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Posted: 10 years ago
wow vidya awesome update..
Raghav is so caring.he think about kalpi' s happiness and made garden for her also temple
finally he saw her..and she saw his eyes..
and they kiss...there first kiss..i like it so much..
now waiting for next what???
Plz update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow vidhya
awsm dear!!! 👏
truly i'm speechles...d effort raghav made for kalpi to make her cmfortbl in greyland left me spellbound... 😳
when raghav was approchng to kalpi to see her my heart was beatng rapidly,what wil be hpn what wil be their reactn and then
you did your magic again...
Ragna kiss...their first kiss...😳
lovely update dear..
Can't wait nw...as d story are growing i'm falling in lv with it...actualy i alrdy fall in lv wid it.cntinue soon darling 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Ragav is so caring
finally ragav saw kalpi😊
update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Vidya, forgive me for much delayed comment. I have been unable to be much active on IF, mostly I am a silent reader. I was so-so glad when I had seen your post about starting a new FF. 😃 So, this story is partly inspired from Game of Thrones; I have heard a lot about that show and once I had tried watching it too. But as I haven't' seen it from starting, couldn't understand much.

Coming to this FF, this is the best and one of the most addictive stories in IF these days. 😃 I check IF everyday to see if you have posted a new chapter. 😳

So Kalpana has the blood of warriors/noble blood. At present she doesn't remember her powers, but I gather as the story progresses she'll need to use those powers? Loving Raghav of this story. perfect husband and so caring. Prem is creepy and scary, hope because of him no trouble brews between Ragna. Raghav and Prem are friends, how will Kalpi tell Raghav about Prem, in such circumstances?

The way you showed slow realisation, awareness in Kalpana about Raghav's warmth and care; his nobility is awesome. Their slowly growing bond, attachment and love is so cute to read and I look forward to read about it more and more. Kalpana has come to admire, respect and care for her Lord Husband. So much so that she is now comfortable with Raghav's touch and even touches his face, him when she feels so. The practise scene was awesome when Raghav realises with Kalpana's gasp that she is standing in the balcony; and then when Kalpi admits that she cannot see Raghav hurt. 😳 😃 Also, I suppose the special North trees will surely be having more role in future track(s).

The latest eighth chapter is my favourite, I was so looking forward to read about the moment when Raghav's eyes are free of bandages and he sees his beautiful wife for the first time. The whole scene was awesome, and once Raghav had one look at his gorgeous wife, he was completely bewitched by her. 😃 He couldn't resist but kiss her and even she gave in. Beautiful double kiss.

Loved RagNa moments a lot and now looking forward to read how they consummate their marriage. One question, this is for my imagination purpose. Have you changed Raghav's eye colour in this FF? I have pictured them more on black side, I was trying to imagine how would he look in grey eyes. 😃

Once again, thanks a lot for this wonderful FF. It is so good to see you back on IF. 😃 🤗 ❤️


Wow Charu! Loving the long comments! 😃 And yes when I say it was inspired from Game of thrones I just meant the physical setting with the Lords, ladies, knights and royalty. If you ever watched Game of thrones you would notice how dark it is. The romance isn't much either. It's mostly war and killing in that show lol.

As for Raghav, yeah, I did change his appearance a bit. I gave him copper brown hair and beard and striking grey eyes ( like Kalpi noticed :P ) The reason being that I wanted certain physical attributes to be peculiar to the different realms ( the realms being the North South east and west. ) So the people from the East will have a variation of brown skin and brown eyes, the northerners are really fair and their eye colours can vary from, blue, grey and green. The westerners tend to have a variation of blond hair and those from the south mostly have red hair. The northerners also speak with a Yorkshire British accent. So Raghav's accent will be deep Yorkshire British accent whereas Kalpi's accent will have that nice Indian hint to it. Hope that makes the picture clearer 😊

AND THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS EVERYONE. GLAD YOU ALL ENJOYED THE CHAPTER. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maybe its too early to ask.. bt wen can I expect my next doze..?😳😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Maybe its too early to ask.. bt wen can I expect my next doze..?😳😛


I don't know if I will be updating today since I am not feeling well. I will try to but no promises.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim



I don't know if I will be updating today since I am not feeling well. I will try to but no promises.



Its okay dear..
Health comes first.. take care 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am Spellbound totally !!!!! Vidya you are a raconteur par excellence . 👏 Each and every nuance of the slow but steady progression towards love and passion in the story is so alive and bewitching that one actually feels the love story that is about to happen !!!!! Raghav is the epitome of an honourable Husband as well as The Lord of his realm while Kalpana is slowly emerging as a sensitive caring young girl on the brink of love and complete womanhood . Voila !!! 😆 And by the way my team is Arsenal !!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update. ..
Finally raghav can see. .👏 kalpi is to happy. ...
raghav memories her beauty😳 ragna first kiss😉😳 so romantic. ..
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
More, more, more! I want more! Sorry if i sound like I'm throwing a tantrum, because I am!

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