16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#921

Originally posted by: MagicalMadness
Omg 😲 not fair rags wasn't supposed to leave 😭 I thought he would finally make it up to kalpi and try to be friends and then maybe more bring him back , bring him back 😡

Waiting for more 😉

Well ...the title of the chapter itself says - Had he finally left '?'. I never said he did 😉😛

Waiting to write more as well 😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#922

Originally posted by: chitra8710
Amazing update loved it.

Glad to know that !! 😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#923

Originally posted by: Shinechilli
AWESOME UPDATE,I LOVED IT.THANK YOU!!! I'M HAPPY THAT KALPI GOT WHAT SHE WANTED AND DESERVED SPECIALLY.ABOUT RAGHAV WHAT CAN I SAY ITS JUST "GOOD RIDDANCE".

Why are u saying thank you ? Ulta I thought I would surely get to hear cuss words for I hadn't updated this story for months ...😛

Anyways Happy to hear that u liked the update 😃

Yep , kalpi got what she wanted ... Her life is back to where it was , but was it perfect ? I don't think so , she had very restricted thoughts about her version of a perfect life.

She definitely requires a change & who could do a better job than a person who has undergone similar difficulties in life. Well not all riddances are good ... You'll soon realize why I said that 😃😊

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#924

Originally posted by: -Maggi-
Missed reading ur stories mariee more than that missed reading ur kindda unique Narration 😆
as per update i didnt know nethu was this kamine thanq god shail helped them n
Raghav is he finally turning in to hero ?? this saving scene reminded me of RRvsMI ke saving scene in rain 😃 hero wali entry 😆

And I missed reading your comments santhiii...

RRVSMI wala saving scene was another level (I know khud ki hi taarif nahi karni chahiye but still *facepalms*) shots hasn't yet reached that stage ...

Btw this comment mainly seemed for 15th shot ... I think you haven't read 16th yet ..it's on pg 130

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#925

Originally posted by: shahsb_26
Bass yehi tha... Happy Diwali... 😆
Bomb phute and RagNa gaye apne apne raaste...

Yes yehi tha .. 😆

Raaste are soon gonna crash again 😉

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#926

Originally posted by: anurose
Thanx for beautiful update.. was waiting for it for so long.. finally rags left Kalpis place... wil Kalpi n rags wil miss each other?? Janne ke liye please update next part soon :))

Sorry to keep you waiting , even I wasn't liking the Time I'd taken off from writing ..but I couldn't really help it. Anyways now I'm back & I ain't going until I complete my stories 😃

Will kalpi & rags miss each other ? Miss toh tab karenge jab alag hue honge in the first place - oops , did I reveal something from the next update ? 😉😛