The Lion and the Panther- (Ragna ff) REMOVED - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago
So here was 1st kiss of Lady and Lord of North...
Awesome Update Vidhya... :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww!!!!
Jus read all the parts in one go! And u left me with no words!!! Each n evry update was mind blowngg n soo heart warmingg!!

The way u r developing their bond.. so smoothly yet in a romantic way.. ❤️ it was awesome!!😃 and the way u give a detail of each n evry feelng n their understanding towards each other.. fantastic!!! Im sooo lovng it!!❤️

And their frst kiss.. that too when they saw each other properly.. was perfect!!😉

Waiting fr my next doze!!😉😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vidya dear 🤗 interesting update 👏 ⭐️ rags ki question what's troubles you my lady or kalpi flowers troubles her 😆 😆 rags is so sweet ki kalpi keliye temple or garden. 😊 finally rags can see his beautiful wife.and there first kiss waw vidya you beautifully write that scence ⭐️ eagerly waiting for next update. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
no words to say how much i loved it... mesmerising
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb
u gave surprise to us also...rags eyes r cured now ...his bandage removed & can see everthing...& his lady... 😃
he is really very good husband unlike ema... 😆
& I knew it he gona make garden & temple for kalpi 😕 ...
& ragna kissed...their first kiss...but wheres their long eyelock?????(I really miss them) 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww vidhya 👏 Awesome update!! God u left me in such a way I'm speechless!!!
This was the best update !!Raghav has recovered n he got to see his enchanting beautiful wife!! He himself cannot control her beauty!! Now have to see how he'll able to control further 😳 😆 !!kalpi was so happy n both are drowning in their eyes!! Awww Ragna kiss I never expected wat a surprise u gave me made me swoon 😉 love you sweetheart fr ur amazing updates!! 😃 A big hug n kiss fr you 🤗
Edited by Appuu_AshLover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Till now ...everything ...is fine ..in Northern ..greylands ..
With Lady kalpana ...getting ..acquaint.. with her new home ...
And how excited ..she is ..seeing all those colourful ..flowers .
To inform her lord ..she runs to him in the study...and she does deliver , in excitement and in one breath ...her lord ...has done all this for her ,..he tells her ...for she will surely need flowers for her prayers in her new temple...lady kalpana ...speechless ...for she never thought that her lord would do such a caring husband .and she got told that this is her home now and every wish of hers ...is his
Command...lady Kalpana..thinks That such a honourable ...husband he is ...and their hug was just beautiful ...
Lord Raghav ...got his sight back and ...first thing he wants to see ...is his lady and he looks for her
after searching for her everywhere ..he thought ...to check the garden in the back yard ...and was stunned to see the transformation ...with lots of colourful flowers ...there ...and he looked for his lady ...and finally ...heard her voice ..and went towards her ...what he saw ...he was liking
His lady ..was a beauty ..he observed ...she was petite and ...her hair was beautiful ...and he goes within the reach ...and got some cherries for her ...and ..when his lady turned around he was just mesmerised ..with her beauty and her brown eyes ...my lord you can see ...she says ..And shys away cuz this was the first time he would see her ...she looks into his eyes and was so impressed with his grey eyes ...and even. Tells him that his grey is nicer then her brown eyes ...
Lord Raghav ...couldn't hold himself any more and had to kiss her ...and he did kiss her passionately
So lady grimmir ...should be at ease now cuz he does think she is beautiful ...and he kissed her again ...lovely ...
What now...?? ...honeymoon ?...

Fantabulous ...update ...
Thank you ...
Edited by Vsapras - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful..! the description of his enthusiasm to see her and her happiness to see him fine, her fears about her appearance everything was described beautifully
awesome update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vidya, forgive me for much delayed comment. I have been unable to be much active on IF, mostly I am a silent reader. I was so-so glad when I had seen your post about starting a new FF. 😃 So, this story is partly inspired from Game of Thrones; I have heard a lot about that show and once I had tried watching it too. But as I haven't' seen it from starting, couldn't understand much.
Coming to this FF, this is the best and one of the most addictive stories in IF these days. 😃 I check IF everyday to see if you have posted a new chapter. 😳

So Kalpana has the blood of warriors/noble blood. At present she doesn't remember her powers, but I gather as the story progresses she'll need to use those powers? Loving Raghav of this story. perfect husband and so caring. Prem is creepy and scary, hope because of him no trouble brews between Ragna. Raghav and Prem are friends, how will Kalpi tell Raghav about Prem, in such circumstances?

The way you showed slow realisation, awareness in Kalpana about Raghav's warmth and care; his nobility is awesome. Their slowly growing bond, attachment and love is so cute to read and I look forward to read about it more and more. Kalpana has come to admire, respect and care for her Lord Husband. So much so that she is now comfortable with Raghav's touch and even touches his face, him when she feels so. The practise scene was awesome when Raghav realises with Kalpana's gasp that she is standing in the balcony; and then when Kalpi admits that she cannot see Raghav hurt. 😳 😃 Also, I suppose the special North trees will surely be having more role in future track(s).

The latest eighth chapter is my favourite, I was so looking forward to read about the moment when Raghav's eyes are free of bandages and he sees his beautiful wife for the first time. The whole scene was awesome, and once Raghav had one look at his gorgeous wife, he was completely bewitched by her. 😃 He couldn't resist but kiss her and even she gave in. Beautiful double kiss.

Loved RagNa moments a lot and now looking forward to read how they consummate their marriage. One question, this is for my imagination purpose. Have you changed Raghav's eye colour in this FF? I have pictured them more on black side, I was trying to imagine how would he look in grey eyes. 😃

Once again, thanks a lot for this wonderful FF. It is so good to see you back on IF. 😃 🤗 ❤️

Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jadu hai nasha hai is FF se bach ke jaye kaha
dundti hai daily new chappy is beautiful journey se bachke jaye kaha

Most beautiful chappy wow when raghav first saw his wife kalpi ' happiness u describe it most most most beautiful way their first hug kiss i love it. Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very IMPATIENTLY UPDATE NEXT CHAPPY SOON

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