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Posted: 10 years ago
Suprb update neha... Awww raghav is so swt... Ek baat bolun Neha... Bura mat manana plzzz... Jaan tum sab writers ne hum bechare update ke mare readers ko tang kerne ka koi contract liya hai kya... '' nxt update after 35 like'' '' nxt update after 40 likes and 2 pages full wth comnt'' '' nxt update after 70 likes'' aaa... 😡 sab bahut gande ho... Tum sab ko write nahi blackmailer hona tha... Accha suno nxt chappy update ker 50+ likes ho gaye... So as per ur promise next chappy plzzz... Waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha update dedo na please 😉 😛. It is 54 likes u wanted 45
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

Suprb update neha... Awww raghav is so swt... Ek baat bolun Neha... Bura mat manana plzzz... Jaan tum sab writers ne hum bechare update ke mare readers ko tang kerne ka koi contract liya hai kya... '' nxt update after 35 like'' '' nxt update after 40 likes and 2 pages full wth comnt'' '' nxt update after 70 likes'' aaa... 😡 sab bahut gande ho... Tum sab ko write nahi blackmailer hona tha... Accha suno nxt chappy update ker 50+ likes ho gaye... So as per ur promise next chappy plzzz... Waiting...

u know bricka like , critisims and comments motivate any person a lot but i never mean to blackmail u know i've 4 stories and 1 pending so it's not possible for me to update all on same day as i'm a student that too final year in clg it's difficult for me to adjust all things but i'll try my best to do justice with everything and u know i blackmail u all so that i got some time but as always i myself trapped but don't worry as promised i'll update it today itself 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Neha update dedo na please 😉 😛. It is 54 likes u wanted 45

i'll update it today Tongue
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha eagerly waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 20

While truing pictures all past memories flashes in front of her eyes and some tears fell from her eyes when she remember past . But she come out from her thoughts when she hear he phone rings .
She look at her phone it's raghav
R- kalpi do u see album ?
K- yes ( in low voice)
R- what happen to u , are u alright??
K- yes
R- kalpi don't lie to me tell me what happen why are u sounding low?
K- woo it's nothing.
I'm just missing aai baba
R- hmm ok .
But take care and don't take stress .
K- ok
R- love u .
Bye and take care
K- bye
Saying so she cut call .
...
1 hour later
Maya come in kalpi room
K- bhabhi u ?
If u have any work then u tell me i'll come downstairs .
M- no , no it's nothing like that .
Vo i'm here to tell u that kamala aunty & vitthal uncle came here to meet u .
K- aai - baba
M- yes and they are talking with mom and waiting for u come fast .
K- yes i'll come
...
Kalpi come downstairs and see vitthal & kamala sitting there chatting with gauri .
Kalpi went toward them and hug them
K- aai baba u both here ? But u didn't inform me?
Km- beta we came here to meet u as raghav baba send driver at chawl and call vitthal that u are missing us so much . So he tell us to visit here .
But baba it's monday then how u manage work
V- don't worry beta raghav baba give me holiday so that i'm able to meet my rajkumari
Kalpi was surprised
Raghav who never give a half day to any worker give holiday to her baba and only bcoz she ask she was missing her aai baba .
She remember clearly once her baba told her that raghav was too strict and don't like to delay in any work and he never allow anyone to take holiday . He is totally workholic and she herself know that it's true .
Raghav never left his office work .
G- beta now i leave as me & maya go to meet to a relative as she is not well u talk to ur aai - baba we come back before raghav , sammy & vishal come from office saying so they both went from there .
Kalpi enjoy her time with her aai & baba
...
It's evening
Maya & gauri come back and all five are chatting gauri , maya , kalpi , vitthal & kamala .
When raghav , sammy & vishal come back .
Raghav touch vitthal & kamala feet and thanx them for coming . Aafter that he goes to his room .
Kalpi excuse herself and take coffe to her room .
Raghav is in washroom , kalpi put tray on table and in mean time raghav hold her in his embarace .
He place a kiss in crook of her neck turn her and say
R- are u happy now ?
Kalpi nodded
K- thanx for inviting aai baba
R- u've no need to say thanx but just keep smiling always i don't like it when u cry or become sad .
Saying so he kiss her forehead
R- i want that u to be happy always but i want something in return
Kalpi look at him
R- that u never leavve my side , and when i'm with u ur all attention is on me .
Saying so he give a quick pack on her lips
R- now come , let's go downstairs all are waiting for us for dinner .
Raghav hold kalpi hand and both went downstairs .
On dinning table
Kamala collect lot of courage and ask gauri
Km- gauri ji if u don't have any problem then will we take kalpi with us for two days .
Gauri , maya , sammy , vishal& kalpi all get tensed when they see raghav stop eating .
Kalpi know very well he can't let her go .
Gauri look at raghav changed expressions and say
G- kamala vo
Km- vo actually we all are missing her too much so if u don't have any problem
Now it become more difficult for gauri to say
G- voo avtually kamala
But before she say anything raghav say
R- kamala maa kalpi go with u
All are schoked except kamala & vitthal who are happy .
Kalpi look at raghav
But her eyes widen with his nxt statement
R- but only if u allow me to stay there with kalpi.
Now it's vitthal & kamala turn to get schoked bcoz they never thought raghav say something like that .
Bcoz he live a luxury life and they live a normal life then they are tensed how he manage to stay there .
R- i hope u both don't have any problem if i come there with u all .
Kamala & vitthal only nodded in no .
V- raghav baba we don't have any problem but
R- so that's final we are coming with u .
Kalpi go and pack bags .
Kalpi only nodded and leave from there.
...
Hush finish
Sorty if u find it boring or i dissapoint u . Nxt update on friday . Bcoz i need to update ragna new ss .
BLACK MAILING AGAIN I UPDATE ON FRIDAY ONLY IF I GET 50 LIKES
why i need to blackmail ??
is this story become boring?
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yippee me first 🤗. My God neha. Thank you so much. So his reaction to Kamla taking kalpi is he'll go with them. Omg. How will he stay there. I hope kalpi has seperate room there. Update soon 😃 😆 😉
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome yaar this rag is too lovely he is so caring n take care of kalpi happiness n he go with her so sweet
update soon
neha it shows how much we want t read more that our love t u dear no fear😆
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

till now i've not updated anything and u all are ressing 😆

sometimes i feel that u all throw chappals on me after reading updates😕
friends sometimes i got scared with ur love😳
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear ,
U have medical insurance naa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No jokes,we are cultured and well behaving barbarians.

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