OS :The Dance !! (by me & mariee) - Page 3

Originally posted by: premap

Loved the OS. As for the English mistakes, who cares. As long as we can understand what is meant ,we are happy . It is a great bonus to us ,as we are not non-Hindi speaking lot. Thanks and a big Thank you to Mariee for helping you out. We might not have read this OS ,if not for the generosity of Mariee !

A wow work by ragnaragna and marushkaa😊

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unres

first ragnaragna welcome to the forum dear.🤗

Amazing concept lv it.❤️
Maaru tumne toh chaar chaand laga di iss concept ko.[D=>]

Whoaa kalpi is drinking and dat too shot on shot. Atleast bartender give litle bit company to kalpu. So kalpi is in masquerede party and black theme. 😛

oh kalpi is in dilemaa of prem's words and her broke up with him, though she broke dis relation. Kalpi is in love with raghav frm childhood, bt he didnt show his face aftr he went to USA and hence kalpi is sad. On the other hand, prem is just using her. And recover from all dis she is drinking. 😒

Drink finaly start its effect on it and kalpi start crying and laughing at a time. No one saw her on dance floor, and she just spining n laughing n screaming there. 😔

And finaly there come her hero to handle her, to give her what is her and to make her his. Kalpi's first love Raghav singhania come there for his Kalpi😳

unres dne.
Maaru as per promis i cmented😳

Wow! That was awesome teamwork! Ragna ragna, don't feel intimidated. It's on, no one is perfect. Also here what matters more is the story and by reading this I'm sure you are going to be a fabulous writer. After all Maru ne haath jo pakdi hain tumhari. ...😆 Jokes apart, we love anything as long as it's ragna. And your story was great!

Wonderful os ...n ragnaragna its beautiful story...loved it👏dear pls do keep writing more stories wuld love to read it😃

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Hey hi 2ragna (ur short name )😃...its Ritu here., 😆

first of all, you are welcome in ragna family🤗...have fun with us, have chat with us nd feel this forum as ur home.

and secondly, ok you are not good at english...accepted. But don't worry dear...no one is perfect. Same case is with me😆. Like you i am also not good at english..and my fear was same as yours before writing. You know marushka was the one who encouraged me when i was going through the same situation as yours. I was very scared at that time when i wanted to write a ff but could not do due to my fear of bad english. At that time marushka encouraged me 😃nd told me that i should write because improvement comes with the time.,..and i started my writing. And honestly i improvred a lot..even marushka says that. 😊

so take a chill pill dear...u will also feel improvement in ur writing with english...and do entertain us with ur writing.😳

2ragna.,bahut hua mera lecture😆,..coming to update.

fabulous dear. Wonderful concept👏. Loved it. Drunken kalpi dancing with raghav..awesome. It was nice that how raghav was taking her out from her insecurity nd making her feel special.

keep writing Down ur unique ideas.

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

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unres

first ragnaragna welcome to the forum dear.🤗

Amazing concept lv it.❤️
Maaru tumne toh chaar chaand laga di iss concept ko.[D=>]

Whoaa kalpi is drinking and dat too shot on shot. Atleast bartender give litle bit company to kalpu. So kalpi is in masquerede party and black theme. 😛

oh kalpi is in dilemaa of prem's words and her broke up with him, though she broke dis relation. Kalpi is in love with raghav frm childhood, bt he didnt show his face aftr he went to USA and hence kalpi is sad. On the other hand, prem is just using her. And recover from all dis she is drinking. 😒

Drink finaly start its effect on it and kalpi start crying and laughing at a time. No one saw her on dance floor, and she just spining n laughing n screaming there. 😔

And finaly there come her hero to handle her, to give her what is her and to make her his. Kalpi's first love Raghav singhania come there for his Kalpi😳

Originally posted by: Kiaraah

Wow! That was awesome teamwork! Ragna ragna, don't feel intimidated. It's on, no one is perfect. Also here what matters more is the story and by reading this I'm sure you are going to be a fabulous writer. After all Maru ne haath jo pakdi hain tumhari. ...😆 Jokes apart, we love anything as long as it's ragna. And your story was great!

Loved the cute story of ragna. ... Kalpi waiting forever for Raghav to comeback and when she almost lost hope , he comes and whisks her away ... Oh so romantic! Do write more stories dear.. . We all love you...

Maru; you are so much a sweetheart! I love the way you encourage new writers and help them to overcome their insecurities and is even ready to write for them... Be like this always! Don't ever change! Love you !