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Posted: 10 years ago
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Priya molu update nanayitund ketto. 😛 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oolallallaala...priyeee main kya bolu ?
It was all weirdly filmy but yet so so so interesting !! Raghav's flashback in the boat ...I literally felt myself being in a place like undescribed as I read it

U are fab 👏

Mast wala update hota ha !! Now I'm confused what I like more ...lrr , pp ya fir priyee ka naya navela aavishkaar handsome demon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
So...

Raghav and Kalpana .. are "Kind" of already in love..!!
Interesting...
Pyaara Pyaara RagNa...!! Balle Balle...

And.. Kalpana.. I want to know more about her POV now.. it's obvious, that she isn't comfy with Prem anymore... and for her... that moment at the age of 13 was beautiful... Awww... and I DID feel little sa Bad for Raghav... But.. Determination to have her back is awesome..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: farhana04

Thank you for such a lovely update. You hooked me with your story dear.

Ragna kissed when he was 15 and kalpi 13? 😳
Raghav loves her madly and still remembered each and every single time they spent together.
But Kalpi loves prem 😭 and forgot her childhood friend Raghav. 😭
It's interesting to know how this story is going to proceed.

Your story is much more better than the original one. 👏
please don't make Kalpi and Prem sleep together.


Thanks farhana!

Yep RagNa kissed in their teens! Kaafi advanced teens hai! Nothing new dear...there was no one to advice Raghav about all this as he did not share a great bond with his father!

Kalpi has not forgotten Raghav. Infact she is disturbed because his name is so familiar! and she already has started feeling it might be him.

Aww farhana you are saying that because RagNa makes any story sound even better! Not my contribution! This is not my story I am just narrating it with RagNa as the leads!

Well I do want to keep the story original but lets see what happens!!!!😆

Will see what happens with Kalpi and Prem And you know its the crux of the story!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

So...

Raghav and Kalpana .. are "Kind" of already in love..!!
Interesting...
Pyaara Pyaara RagNa...!! Balle Balle...

And.. Kalpana.. I want to know more about her POV now.. it's obvious, that she isn't comfy with Prem anymore... and for her... that moment at the age of 13 was beautiful... Awww... and I DID feel little sa Bad for Raghav... But.. Determination to have her back is awesome..!!


Well I dont know if it was love or infatuation! Lets see ahead ok?

Kalpana's POV will be revealed only in the last shot as it is the most important part of this story!

The moment she shared with Raghav was not beautiful, it was special to her. Though she fails to accept the fact that she too had equally participated in that act, the fact is that she did.

You will cry for this Raghav Sejal! And for the first time in your life you will begin to love him.

Cos this Raghav is not the majboor Singhania of EMA😆😆

And trust me every girl in this forum will want this Raghav for her!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: riaka

Lovely update dear. Raghav 's flash back was fantastic. He loves her 2 much. Now I get it the reason behind his shades.his chocolate brown eyes still hunting kalpi 😳 and their kiss. Just awesome as he said he will kalpi HIS. Please update soon

Yes Raghav has now realised that he still yearns for her and is affected by her. He does love her!

As far as the story if he makes Kalpi his...we need to wait and watch😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariee

Oolallallaala...priyeee main kya bolu ?

It was all weirdly filmy but yet so so so interesting !! Raghav's flashback in the boat ...I literally felt myself being in a place like undescribed as I read it

U are fab 👏

Mast wala update hota ha !! Now I'm confused what I like more ...lrr , pp ya fir priyee ka naya navela aavishkaar handsome demon 😳


LOL chakuli it is filmy because this story is from a Mallu movie!!! He He

And for once I cannot take the credit because this is not my story I am just narrating it to you all with RagNa in it!

Oh i used to love to sit in the small boat in water under the moonlight! Hv done this adventure too! LOL we cousins were in a boat and had toddy chori chori! Oh those were some fun days! Days when I was alive!!!! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much Arya!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No wonder Raghav keep going where his Kalpi is...
He feel for her practically his whole life
Kalpi remembering those chocolate brown eyes that kiss her when she was 13 was awesome
No wonder Raghav always wear sunglasses. Is he trying to keep his identity hidden from Kalpi?
Raghav remembering every details about him and Kalpi when they were kids is beautiful
My gosh! Raghav dad was so cruel...
Beautiful update. I love it and can't wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

No wonder Raghav keep going where his Kalpi is...
He feel for her practically his whole life
Kalpi remembering those chocolate brown eyes that kiss her when she was 13 was awesome
No wonder Raghav always wear sunglasses. Is he trying to keep his identity hidden from Kalpi?
Raghav remembering every details about him and Kalpi when they were kids is beautiful
My gosh! Raghav dad was so cruel...
Beautiful update. I love it and can't wait to read more


Yes you are absolutely right Nats! Raghav does not want Kalpi to know about him as he is unsure of her feelings for him. How can he forget that she had almost cheated him. She blamed him and escaped that day!

Yes Raghav's dad was not a very highly educated person! Also the scene that he saw would have irked any father.! If only his employer had seen them like that! Even though he was an employee of that house he had self respect and he thought Raghav had wandered off on a wrong path!

Thanks Nats that you like it! there are so many beautiful and touching stories in Mallu movies!

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