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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for late update and not replying to your comments guys...and thank you for your likes and beautiful comments. here is next part...I hope its not bother you too much. please leave your feedback Dear if you like the update... here is long update and sorry if it bore you.

please forgive me for spelling and grammatical errors.


Part 16


Kalpi bang the door of Ashish's home aloud, Kirti came to open the door quickly after listening aloud rat-a-tat on the door ,' hey kalpi... What a pleasant surprise... You and this hours' kalpi gave her a blissful look to her and passed her when Kirti trying to hug her. Kirti surprised by kalpi's behaviour because she knows kalpi never behave like this until something bother her. Kalpi came inside the house, her every feet shows the anger inside her while her eyes ready to burn the person coming in front of them. ' Ashish bhaiya...Ashish bhaiya' she roared on the top of her voice. Ashish came fastly at leaving room listening her voice.

Ashish: kalpi hi...you are here at this time. Kalpi looks at him wrathfully.

Kalpi: what is this? She show him the envelope. Ashish take it from her hand noticing her hotly gaze. Kirti also watch them curiously.

He opened the envelope and surprised to read the matter.

Kirti: what is this Ashish? What's written in it? The silence drop on his face.

Kalpi( heavy voice): he was not able to tell you dee, I tell you what's the matter... and matter is this the great business tycoon Raghav Singhania send me the legal notice for taking my daughter's custody...he wanted to drag my angel in the court, he wanted to snatch my child... he just ...wanted...to...take my Pari from me...he wanted to separate my child from me dee and she burst in tears. Kirti hold her from her shoulder and watch Ashish furiously.

Ashish: Kalpi... I a...m really sorry I really don't know about this... In fact I never sniffed that he was doing like this... I am sorry...

Kalpi: what I do now bhaiya... tell me... I leaving with my angel peacefully and you dragged that monster in our life and now you say only sorry...

Ashish: Kalpi believe me I never wanted this...I only wants Pari get her full family but...what I think and what is happening... You don't worry I talk to him.

Kalpi: you no need bhaiya. She get from the sofa wiping her tears... I am not so wimpy that I will not able to face him... but if he wanted to fight in court then I also meet him in court...inform him that this kalpana Jadhav is not a weak girl who give in under him...now this play off is of total equality...if he have the power of his money then I have the power of daughter's love...and I will not let him win and that's my promise to myself. No one take my angel from me...I am her only mother and she is my daughter and no Raghav Singhania come on picture of our happy family to snatch our happiness. I will not allow him to ruin our happiness... which way he came here... in that same way I send him back...Raghav Singhania I swear I kick you out of my life very soon. She promised herself. Ashish and Kirti watched her with their different expressions...ashish watch in guiltiness while Kirti watch her proudly.

Kalpi: ok dee bhaiya meet you tomorrow in the Court. And she left from there. Kirti look at Ashish furiously.

Kirti: this is all happening only because of you Ashish who told you to tell Raghav about Kalpi and Pari...but you have to show your true friendship and genuineness in front of people that other fact it may result on someone's destruction but you want to become MAHAN nahi...now see who is suffering... I tell you Ashish if Pari and Kalpi will separate then I also see you in court for our divorce...and that's my promise.. She said pointing to him and turn towards her bedroom stamoi her feet on the floor.

Ashish leaned back on the sofa placing his hand under his head.' Oh god what is happening here...I only wants the happiness of my angel giving her a family...I only wants to give my yaar's daughter on his mother's hand... I only wants my friend's soap live in peace but ...but Raghav why you doing this... No...I have talk to him and of course Gouri aunty too I don't think Raghav tell her anything... And he step out of the house.

' What ...you send the legal notice to kalpana...are you gone mad...tera dimag to kharab nahi huva Raghav... You want to drag that innocent child in court room damn it...' Sammy shouted on him 'tu apne ego aur paiso ke ghamand me ek masum bacchi ki emotions ke sath khel raha hai mere bhai don't do this... she will be hurt.' He try to understand him.

Raghav: you are overreacting Sammy ...nothing will happen like that... I only wants to save my angel from that greedy woman...and of course in the basis of financial status court definitely give me her custody... And I will give her every happiness of this world. He smiled crookedly.

' kash tu ek ma bhi apne paiso se kharid pata' Sammy returned smiling sadly.

Raghav: she don't need that woman Sammy... I will become her father and I will love every way that she never remember her.

' really then why you need your mother Raghav why you can't let her die'

Raghav: mom... Gouri step in with Ashish and kamini. Raghav look at him angrily.

Gouri: answer me Raghav I am asking you something.

Raghav: mom please you stay away from this.

Gouri: I will stay away...and leave you from playing with other's lives.

Raghav: I am not playing with anyone I just only want Pari with us..

Gouri: so you choose this way. She asked him in angry tone.

' yes I choose this way because that woman is not giving me Pari..I went to Pari's school for her leaving but that greedy woman stop me ...she warned me the Raghav Singhania that she will not let me take my Pari with me ...so what I am done... She forced me to take this tragic step.' He roared.

Gouri: dil to kar raha hai there muh pe ek chata lagavu par tu bohot bada insane ban gaya hai aur mai tere samne bohot choti ban gayi ho Raghav jab tuj me dil hi nahi to tu us ma ka dard kya samjega...when a lion try to grab a lamb that time mother dear know she is not able to fight with mighty lion but she fight with him until her last breath not because she is greedy but only to save her child from evil eye...this time kalpana is that dear and...Raghav looks at his mother frustratedly.

Gouri: you are not able to understand this thing right now because you became father of pari for only guilt but when you will be her father by your heart that time you understand what I mean...

Raghav: may be I am not understanding what you are saying and you are not understanding why I am doing this...but the truth is this I want Pari at any cost...

Kamini: he is doing right thing dee that kalpana is ravening for money... you are so nice that's why you not understanding her intention dee.

Gouri: I am seek kamini not blind... and very well able to see people's intentions. She said looking at kamini... I knows what is going on other's mind.

Ashish: Raghav please believe me kalpana is not that type of girl... She loves angel more than her life...if you separate them ...they both will die. Raghav I begging you please leave them...

Sammy: Raghav Ashish is right please think on your decision again.

Annanya: bhai please don't do this... Raghav irritated by listening the babble of kalpi's saviour.

Gouri: Raghav please don't make yourself a block man...please listen to me once. Raghav clench his fist closing his eyes tightly.

'Enough...' He roared' I take my decision and I will not change it for anyone...tomorrow morning there is the hearing on the court who are interested come there otherwise stay here...I don't care' he said and Strom out of the hall. Kamini smiled evilly on her victory while others dropped their faces thinking on what happens tomorrow.

At kalpi's home, Kalpi lay on the bed try to sleep with Pari but sleep is far away from her eyes...images of next day flashes in front of her eyes which make her restless... tears are continuously flowing from corner of her eyes making her roll on bed from one side to other... She sobbing silently.

' moma are you crying' Pari asked scrubbing her eyes.

Kalpi: no baby ...I worked whole day na so may be because of this water flowing from my eyes.

Pari: ohhh...but why don't you sleep yet haaa.

Kalpi: because...I am not feeling like sleepy.

Pari: ohhh..hmm. Come I sing lullaby for you.Kalpi smiled at her little angel's innocency...her heart feel heavy... her eyes covered with water.

Kalpi: no need sweetheart you sleep well with me...don't know when we get this time again..come I will make you sleep Tear drop from her eyes..

Pari: no moma...when I was not sleepy you sang for me today you feel not sleepy so I sing for you... She sit near kalpi's head..start to sing thumping her forehead by her tiny fingers.

Gudiya rani bitiya rani

Pariyon ki nagari se ek din

Raj kanwar ji aayenge

Mehlon mein le jayenge

Gudiya rani bitiya rani

Pariyon ki nagari se ek din

Raj kanwar ji aayenge


Mehlon mein le jayenge

Tears still flowing from the corner of kalpi's eyes...she controlled herself not to cry in front of angel but angel's melodious voice make her weak with every passing second.

Age piche he god he hathi

Bitch me hinge sau barati

Itani aaj akeli hai tu

Tere honge kitane sathi

Mai khush meri ankh me pani

Gudiya rani bitiya rani

Pariyon ki nagari se ek din

Raj kanwar ji aayenge

Mehalo mein le jayenge


Tu meri chotici gudiya

Ban jayegi jadu ki pudiya

Tuj pe ayegi jawani

Mai to ho javungi budhiya

Bhool na Jana prit purani

Gudiya rani bitiya rani

Pariyon ki nagari se ek din

Raj kanwar ji aayenge

Mehalo mein le jayenge


She get up and hug tightly like she wants to truss her around her body like no one seize her child from her. Pari surprised to see her mother's state. Kalpi start kissing angel badly and crying too.

Pari: moma what happened why are you crying... Please tell me na muze dar lag raha hai.

Kalpi: nothing sweetheart moma was little emotional today... That's why behaving like this. She kiss her forehead..' Angel promise me dear you never leave me alone' Kalpi asked in teary voice.

Pari : no moma Pari never leave without her moma I love you soon much..Pari encircled her hands around kalpi's neck.

Kalpi: I love you too honey... Moma can't leave without you sweetheart moma die without you. Kalpi hug her tightly and they stay like this whole night.

Raghav's condition is not different than others. He also not understand whatever he was done is good or not .he staring the terrace with his wide eyes.' Mom Sammy annanya everybody thinks I am doing wrong really am I wrong... Tell me na bhai I need you today your junior needs you please help me' Raghav thought in his mind closing his eyes.

' don't think to much junior Jo bhi hota hai achche ke liye hota hai I am always with you in your every decision my brother' Abhi's words ringing in his ears. ' thank you bhai for your support and love... I hope i never regrets on my this decision. I only wants to give Pari every happiness .I promise you bhai I always care her as my own child from my heart not only for guilt... You understand me na.. I miss you bhai..I love you so much' he said wiping his tears.

That night was horrible for everyone because it takes the sleep from everyone's eyes...nobody sleep except Pari as she was sleeping in her mother's lap peacefully and two women in their victory hangover.


Edited by swara2504 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update god its so emotional
kalpi fear yet determine t fight with rag
on the other hand rag being explained his doing are wrong
pari sweet lullaby was cute oh both are in pain
update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
pari she is so cute I think she is hero of this stroy
little girl she sing lullaby for her mom

nice update swara 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Emotional update😭
Hope raghav understand kalpi. ...that kamini😡 ..kalpi so much love Pari. ...
Update soon next part. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

pari she is so cute I think she is hero of this stroy

little girl she sing lullaby for her mom

nice update swara😃


Pari is my Supergirl
sabko problem mese bharar nikalegi
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome
and it's emotional also
hope court take decision in favour of kalpi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb 😃 par ye rags galath hai 😭 😭 poor kalpi or pari please ye rags ke gamand ko jeethnai math dena 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update...
Raghav hanling this situation as businessman...😡
Why can he understand this will hurt most to pari...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh dear, you made me cry. Very emotional update Swara. Wish pari and Kalpi do not separate.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I m crying swara how beautifully naturally emotionlly u describe kalpi nd pari mom daughter relation dear hats off to u
i m sorry dear mera like button nahi press hota 👍🏼

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