The Lion and the Panther- (Ragna ff) REMOVED

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

WOW! WOW! WOW! that says all !!!! I am 'wordless' to describe your superb update and how much I appreciate it ! That is a real MAN ! Honourable , trustworthy and caring unlike 90% of men of the present times ! GOD has lost such 'moulds ' with the past ! Thanks for a 'dream-like' story !!!

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Katty

@Cute_Kate

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Lovrd the whole Update.

So.finally Ice is indeed breaking and trust is being developed. Interesting.

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aparna

@Appuu_AshLover

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Outstanding update!!! Loved the indirect conversation between kalpi n Raghav in the pretence f talking to Thomas 😆
So they reached to the realms f north n kalpi cannot bear this cold!! It's really cute scene Raghav s taking care f her trying to help her!! Slowly they r understanding each other n loved the moment whr He said to sleep close To Him so that she'll feel warm!! 😳 The cold was breaking the ice between these two!!! The plot f the still s very interesting!! Looking forward to read more 😃 😃

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Frozenfantasy

@Frozenfantasy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Confusion...leads to determination ...

Lady..kalpana...with a look of askance...searches for her lord...

Cleaning .that bloody sword he was...and sensed that he had company...

Disturbed ..lady asks her lord for ...apt explanation ...why no mercy?...

What was the purpose ...to behead the prisoner...

Lord Raghav ...admired her courage ...and cleared ...the confusion...aptly ..

Had the prisoner been set free ...he would repeat this crime again and again ..and ruthlessly

murder them...and beheading him was the only way to stop all ..mishap...

Was the lady ..satisfied ...with her lords statement .?...well she should now..

Acknowledge...yourself ..as Lady of northern realm...and as my wife he tells her ...

Communication ...through Thomas was delightful ...and they both are so stubborn ...

And now...they are getting near ..to their destination ...cuz it's freezing cold ..approaching North ..

Lady kalpana ...is not used to cold weather ,.lord Raghav ..is accustomed to it ,.

A caring lord ..senses his wife's condition ...and ...tends to her ...providing warmth ..

Why..is his hands so warm she wonders ? ...

Grateful ,..Lady...thanks her lordship ...and retires for the night ..and The Lord follows..

Despite ..whole lot of blankets ..kalpana ..is still ..restless with shiver..

Inviting ..her to move closer to him ..so she could get warm with his body heat ..and so she did

Sleeping ..in her lords arms ...was a wise decision ..my Lady...

Finding ,.solace..in that warm arms...she is at ease...

In conclusion ...I'd say ...the defrosting ...has begun..and ice..will ..surely ...melt...

Superb..update..sweetie

Thank you...🤗

Edited by Vsapras - 10 years ago

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

I like that Kalpi find the courage in her to question Raghav regarding his action for killing that bas***d
Raghav trying his best not to be harsh with his words while explaining his actions was awesome
RagNa talking indirectly to each other using poor Thomas is so cute
I love that Raghav is so concern for Kalpi comfort regarding the climate change and all
RagNa finally speaking to each other and sharing their thoughts on the situation was amazing
They actually are making progress in understanding each other
Fabulous update and as usual wonderfully written

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

awesome update...
ice wall breaking btwn ragna in cold weather... 😃
update soon...

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Antara

@rachufan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Great update i have no words to describe ur talent u r amazind u poured each and every emotion with most beautiful way like kalpi ' s anger fear, raghav's anger his care all re awesome.
most amazing part of ur story is u give us regular updates, which grew our interest
o more n more thanku so much give us such a beautiful story with daily dose. Impatiently waiting for next update

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riaka

@riaka

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Once again you showed your magic. No doubt you are super amazing writer. You described each scene with so much details it's seems like I'm watching the show. Slowly they are coming close. Raghav taking care of her wife . Finally they spoke and she started trusting him. Please continue soon