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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: sweet1308
awesome update
its really fabulous
update soon

TYSM

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: shahsb_26
One More Mariee!!

Comment kabhi mat kar tu (that was a taunt) ...🤢

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: TheLifeDiaries
Di...This update was quite a surprise for me as it was much earlier than usual. Thanks for that.

Coming to the shot...it was fabulously written. On mention of rrvsmi I went into that time zone so thanks for it...moon light and sea in bg...an update in mariee's style I must say. Loved it thoroughly...hope that the secret of Kashmir will soon unfurl. Thanks for this update again. Love you Di...Tenthie.

Hehehe ...I know , thoda jaldi de diya na update ?? I'm improving u see... 😆

Glad to hear that u loved it Tenthie 😃

RRVSMI ...lol ,I know ! But it was a bit difficult for me to write it with the chars of shots ...these guys are too khadoos (I know I have only made em so) unlike there where MoRi were like quite a balance of khadoospan & humour ...Nonetheless , its good to be out of my comfort zone 😊

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: chitra8710
Awesome update loved it.

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: sampa79
Wow, awesome update

Ty 😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: meenukansal
Awesome update plz next part soon

Shall update soon

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: premap
Fab update. Good that Rags has turned into a 'punching bag' for Kalpi.

Tysm ...😃

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: anurose
Awesome update...I love dis Marie style of writing plus small tips or statement u write in red...thanks a lot for it...bechara rags kitne punches khaye, do char punches khate he bata deta ki roshish ki tickets cancel ho gaye...par nahi!!! Marie ka style hai yeh!!..it rocks 😉
Finally ragna fights over n New beginning of ragna romance...

Tysm anu ...mega mega glad that u r enjoying reading the story 😃

The part in red ...u made me climb the world's tallest chane ka jhaad 😆😛

Ragna romance ...kyunki Raghav itna intense hota jaa raha hai toh romance bhi intense hi hoyega 😉😆