16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 4

nice dear... I luvd it... Update plzzz nxt chappy soon maru

Raghav's mom wants to stay in an indian house. My house door is open for them. I won't mind serving chai-nashta to her hot-hot son.😎

Resss

Unres..
Heyylooo mariee..
Seems lyk u r in full form huh.. 😉
Raghav n kalpi r gonna stay under the same roof.. den it ll be superrr intrestng to read..!! Nyc n diifrnt concept.. im already lykng it.. 😃 and dnt wry its jus intruductn ryt.. so its gud dat u gave a detail of all the characters.. hwver frm next on it ll be more on ragna nlyyy naa.. 😉 and abt rohish.. I guess RRVMI's effect dat u cant imagine pakhya in dat char.. 😆 and as always kalpi-rohish bondng s good.. so dis tym will raghav ll knw dat rohish is her brother lol 😆 jus kiddng..
So the last part.. dey bumped into each other..? 😛 then toh fytng shuru hojayega.. im excited to read more.. hw ragna ll be able to bear each other under the same roof..?! Hw dey ll cum closer.. and anyways raghav ll be thankng her mom later fr makng him stay in a home instead of hotel.. then he ll lykng mumbai too.. 😆
And title.. the day u came.. dat sounds good.. 😊 😉

Awesome shot Maruskhaa kya tum koi boring event mein thi jab yeh dhamakedaar shot likha waiting for next shot.

Wonderful update maru ...lovely story dear...

Lovely update dear. Pls update next part soon.waiting for ragna scene.

Nice update and waiting for the romantic stand in between Rs vs Kj 😉

Lovely start
And I like option two "The day you came"

wow
dis is 1st word left frm my lips aftr finish reading.
Its totaly diferent n just lovable story.

Superb update maaru😃
starting is just amazing, kalpi cme hme while talking with prem n signaling rohish to put shoes on place and other hand she is straightening sofa cover, shows hw independent and multitasking she is.
Phone convo is amazing. Prem pleading her and kalpi speaking with sarscaticaly, and later prem's try best weapon, emotional blackmailing, and yes its work, kalpi ready 4 it.

Mumbai's best event manager 'Ms
Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav, kalpi said it by luking in mirror, pure pride reflected in it.

Finaly the day arrieve, kalpi get nervous as her frnds career is depen on it as well as her talent is going to watch by international ppl. She is making last minutes preparations and rohish msg come wich made her happy in dis nervous state as well. Lovely bro sis jodi.

Here akdu entry done, n prem got nervous coz he knw kalpi hate egostic ppl and it may going to tough for him.raghav got mother's cld n he get more iritate to ans her plus to live in small flat. Wow its going to be full ok dhamakedar to see iritate ragna with each other living in same roof.
Kalpi hurriedly walk into elivator and bump on sum1 n he must be raghav only coz it is maaru's story😆
superb update dear.

Wow it was just superb '