SS : A million miles away !! Chap 5, 6 & 7 - Pg 52 14/10 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Hailaa!
Mariee is back with a story😉 I should be careful not to be late fr it😆
Oohhh.. u totally changed rags char and makng it in a quite intrestng way.. 😉 dat was good
And rammy.. dey are always a perfect jodi😆 (nly friends😛) and dat mini speech was hilarious😆
Readng this chappy, it reminds me of a telugu film😛
Lookng fr d next doze😳

telugu film eh film nithin ah lachama song came 1st in my mind 😆 after reading this update 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

telugu film eh film nithin ah lachama song came 1st in my mind😆after reading this update😛



😆😆
Kadhu.. raam di, endhukante premanta😛 kakapothe akada vala dad blackmail chesthadu kadha.. so😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Hi mature darling.awesome update 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mariee sorry mature nahi 😭 mariee type kiya dha really sorry 😭 please maaf kardho please 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Hailaa!
Mariee is back with a story😉 I should be careful not to be late fr it😆
Oohhh.. u totally changed rags char and makng it in a quite intrestng way.. 😉 dat was good
And rammy.. dey are always a perfect jodi😆 (nly friends😛) and dat mini speech was hilarious😆
Readng this chappy, it reminds me of a telugu film😛
Lookng fr d next doze😳


Hehehe... Vohich !! How dare meri vashu come late uske maru ke story pe ...😆
U find raghav interesting ... Kuch naya bol ...lol !! Raghav has always been my soft corner ...I am in a bit too much of love with him. So uska char likhte samay ekdum shiddat se likhti hu

Telegu film ?? Arghhh ...kuch nahi choda lagta hai south walon ne 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: vyshuu..



😆😆
Kadhu.. raam di, endhukante premanta😛 kakapothe akada vala dad blackmail chesthadu kadha.. so😳


Tum computer walon ki waapas coding start ho gayi 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: abxetz

Mariee sorry mature nahi 😭 mariee type kiya dha really sorry 😭 please maaf kardho please 😭


Hehehe ...its OK re !! I understood ...though I missed Mariee kutty ...I suppose abhi ke liye mujhe only Mariee se kaam chalaana padega
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Phew , relieved that you liked Raghav ! Hope you like this kalpi as well 😉😉

Chapter 2

A nice 30 minutes later Raghav had walked inside the airport. His mind cursing Sammy for making him walk at 3 in the night. Ok ...not that he was feeling sleepy, he was a mad party animal after all...how would he ? Just that , he hated walking.

He would have frowned more to himself , but suddenly he noticed a group of blondies staring at him. & Na-A-Ahh...Raghav Singhaniya was not gonna leave this opportunity..not for Sammy atleast..he shall deal with him later ! In no time he had dawned his posterboy look again...errr correction , gorgeous posterboy look again !! 😳😳Raghav smirked as he begun to walk in their direction ...he knew his ways well !

"Ummm- excuse me ladies ...I need to get myself a hot... (Long pause)coffee." Raghav's luck was at its peak mostly as the girls had crowded themselves around the coffee machine. He made way through them like a charming Bengal tiger as he winked at one of them. She giggled ...yep , it was working. He inserted the coin in the slot as he waited for his can. He felt gazes at him all the while ...& he just loved attention. The can came rolling down as he grabbed it & turned around. Leaning against the machine he was about to open the can ,but stopped ...looked around

""My coffee hasn't even kicked in yet, & I am coming up with so many charming pick-up lines ...maybe thats what happens when you are surrounded with angels." His ears were filled in with squeaky giggles as he got a corner of his lower lip between his teeth.

Raghav was an expert when it came to girls. He knew how to talk ..how to walk ... how to look ...etc etc when it came to wooing girls. After quite a brief moment of flirt exchanges Raghav had said flashing his smile no. 23
"Btw ..hey ,I am Raghav .. Raghav Sin..." He cut short his statement when ...



Ahhh...DHahhdadadd...dhadd !!

The entire airport echoed with the noise as heads tuned to look at what it was. People including Raghav & the girls rushed in the direction. Raghav tiptoed a bit to get a clearer glimpse of what had happened. The moving heads in between were blocking his view , but he managed somehow.

He could see someone fiddling with something on the floor. It was a girl , a skinny one to be more precise. She had supposedly dropped her bag & now her things were littered all around the place. She was grabbing things one by one & stuffing it in her bag clumsily. Occasionally dropping things , ssometimes losing her own balance. Something seemed wrong with her , she was too conscious about her surroundings & the gazes that were fixed onto her. All this while her back was to him , so he couldn't see who she was. But what he saw ...didn't appeal him that much. She was dressed up in a pretty weird combination of a baggy grey sweater & pair of yoga pants. Her thick hair which were braided in a tight plat were not suiting her attire even a bit, her body language a big no no...in short

"Not my types !!" Raghav had murmured to himself as he stretched his body a bit , flexing his muscles. But before he could lower his hands his eyes fell on something as his eyes widened to its max ... The muscles he was so proud of now seemed to be jammed in place as he slowly got his hands down. He blinked his now wide hazel brown eyes twice or thrice ...but nothing changed as he stood rooted to the ground.

Near the girl he could see a placard which clearly stated 'Raghav Singhaniya' in quite a big font. His eyebrows crossed with confusion..Ok , he knew he had girl fans ..but this ?? This was something he never ecpected .

He was yet wondering as to who the female was when He felt his phone buzz in his pocket ...it was a text message

"Thought you would need help in California. Sending the Best of Singhaniya's to help you crack the deal - Ms Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav. No can beat her when it comes to making presentations. I had instructed her to meet you at the airport with a placard of your name. Last moment change...so couldn't inform you before. " A shocked Raghav looked up from his phone for a moment ...then lowered his head again to continue reading

"And ...mind you , if I get any sort of complaints about you son ...then consider you to be homeless from that very next second. I have had enough of your crap <~ hey son , look ...ur word 'crap' ! Lol <~ see another ?? (Khud ka experience ...dads can sometime go really very weird)
Anyways good luck for the deal & have a great tym in California.

Love , Dad !"

By the time the message had reached its end , raghav was staring at it with horror. Then looking at the girl sprawled on the ground he sighed

"Great time in California ?? Right dad ...right !!" That very moment raghav felt like going to a hospital & making fake DNA reports & claim that he is not a Singhaniya & harivansh Singhaniya's son. He loves his dad ...but this time ?!

He wondered how his journey with this woman be...

OK , the chppy is finally complete. one last time please bear with the unfinished quality of the second half of the update. Had written it in extreme hurry.🤢


MARUSHKAA
Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
i received a kind of hatred message yesterday, and now see that rihina post about aria. what's happening in here??😲

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kya masaledaar TS hai!! our good looking hero -correction-charming saga boy will fall in love with our heroine.😳 I like the way you presented kalpi.😆

this part was funny altogether, not to mention, i relished it, through and through.👏

BTW, ye ts hi hai naa?? 😆 or ts bole to thirteen shots??😛


Edited by ban18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh u res for update then i am waiting for second part to comment 😆
Edited by _Santhi_ - 10 years ago

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