Joint SS : Chap 26 (aahanaa123) - Pg 123 25/3

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abxetz

@abxetz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#651

Pakhi in mental asailam 🤣 this disgusting women deserve that place 😡 w****h 😡 o hamare ragna 😳 brilliant update 😉 especially rags ki feelings for pookhi 😆 😆

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#652

Wow Aria's turn? Obviously the update should be wonderful. I loved the way Raghav is standing for his lady love. Pakhi for sure needed this punishment.

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premap

@premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#653

Gosh ! 2 updates within a short space of time ! Thanks a lot ! I had given up on this story as one those which had ' an EAGER start but NO heart to continue ' sort of story ! But the chap 14 was 'heart breaking' with Kalpi in coma but it was 'laced' with romance [ 2 romantic nurses ] and irritation and DISGUST at the wicked Paaki ! Happy she landed at the asylum , the apt place for her ! Chap 15 is another 'shocker ' ! Kalpi held at gun-point ! We are 'holding our breath' till the next update! Hope it will be SOON ! Thanks.

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IronThor

@IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: mariee
Vidya vidya vidya ... Was it only me who felt a 'Twisting kaleidoscope' touch given to the update or u really did it ? Or is this TK fan-girl hallucinating stuff like Raghav Baba of teh show ...😆
I really really liked the update. I'm just loving the way all of this is going. Every single chap has something new to offer. I was so happy when she said yes ... I felt that maybe its now time for a happily ever after ...but then u got in Dhruv. His character till the end seemed so mysterious that I was unable to gauge what wold happen next. U had me tied up to this update till the very end👏

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MARUSHKAA

😆 I guess it is because of the office environment it felt like twisting. When you asked me to write the chap and I got the synopsis I was going to make Kalpi say no. 😛 But then when I reviewed the previous updates they didn't give that option in the end. It would have seemed out of place. So I brought in Dhruv instead to create some drama. I was gonna write out the whole scene with Raghav's reaction and all but then I remembered it is an SS and someone else has to take the baton. So cliff hanger. 😆

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#655

Aria that was one amazing piece of writing
Raghav pleading with God to save his Kalpi was very emotional...
Omg! This delusional girl has lost her mind. Raghav choking the live out of her and she is turned on...
Gauri is a fool to believe that bitch over Raghav. I love how Raghav shut both of them up lol
Kalpi nurses are so sweet. Kalpi waking up was awesome
I love RagNa reunion moment after Kalpi wake up. Poor guy had his life back
RagNa dancing and making out under the moonlight was so romantic
Raghav proposing to Kalpi was so sweet. But that pig had to come and ruin the moment
Physio Pakhi in a mental institution is where she belongs lol
RagNa having their date in the park is amazing. Raghav again asked Kalpi to marry him was awesome
Hope this time around Kalpi give the man a answer :)
Outstanding update. I love it

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#656

Vidya that was one incredible flawless piece of writing
I love how Kalpi recalled all her moments in life with Raghav and accepted his proposal
To say Kalpi made Raghav one happy man is a understatement lol
Raghav expressing his gratitude and affection to Kalpi though his kisses and touch was so romantic;)
OMG!!! This Dhruv Arora give me the creep. His presence is not appealing at all...
Raghav rejecting the crazy man proposal only enraged him...
Kalpi talking to her Raghav take all his tension away. I love their little moment before all hell break loose
This Dhruv has totally lost it. Threatening to kill kalpi...
Now I can't wait to know how this will ends
Superb update. Love it

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#657

Aria nice long update . Sweet as always .

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#658

Vidya kya dHamaake daar Twist daala last mein Whoa !!!!!!!!!!

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shoonya9

@shoonya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#659

Vidya u really rock as a twist girl. What a twist given Nd the cliff hanger uff.

Agree with Marie, this brought back the memories of Twisting Kaliedoscope, though u hv ur own way Nd reason for twist.

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Antara

@rachufan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#660

for my sweetheart aria's chapter
i m sorry dear for late reply
u updated in night and after reading ur update i slept peacefully
it was awesome amzing perfect i enjoyed it so sooo much
u send that"CHUDAIL" her real home 😆
and our darling i mean raghav's darling fit and fine
he proposed her and after long wait finaly she said "Yes"
Yes so we r ready for ragna marrige

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