New ss: kuch pyar ka pagalpan part one on pg 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys just got free from my blood sucking board exams and a this idea came to my mind I know have to complete my other work also but I really would love to write on this so if u like the plot then please comment and tell me do u want me to conti
Plot : the story will revolve around four characters raghav , kalpana , randhesh and deniz . Raghav and deniz are best freinds since childhood and are spoilt as both r brought up in America. Randhesh have a dream to go USA he is an engineer his family are freinds with deniz family . Kalpana lives in USA with her family who r mean and illegally living in USA . What happen when these four confused souls get into love and what all bewakoofiyan they do .
So do tell did u liked the plot or u want me to do any sort of changes or any sort ideas
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one dear..
Go ahead with ur ideas😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I want to read this pagalpan story...😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Don't u have like 2 ffs pending rishiba. Deewana being one. So when r u finishing those?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunyy

Don't u have like 2 ffs pending rishiba. Deewana being one. So when r u finishing those?


I know I have two ff and I m going to start giving regular updates from tomorrow sorry I was busy woth my exams but now I m finally free so gonna conti with my work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys so here is part one in this I will introduce randhish only and raghav and deniz will be introduced in next one as I m not able to upload pic of the characters so I gave u a all the names of the actors I have imagined
Raghav and kalpana: well u all know
Randhish: fawad khan (the one in the movie khoobsurat)
Deniz : drashti dhami ( the one in madhubala)
Part one
A plane landed on the runway of international airport a young guy came out wearing an expensive suit he is one of the richest businessman in USA . He came out from the airport and sat in a private yacht . Everything was beautiful and perfect then suddenly a fly came and start irritating him he was trying to get rid of it and he woke up and said logon ke ghar mein ac hota hain aur yaha hum garmi se sar jaye he shouted and said to his mom ma main chatt par sone ja raha hun vaise bhi yahan neend kaha aayenge itne garmi mein kal subah office bhi jana hain pehle office ki chik chik aur phir raat ko machro ka khana bano his mom came to his room and said itna shor itna shor kyun macha raha hain agar tere pita ji aur dada uth gaye toh mere shamat aajayenge he replied aap na sada unhe se darte rahe na main chatt par sone jaa raha hun he took his pillow and blanket and while going up he muttered by making irritated faces yeh sheher ab rehne layak nahi raha ek baar mera visa lag ne do he came up and put the pillow and blanket on the khat and slept there . Morning came he took bath and got ready for office and came to the dining table well we cannot say a dining table but the breakfast in his house was arranged on the floor he came and saw aloo puri he said to his mom ma yeh kya aaj phir aloo poori main nahi khaunga his mom said aaj khale kal ananda bana dunge he sat on the floor and had breakfast and then left for the office . In the office his colleagues and he was talking about his visa to USA and his uncle
C1: yaar tu apne uncle ko kyun nahi bolta ke tujhe bola le
Ra: yaar uncle ne toh bahut kahan ke aajao aur mera business sambhalo par main he mana kar deta hun
C2: jab unke pass itna paisa hain toh aur woh tujhe apne betey ke tarah manta hain tu chala kyun nahi jaata vaise bhi kya pata tere kismat khul jaaye aur unke khoobsurat bete se tere shaadi kara de
C1: aacha toh unke khoobsurat bete bhi hain yeh toh bahut aacha hain permanent residency Milne mein problem bhi nahi honge aur vaise bhi apna randhish kaunsa hero se kam hain ladkiya tu vaise bhi iske pheche pade rehte hain
Randhish with an arrogant smile replied yeh toh sahi hain he directed one of his colleagues to switch on the ac.
In randhish's house
Randhish mother and farther were talking on the phone to there USA friend sahil temur owner of temur industries and father of deniz randhish father was talking to him when randhish mother took the phone hello bhaisahab kaise hain aap sab khariyat aur deniz aur shaeyana kaise hain busy toh nahi hain sahil replied nahi bhabhi busy toh nahi tha bas thodi files study kar raha tha aur aap batayen randhish mother replied bas thek hain bhaisahab aapse ek baat karne randhish ke job ke bare mein sahil asked kaun randhish randhish's mother replied mera beta sahil replied in a non intresting tone oh aacha thek hain main dekhte hun aacha bhabhi main abhi busy hun baad mein baat karte hain and before she could reply he cut the phone and his mom felt weird and bad by this behaviour .

so here is part one do drop ur comments any sort of comments negetive or positive are welcomed
Edited by rishiba - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good update. ...
But I m little confused. ...randhish say his colleagues that his USA uncle bula rahe hai. ...but sahil is not intresting in this. ..😕
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice.but Update in english pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: switymango



Very good update. ...
But I m little confused. ...randhish say his colleagues that his USA uncle bula rahe hai. ...but sahil is not intresting in this. ..😕
Update soon


Well phakne wale toh phekhte hain 😆 and thanks for commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: niru04

Nice.but Update in english pls


Next time will try to update in English and thanks for commenting

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