NEW RAGNA SS:LOVE, SECRETS AND BETRAYALS (PART 7- PAGE 23)(INCOMPLETE) - Page 12

update nxt chappy plzz waiting..

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

Hi sory i don't know ur name but just want to say that U have good writing skills and ur description about scene and emotions which u want to make feel is perfect but i have a small complain that u are explaining it a little too much in detail so the pace of the story is effecting coz of that, that's its everything else is perfect sorry if i sound rude 😛

but there is no doubt that ur story is good 😃😃

hey my name iv Vishakha and don't be soory for not knowing my name...thank you for ur apprecitation dear...and coming to ur small complain thank you for saying it and I promise I will try my best to control my emotional writing and not to go in the depth of the emotions but for now u have to adjust with it as the update is now ready soo..but promis eafter this one I will maintain some limits...thank you once again for liking my story...

Originally posted by: sweet1308

hmm wat description for rag body hmm

kalpi t get married

update soon

thank you dear...yes kalpi to get married soon...her father wants it

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

Superb update dear.. OMG kalpi's father asked her to marry someone.. Oh!! No!! Wish RagNa together soon.. Update nxt chappy soon.. Waiting..

thank you dear!!!😃😃

Originally posted by: sampa79

Nice update

thank you dear very much...😃😉

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

plez update soon

will update in some time...juzt little bit touch up is remaining...

Originally posted by: rani214

No it was perfect potrayal emotions of kalpi missing her love her life...even m used to skip kamla's bhashan n kammo-makkhi scenes 😆

thanks for appreciating the updates...ohh I guess many "mostly" all of us would have changed our channel for skipping or more appropriately ignoring the irritating moments of ema serial which was mostly shown in that serial...I some tyms wonder why they need raghav or kalpi...dumla and makhi was more than enough for the cvs to make their show run atleast for themselves as we all know becoz of them and shortage of our ragna and their separation the show lost it's charm...and now i'm sure they must be regretting for guving space to dumala and makhi..but to do now...woh kehte hai na ab kya karna jab chidiya chuk gayi khet...😆😆..good for nothing cvs...

Originally posted by: rani214

Hey vishakha d update was nice

description of scene wit u special lines in betwn was good...loved how u wrote d scene

Vitthu want kalpi to get married soon...curious to knw wat is his n suhani's plan

Also eager to read abt ragna Flshbk ...cont soon

thanks for liking the scene with 'MY' lines ...yeah vithhu wants her daughter to get married and there is no plan of vithal and suhani's atleast from vithal's side ..they both want kalpi to get married so she will get happiness which she deserve and as all dad wants their daughter to get married...vithal also wants..it's all father's dream to see their daughter in her bridal dress so as vithhu...yeah you'll get ragna's scene mostly in all update after this one...promise..

Originally posted by: riaka

Awesome story dear. Ragna were missing each other. Would like to know what exactly happened that kalpi took this horrible step. Please continue soon

thank you dear...😃..hmm you will get a hint in the coming chappy...will update soon...

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

update nxt chappy plzz waiting..

dear you are more then eager to knoe the latter part of the story even iam not in the hurry...anyways thaks for liking the story that much...