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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim


Wow Charu! Loving the long comments! 😃 And yes when I say it was inspired from Game of thrones I just meant the physical setting with the Lords, ladies, knights and royalty. If you ever watched Game of thrones you would notice how dark it is. The romance isn't much either. It's mostly war and killing in that show lol.

As for Raghav, yeah, I did change his appearance a bit. I gave him copper brown hair and beard and striking grey eyes ( like Kalpi noticed :P ) The reason being that I wanted certain physical attributes to be peculiar to the different realms ( the realms being the North South east and west. ) So the people from the East will have a variation of brown skin and brown eyes, the northerners are really fair and their eye colours can vary from, blue, grey and green. The westerners tend to have a variation of blond hair and those from the south mostly have red hair. The northerners also speak with a Yorkshire British accent. So Raghav's accent will be deep Yorkshire British accent whereas Kalpi's accent will have that nice Indian hint to it. Hope that makes the picture clearer 😊

AND THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS EVERYONE. GLAD YOU ALL ENJOYED THE CHAPTER. ❤️


Okay, thanks a lot for making the picture clear. 😃 Get well soon. 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
How r u feeling now dear hope u ok plzz get well soon n update soon this story plzz...get well soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ..so romantic vidya get well soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Peeka boo bee who do u see... Perks boo bee I see me 😉 😆 back on top and still kick ass 😉 😆 so the lord has fallen for his lady and lady has fallen For her lord. So now will the fur under wear come off? 😉 😆 very romantic update with the first snowfall rags says his first I love u but now the black wolf is there so will he save his lady and get out unscathed waiting eagerly and totally anxiously for next part.
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bewakoof...has a new meaning now...which means flowers ...says lady grimmir...😆
Lord Raghav ...knows she is fibbing ...and he plays along ...he has to punish her now cuz she lied ..
Punishment ...being ..she has to kiss him ...and that to a proper kiss ...
Lord Raghav ...was not impressed ...cuz they were interrupted by a guard ...
But ..it was urgent matter so he says his bye to his lady and takes his leave ...Vagabonds ...are
in their lands ...and disturbing his people ...And its his duty to protect them ...
Victory ...was his ...and he returns back to his lady ...since it was wee hours in the morning he just wanted to see her glorious face before turning in ,..she was not in her chambers but in his ...he
discovered and went to see her...he knew she would freeze in his chambers ...but she told him that this by being there she could feel his presence ...Awww ...cute lady kalpana...
She fed him soup ..and had their talk ...and the first summer snow seemed beautiful ...
The took her to a .enchanting place ..to the snowy openings ...and confessed ...how he has lost his heart to her and ,.body and soul he belongs to her totally...Awww ..
But seeing fear in his eyes ...Kalpi ...senses danger ...and danger it was cuz a hungry werewolf was
aiming all his attention to her ...for it's prey...😲
what is happening ?
Will Raghav ..save her from that hungry wolf..successfully ?
Would kalpana ..have her powers back and burn it ..through her eyes?

Fantastic ..update
Thank you

Edited by Vsapras - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Another mind blowing update. How romantic and that confession was so touching 😳. The siggy is fab..I can so visualize Raghav and Kalpana in this backdrop. Waiting anxiously on the next chapter. Update soon 😃 (don't throw your hammer at me 😆)
Edited by Jaz_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Speechless. .. don't have any words to describe that how beautifull this story is. It feels like I was there and witnessed of every single scene. Did you ever try to write for Tv or published any book by chance? ? If not do it. 👏👏
Raghav and kalPana are coming close. O MG she called him bewkoof😆😆...what a lovely punishment she got but intrepid by the guard. Kalpana confessed that she missed him😳😳. Raghav's confession was awesome. Eagerly waiting for next update as " Yeh dil mange more "
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Wow kalpi located d h
Rag miss the kissy
Hmm west attack them
Lovely kalpi waited in rag room missing him
Nice talk between them
Hmm rag confess confess
N a black eyeing kalpi
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's lovely superb update yar so finally Raghav confess his love but last line is fearfully what happened now I know Raghav will save kalpi waiting for next chappy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great lovely update dear...
Raghav and kalpi enjoying their moment in gardn n each other company...
Look like raghav loves teasing kalpi n she too...
Their close proxmity made my heart sing for them bt when he was going to kissed her again, he get a call for a battle...
Poor kalpi,she knws abt battle n all thing,bt nervous abt her man...
Raghav is brave, and a dutiful king towards his people.
Raghav hurried in palace jst 2 see his wife befre he retird to sleep n kalpi get relaxd to find him in frnt of her eyes.
Their cnversatn during supper was lovely.raghav nt felt lonely anymore nw.
Atlast raghav confesd her.bt nxt moment...omg wolf...
I think nw kalpi wil use her power nw.
Lovely dear.
Cntinue soon.
Edited by gargdia - 10 years ago

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