SS : A million miles away !! Chap 5, 6 & 7 - Pg 52 14/10 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW ! Mariee, if these are the sort of stories ,you are going to turn out, while travelling, I HOPE YOU ARE ALWAYS TRAVELLING ! Gosh they are simply full of fun. Sammy with a list of 'predeath wishes' of Rags, Rag's dad who seems to know his son like' the back of his hand' ! Though a strict father but still a very loving one. By sending Kalpi [ the brains of the project] he is helping his son ! Of Kalpi ,with her glasses and cartoons is a change from Rags usual sexy women! Superb! Please start your travels again ! Thanks for a beautiful story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
BTW, are by any chance ' A Million Miles Away' ???? Miss your Update. Waiting for our Miss Prude [ Kalpi] to emerge as a beautiful 'Butterfly' !
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

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Big big bigggest sssooorrryyy maaru dear, iss baar mafi karo ni bolungi, punishment de do muje warna sudharungi nhi(bt cment ka repy dena)

Cment frm me n ritu darling😳😳

part 3
raghav plan a holiday to NZ wow great, bt raghav afterall he is ur father😎😎

oh god maaru hya kalpi la evadhi dhadpadi ka banvalis?😲😲 Kitna girti he ye, bt i m loving her(bilkul meri tarah he) superb raghav help her like gentlemen though he is bad boy bt nt 4 a grl who is in trouble.😳😳
PJs ...cream colored PJs with
Lightning McQueen & Senior Mator
cartoons on them ???. What an amazing choice kalpi 😆😆

Poor raghav must be imagining hw a grl wil luk in dis type of PJs, isnt it maaru? Dats y he was staring them blankly😉😉

aww kalpi feel awkward, obiviously, itna dhadam dhum karne ke baad woh aur kya feel karegi, in dat raghav stare her pjs making her more awkward.

Weired🤣🤣 raghav yahi weired grl tumhe dad se bchayegi bhul mat.

Part 4
Aww kalpi is walking behind raghav like a good Assistant bt it making raghav annoyed😆😆 afterall she is weired raghav, isnt she?😛😛
"I hope she
isn't a terrorist !" Seriously, on what basis raghav u think she can be terrorist😲😲

oh god kalpi is afraid of hights and raghav, hw cn he let a grl afraid when he was there😉😉 so he start his melodrama, lol maaru ur gawar hindi is amazing.

😆😆i havnt thing any adult thought bt yes i thought she is going to punch him🤣🤣

was kalpi taking stregth frmkung fu panda manga for take up😲😲 haha poor raghav nt wanting her to make embrassed start blabbering abt kung fu panda manga and part 3 which is soon going to release by one to be a businessman Raghav Singhania. I think he need change his career path 😆😆

ha ha finaly he start thinking hw kalpi is changing him, raghav yeh toh trailer aage aage dekho maaru tumhe tree pe chadhayegi kalpi ke naam pe🤣🤣

ps: both update r mind blowing bt short.


Ooo...itne cutely sorry bolegi tu ?? 😆
Hahaha...I suppose late reply wala punishment is enuf ..aur kuch chahiye kya bol ??😉

Comment from u & ritu ha ??😡 zyaada friendship mat nibha ...ek baar mere yeh exams khatam hone de fir usko ek din kopche mein Lena hi hai...aaj kal bohut naatak chal rahe hai uske

As for the comment ...hahahaha. ..mere dono updates ko mila ke length itni hogi 😆 but I love long comments u know & that's why o love u ...lol !!

Hahaha ...kalpu khup dhadpadi aahe ...& tu phakt thaamb ...baghach me tila raghav baba chya premat kashi paadte 😆

Cartoons have a major rolw to play ! Ull get to know soon.Now why was Raghav staring at those pjs ..hmmm, wait till u find out 😉

The comment on chap 4 ...lol !! U have analyzed the update pretty well 😉

10 June ke baad ull get longer & better updates ...promise !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

awesome update

hmm so rag is a good narrator of kung fu panda so lovely
i love the cartoon
hmm kalpi phobia of height
wat fear wen rag is here
mm its more n more interesting between the absolute contrast of each other being together
update soon


Tysm humaaira
Me too...I love Po !!
This contrast is gonna surprise u bad in the near future ...hope u r ready !?😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

WOW ! Mariee, if these are the sort of stories ,you are going to turn out, while travelling, I HOPE YOU ARE ALWAYS TRAVELLING ! Gosh they are simply full of fun. Sammy with a list of 'predeath wishes' of Rags, Rag's dad who seems to know his son like' the back of his hand' ! Though a strict father but still a very loving one. By sending Kalpi [ the brains of the project] he is helping his son ! Of Kalpi ,with her glasses and cartoons is a change from Rags usual sexy women! Superb! Please start your travels again ! Thanks for a beautiful story.


Ooo ...may ur words come true !! I wud looove to travel always--- ' WANDER LUST ' 😳
Oo...that wud even mean more updates ...but sadly , at the moment my pockets are not filled with my money but mumma-papa's ...so , let's wait !!😉

The updates are gonna be even more funnn !! This kung fu panda one I had given in haste ...thus was a bit low in quality (I know that 😭) ...but Im not gonna compromise ever again 😉

Hope u continue to fins this story interesting

& ty for such a lovely comment !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

mere cment ka repy😭


That was ur punishment !! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

BTW, are by any chance ' A Million Miles Away' ???? Miss your Update. Waiting for our Miss Prude [ Kalpi] to emerge as a beautiful 'Butterfly' !


It seems u already know the story ..eh !!

But ull be taken aback as to how I do that 😉
It has never ever been done in any story on forums or anywhere else (maybe) 😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful Updates!!!
I cannot wait to see RagNa.. walking these miles and and coming closer...
Waiting for next part... and also shots..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ILoveRagNa

Wonderful Updates!!!

I cannot wait to see RagNa.. walking these miles and and coming closer...
Waiting for next part... and also shots..


Ty sneha ...
The miles shall soon be covered ...u needn't worry 😉
Next part won't be soon ...sadly !!
Shots ...yes ! I'm waiting for inspiration ..lol !! Sort of stuck up with the story as I had lost contact from it for more than 2 months

Character mein ghusne ko problem ho raha hai
But

Fikar not !! (I'm not imitating anyone ...ur driver beti ki kalpu toh bilkul nahi 😆)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee


Ty sneha ...
The miles shall soon be covered ...u needn't worry 😉
Next part won't be soon ...sadly !!
Shots ...yes ! I'm waiting for inspiration ..lol !! Sort of stuck up with the story as I had lost contact from it for more than 2 months

Character mein ghusne ko problem ho raha hai
But

Fikar not !! (I'm not imitating anyone ...ur driver beti ki kalpu toh bilkul nahi 😆)55




Hahhaah... I totally understand... fikar not is very common phrase in Mumbai...
I picked it from my cousin. . Lol..

And well.. shots.. .. try to get into skin as soon as possible. ..
Lol.. btw.. are we both always on parellel lines when it comes to stories... watchman story.. which am writing is..also where rich brat Rags dad... plans.. him to teach him lesson...
But then again... great minds think alike...


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I am loving Your Kalpana more... she sounds sooo cutee... and sweett too.. I can completely relate to her for . some reason...

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