and it stoppef in front of raghav...
Pakhi: truth or dare..
Raghav: dare
All girls started hooting... .

Pakhi: you will sing a song...
Raghav: i can' t,,.".he shrugged"...
Sammy who is sitting next to raghav whispered dude! It is the best occasion to show ur love to ur " DIL KI MALLIKA" ...
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Someone held the guitar to raghav and he first closed his eyes and captured thr image of beautiful eyes of his beloved " cherry" and said in his mind" l love u cherry, my cherry" ...

Suddenly kalpi heart beat became fast as his chinku is calling her...

Raghav started singing...

Tu mujhe soch kabhi , yahi chaahat hai meri..
(May you think of me sometimes, that' s my wish)

Main tujhe jaan kahu, yehi hasrat hai meri..
(Calling you as my life, that' s my wish)

Main tere pyar ka armaan liye baitha hu..
( i' m sitting here, with wish for ur love)

Tu kisi aur ko chaahe, kabhi yeh khuda naa kare..
(U ate longing for someone else, may god never do that to you)...


Meri mahroom mohabbat ka sahaara hai tu..
( U are the support to my kind love)

Mai jo jeete hoon, to jeene ka ishara hai tu..
(I live, but you are the readon for living)

Apne dil pe tera ehsaan liye baitha hoon...
( i' m sitting here, with wishes of ur kindness towards my heart)

Mai tere pyar ka armaan liye baitha hu...
( i' m sittinh here with wishes for ur love)

Tu kisi aur ko chaahe , kabhi khuda naa kare...
( U r longing for somone else, may god never do that)...


Say u love me baby..i have been waiting for you, say you love me baby...

Pyar me shart koi ho to bata de mujhe..
( if there is a condition for loving, then tell me so)

Gar khata mujhse huyi ho to bata de mujhe..
( if ever made an error towards you, then tell me so)

Jaan hatheli pe meri jaan liye baitha hu..
( i ' m sitting here, holding my life to you)

Mai tere pyar...

$$(song from movie zindagi tere naam)$$

All the students stunned of singing talent of raghav..all are rooted their spot as he done some spellef while kalpi eyes stuck on raghav and so as raghav...

At night in camp

Raghav sweet voice was still eching in her ears...
Why i felt that his voice familiar to me as this is my identity... Oh god what shoul i do, help me pls,.." Thought kalpi

Raghav found himself lost in her beautiful eyrs" why i felt it' s like her eyes are searching for someone", there are so many questions i her eyes,"thought raghav...

Raghav and kalpi lost in their thoughts as they don' t know " what ' s destiny hold for them but i will definetly sure next morning one of them life is going to change...

Precap: Raghav get to know about his"CHERRY"...


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Edited by ayanshisharma12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Awesome update
All r gesture to deharadun...Wow sammy is true friend. ...Ragna site beside eachother. ...n vishal say kalpi is dynamite😆 poor guy puri tarah se fus gaya😆😆...Sammy ne kaya questions pucha. ..bolti band vishal ki👏😆...
Reet n Sammy observed ragna eye contact😉...Wow donge was nice. ...raghav sing 4 his cherry. .n kalpi felt that this is 4 her. ..so lovely ...😳...heart to heart tolk. ...
Kalpi felt his voice she know...n raghav felt her eye he know...
So beautiful update. ...
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Awesome update ayu
God it was so fun visjal haha
Hmm rag missing cherry
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
awesome updatee
sammy is a true frnd made ragna sit together
kalpi is dynamite for vishal
bechare vishal fas gaye truth le kay but what a dare hahah
raghav sing a song for his cherry aww
kalpi thought raghav voice is familiar aww heart to heart connection
tottally loved the updatee
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: switymango


Awesome update
All r gesture to deharadun...Wow sammy is true friend. ...Ragna site beside eachother. ...n vishal say kalpi is dynamite😆 poor guy puri tarah se fus gaya😆😆...Sammy ne kaya questions pucha. ..bolti band vishal ki👏😆...
Reet n Sammy observed ragna eye contact😉...Wow donge was nice. ...raghav sing 4 his cherry. .n kalpi felt that this is 4 her. ..so lovely ...😳...heart to heart tolk. ...
Kalpi felt his voice she know...n raghav felt her eye he know...
So beautiful update. ...
Update soon next part


Thanks dear...hpy that u like it
.may i know ur name dear???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update ayu

God it was so fun visjal haha
Hmm rag missing cherry
Update soon


Hii airaa dear, thanks for liking...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan

awesome updatee

sammy is a true frnd made ragna sit together
kalpi is dynamite for vishal
bechare vishal fas gaye truth le kay but what a dare hahah
raghav sing a song for his cherry aww
kalpi thought raghav voice is familiar aww heart to heart connection
tottally loved the updatee


Yes for vishal kalpi is dynamite ...
Thankd ayesha dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ch-7
Next morning bring new excitement as all students going to explore views of dehradun...all day they really enjoyed...

@at night@
Chit chat were going on, suddenly reet noticed that kalpi' s bracelet was not on her wrist, as she know that bracelet contain lots of memoreis of her chinku if she found missing , she will definetly panic...so she asked very softly ...
R: kalpu ! Where is ur bracelet dear????..
K: oh! Ho reet..' See' (pointing towards her wrist)..
But when kalpi saw that her bracelet is missing .. She panicked and started trembling due fear of loosing her chinku last posseesion ...

K: not..t..t again reet..t..t and tears started rolling down from her eyes...she hug reet tightly and her sobbing heard by every one ears...

Reet and all very well know that how is kalpi heartly attached withbracelet...

All were feeling bad for kalpi but raghav could felt her pain in his heart as someone scetched hus heart brutualy..he wanted to run to her and hug her tightly..he wanted to consoled her but he has no right on her..they are not sharing any visual bonding but just a simple frenshp so he pointed towards sammy through his eyes and sammy understud his fren unsaid words and sammy moved towards kalpi and try to consoled her as like reet...

Reet softly stroking her hair and said relax !! Kalpu we will all search ur bracelet and all students said the same...

All students were sad for kalpi but some evil faces seemed to be happy and which was not unnoticed by raghav as he recognized their evil smile behind their fake concerned...

Some students went to different direction in search of bracelet while raghav keep a check on pakhi and vishal' grup , he smelled something fishy...

Meantime pakhi excused herself and raghav followed her silently...at far distance pakhi stopped and turn to check if someone seeing her and at the same raghav hidden himself behind tree...

Pakhi take out something from her pocket and said now i am going to take my revenge by throwingvthis bracelet from this hill and you will die every day in the memories of this bracelet and started laughing loudly and raghav stunned by her evilness and felt disgusted ...

Suddenly dhe heard raghav voice and hide bracelet again in her pocket...
R: what ate u hiding pakhi????
P: nothing raghav, it' s nothing special...
R: i thought u like me but you proved me wrong today...
P: what r u saying raghav??? Why are u thinking so????
P: if we like someone then there is no secret between them but...
P: no!!! No raghav,, u take in wrong sence..i love u, it's only a bracelet nothing else...
R: whoz bracelet???
P: kalpana ' s bracelet...
R: that kalpana!! I dont like her ..show me that bracelet...( pakhi became happy after listening raghav dont like kalpana)
P: seriously !! U dont like her????
R: yeah!! Infact in whole hill era college , you are the most intelligent and beautiful girl...
Now pakhi reached on nine cloud...

P: o! Raghav i love you...
She gave the bracelet tobraghav and duevto excitmentvshe hug raghav tightly but raghav jerked her away and pakhi first shocked but composed herself and asked what happened sweetheart...
R: just shut up!! Stop ur nonsense crap...U..u..u .." Heartless creature" ...i already knew that you are heartless girl but today you stoop so low that you snatched kalpi happiness which is her life , her bracelet...shame on you!!! ...

P: but you said , you dont like her and you love me...
Raghav start laughing and said, U know ! What pakhi???.. U are most dumb person i have ever seen..how could you think, mighty raghav singhania will ever like you,,... Infact i hate to touch ur shadow and love forget it abt...

Pakhi was completly dumbfound ...
She raised her hand to slap raghav but raghav held her hand in a mid and gave her tight slap on her face and she fell down...
Raghav said , dont ever try to do the same mistake again otherwise i will ruin ur life without thinking...

Pakhi started laughing like a mad and raghav was confused by change in her behavior...
Pakhi said, before ruining my life, go and save ur precious kalpana malhotra...go mighty raghav singhania and save ur kalpana and again started laughing...
If s single cut on het body then ready for ur destruction miss kapoor by fuming he left in search of kalpna...
After raghav left she fell down on her knee and started crying bitterly and and saud you have to pay deed and a evil smile spread by rememering her and vishal plan...

( flashback)
P: i have a plan but you have to help in that..
V: but if it related to that dynamite kalpana then i am not going to involve in this plan..she will make me roasted chicken..
P: shut up! U useless fellow..i have a superb plan and i kniw her weakness .she will not do anything and u can also take ur revenge...right.
V: okay now tell me ur plan...
P: her weakness is her bracelet...that bracelet is her life, she will become paralyse withuot that bracelet...
V : so now i can take my revenge and today i able to taste that chilly...
( flashback end)
But you raghav singhania failed my plan but how will you able to save kalpana from vishal and his gang...and she wiped her tear and smile evily...

I know my frenz i' m not able to potrait the character's emotions very well but i tried my best so pls bear it and pls give ur comment ans u can also give me suggestion regarding my story .ur most welcum...thsnks...
Edited by ayanshisharma12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Raghav slapping Pakhi was awesome
I like that he got Kalpi bracelet back
This Vishal is disgusting just like his plan
Awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachufan

Awesome update dea 👏

Thanks rachu dear...i glad that u like it...

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