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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww ragna r tooo cute...
While reading I was smiling...raghav love kalpi alott bt don't knw y he doubted her...reason is prem nd his obsession i guess...
Plzzz complete the update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear but please complet it
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Posted: 10 years ago
i'll complete it till night as for now i'm busy with my studies
once i complete with that chapter i'll try to complete it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Fab update Neha..😛
raghav sow kalpi 2 how much he love her ...😳 i like raghavs surprise 😃he decoreted his room with his or her pic😳...he proposed kalpi 4 marriage...😳..first kalpi say no ...but finally she say yes 😳
naughty Raghav ...😉😆 really fab update dear...
update soon ...
Edited by switymango - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So far so good pls continue 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE:
U GUYS KNIW VERY WELL THAT IN 1/2 UPDATES RAGNA GETING MARRIED FOR THIS I NEED TO WHAT PROMISES BRIDE & GROOM GIVE TO EACH OTHER . I'VE NO IDEA ABOUT THIS SO PLZ TELL ME ABOUT THAT ..
PLZ DO THIS FAVOR ON ME
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and yes i want to know if u're really liking this story or not don't be scared i'm not planning to discontinue it but only i want to know being a maths honours student i don't know anything about bussiness so logics ki to band bajj gyi ...
most of u know this that there are many illogical tracks in this story and i'm most unromantic person so i've no expectations from myself that i write any romantic scene perfectly ...
when i start this story i'm aure that nobody like this biut don't know how it reach there it's eighth wonder for me ...
sorry for my bak bak but plz help me in that case
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha
search SEVEN VOWS in marriage on google

here they are:
Seven Vows In Hindu Wedding
  • The bride and the groom take the first step of the seven vows to pledge that they would provide a prospered living for the household or the family that they would look after and avoid those that might hinder their healthy living.
  • During the second step of the seven pheras, the bride and the groom promise that they would develop their physical, mental and spiritual powers in order to lead a lifestyle that would be healthy.
  • During the third vow, the couple promises to earn a living and increase by righteous and proper means, so that their materialistic wealth increases manifold.
  • While taking the fourth vow, the married couple pledges to acquire knowledge, happiness and harmony by mutual love, respect, understanding and faith.
  • The fifth vow is taken to have expand their heredity by having children, for whom, they will be responsible. They also pray to be blessed with healthy, honest and brave children.
  • While taking the sixth step around the sacred fire, the bride and the groom pray for self-control of the mind, body and soul and longevity of their marital relationship.
  • When the bride and the groom take the seventh and the last vow, they promise that they would be true and loyal to each other and would remain companions and best of friends for the lifetime.
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Posted: 10 years ago
😛

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Neha

search SEVEN VOWS in marriage on google

here they are:
Seven Vows In Hindu Wedding
  • The bride and the groom take the first step of the seven vows to pledge that they would provide a prospered living for the household or the family that they would look after and avoid those that might hinder their healthy living.
  • During the second step of the seven pheras, the bride and the groom promise that they would develop their physical, mental and spiritual powers in order to lead a lifestyle that would be healthy.
  • During the third vow, the couple promises to earn a living and increase by righteous and proper means, so that their materialistic wealth increases manifold.
  • While taking the fourth vow, the married couple pledges to acquire knowledge, happiness and harmony by mutual love, respect, understanding and faith.
  • The fifth vow is taken to have expand their heredity by having children, for whom, they will be responsible. They also pray to be blessed with healthy, honest and brave children.
  • While taking the sixth step around the sacred fire, the bride and the groom pray for self-control of the mind, body and soul and longevity of their marital relationship.
  • When the bride and the groom take the seventh and the last vow, they promise that they would be true and loyal to each other and would remain companions and best of friends for the lifetime.
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thanx ritu
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting Update. Waiting to see the outcome of Pooki/ Prem 's planning .
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 20

Singhania mention
After kalpi's acceptence they spend some time with each other they didn't exchange a single word .only kalpi hide her face in his chest too shy to face him and raghav very well understand her shyness he give time to her . They are felling blessed to being each other arms never wanting this moments to end...

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Kapoor mention

Sahil & neetu got a call from a goon that they kidnapp gauri and with the help of doctor that treating him as he is a powerful bussinessman and know very well how to threat or to buy anyone it's not a difficult talk for sahil ...

On other side prem & pakhi decide to create misunderstanding in work and many things as they think that there misunderstandings are enough to break there relationship but the thing they don't know that kalpi & raghav never keep any misunderstanding above each other...
...

Raghav & kalpi are now outside chawl they decide that he talk to kamala now about there relationship and both headed toward her home as kalpi enter she notice vitthal & pakhya are there waiting for her to arrive .
When vitthal notice kalpi he notice bandage on her forehead he panicked and ask her how this happen??
Raghav was about to tell him about her accident but kalpi cut him and say nothing baba i slip from stairs nothing more as she doesn't want vitthal to take stress . When raghav ask him about kamala then vitthal imform them that she goes to village as kalpi's dadi health is not well and she come back in 14/15 days . With no option left rather than wait for kamala raghav take leave from there giving a assuring look to kalpi ..
That night both lay wide awake on there beds as sleep was far away from there eyes lost in each other thought ,in each other love the feeling of being each other in future fill there heart with happiness...
Twelve days passes like this pakhi and preem try hard to create misunderstanding b/w them but of no use kalpi & raghav never allow any misunderstanding b/w them in these days prem also try to contact kalpi and ask her to meet him but kalpi who very well aware that raghav never like prem near her ignore his calls and everytime he try to meet him every time she give any excuse to him


Nxt day
Kalpi is talking with sammy as tomorrow is raghav's birthday it's very special day for her as for the first time she is with raghav on his birthday sammy inform kalpana that he never celebrate his birthday but kalpi say that on those days he was alone but now we are here . Then how we miss this ???
Sammy has no other option as what she said is truth after kalpana arrival raghav change a lot and that too for good and he know if not for himself but foe kalpi's happiness he never deny to celebrate but after that too they decide to keep it simple and only for family ie, raghav , kalpi , sammy & maya are only part of this ...
Kalpi immidetly rush from office as she is getting late raghav tell her that he drop her home but she refuses as she need to take some gifts for raghav...
But kalpi stop when a car stop in front of her first she thougt it was raghav but no it was prem .
Prem stop his car infront of her and ask her to sit inside car she try to refuse but then prem say i know u doesn't forgive me that day u accept my frienship but u not even talk to me properly
K- it's nothing like that prem, but i'm in hurry today
P- plz kalpi i need ur help plz
K- prem plz try to understand
P- i know why are u refusing it's bcoz of raghav then let me call him and ask his permission
K( almost shout )- no
As she very well know what are the outcomes
Prem look toward her
P- kalpi plz it's urgent
K- okk but i leave as soon as possible
P-okk
And with this kalpi get inside car
...
In some restaurant
( prem booked whole restursnt)
K- prem what are we doing here u tell me that u have some urgent work with me
P- yes actually i call my girlfriend here
K- what?
Are u mad why u want me to meet her
P-relax girl , i'm not saying this she come here till 7pm and now it's only 6 . So she came here after 1 hr
K- but what i do in all this??
P- actually i'm nervous so i thought u are my friend so u help me
K- mr. Prem kapoor how i help u in this??
P-i'm unable to decide how to propose her
K- then
P- will u do reharsals with me
K- what rubbish ???
I'm not doing anythimg like that
P-plz kalpi u say na u are my friend
K- prem plz try to understand i'm getting late and i've also much more important work
P- plz kalpi first and last time after that i promise i can't disturb u ..
Kalpi has no way to get out from this situation and when he say that he can't disturb her after this . She nodded as she is in too much hurry
K- okk do what u want to but it's last time after that i can't help u

Prem then sit on his knees and start
I love u
Will u marry me
I promise that i never hurt u
I promise that i'll try to give every happiness of this world
( kalpi who want to finish this drama as soon as possible )
Kalpi nodded his head in yes
Prem immidatly get up and hug her .
Smirk as his plan get succesful
He see raghav fuming in anger and as he hug her he clentch his fist without uttering a single word raghav left from there in anger , in pain ...
Kalpi was too schoked to react as prem suddenly hug her she push him in anger
K- prem what is this
P- what happen kalpi??
K- don't u dare to do this again and in anger she left from there
She has no idea about raghav being there as prem very carefully planned everything
As she left prem phine ring he pick up call smirking
Pk- bhai our plan got succesful raghav just leave from here
P - i know
When he remember how he plan all this
As there plans flop one by one ptem decide to his last stroke he instuct pakhi as when kalpi is with him ,pakhi take raghav outside office with some excuse where raghav notice kalpi in prwm's car he follow them as he never believe prem
and from outside he see everything but unable to hear a single word his chain of patince broke finally when he saw prem hugging kalpi ..

Prem thought now on one save there relation not even kalpi
..
At night
Kalpi is waiting for raghav's call as after there confession she & raghav daily talk in night , raghav always call her but she was wondering that today why he can't call her .
After waiting for an hour she decide to call him herself but his phone is switched off now she become tense as he never do this .
She calk sammy but he infork him that he call raghav 2/3 hrs before but he was in anger and say he doesn't want to meet anyone and now kalpi become more tensed but she can't go to him as it's 11 in night
Sammy sense his tension and say kalpi don't worry may be it's bcoz he never celebrate his birthday so he switch off his mobile and say we talk with him in morning
Kalpi is not convainced but she has no other way also ...
She try to sleep but due to raghav's behavoiur she can't feel anything good , her heart say that something went wrong and she pass that night wide awake
...
Nxt morning ( Raghav's birthday)
Kalpi get ready immideatly it's 7in morning and sge want to wish raghav from night till now she try 100 times his no. but everytime it's switch off .
One hour before she call sammy and ask him to check raghav and she reach singhania mention till 8 and sammy do as she say...
After some time sammy call her and she immidatly pick his call
K- sammy how is raghav ?? Is he okk ?? Plz give him phone
Sammy only listen her and without answerimg a single question he say kalpi plz come here as soon as possible he is not alright
Kalpi's hurt sank by listning that words she rush to singhania mantion as soon as possible
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Outside singhania mantion
Sammy & maya waiting for kalpi and kalpi reach there in some minutes
K- where is raghav ?? What's wrong sammy??
S- i don't know what happwn to him wgen he reach here we saw him that he is sitting inside and drinking i don't know how much bottle he drink now but when i try to stop him he push me and say not to come here
S- kalpi did he do any argument with u ??
Plz don't take me wrong but his is not in condition of even standing
Kalpi's heart break in million pieces with sammy each word she say i'll manage him
Sammy & maya nodded and say plz take care of him & ur's also and they leave from there they know very well this time it's only kalpana who shooth him , only she take his pain away ...
...
Kalpi enter inside singhania mention and she saw everything is mess he broke everything there
When she saw raghav lying on floor drunk havily and tears start forming in her eyes as raghav broke his promise today he promise her that he never drink but here he drunk that much that he's unable to stand on his feets
Kalpi sit on floor beside raghav keep her hand on his cheeks when she realize that he is mummering something , her name
R( in very low tone)
Kalpi plz don't leave me i can't live without u plz come back
He only muttering that words contonuiosly in his subconcious state
Kalpi keep her palm on his cheeks and say
K- raghav
He doesn't respond
K- raghav
He try to open his eyes on sensing a fimilar touch . It's very difficult for him to open his eyes but he try his best and open his eyes and look toward her who is crying continiously
When he sense kalpi is there he hug her tightly , he take her in bone crushing her as he hold his life ..
@nd say plz don't leave me plz
She make him look in her eyes and say i'll never leave u

K- raghav why u drink ?? U promise me u never drink that u share ur sorrows with me ? Then why u drunk ??
@nd raghav anger take over him when he remember the previous day events he broke that hug and held her hands tightly too tightly he say
R- how could u do this me ??
U met prem i told u na and moreever he hug u
U didn't even care about my words then why i keep my promise
Kalpi got highly scared as she for the first time withness his this side ,his eyes are red some due to drinking and some due to anger when she realize that he take everything wrong.
K- raghav it's nothing as u are thinking
R- then what was that ??
K- don't u trust me raghav ??
R- how could u meet prem when i told u not to , do u have any idea what if he harm u he take u away from me ???
Then what i do ??
He push kalpi and a broken piece of glass dug in her palm and it start bleeding and she winch in pain
Raghav who didn't notice that say
U have any idea how much it hurt when u saw ur love in anyone arms
K- raghav
R- i trust u but how i trust kapoors who are too greedy
Kalpi's hand bleedimg but her sole attention on his words tears continuiisly flowing from her eyes due to pain but not her due to raghav's pain
She thought that she is the only reason of raghav's this condition if she tell him about that before he never been so sad in so much pain on his special day , she saw his insecurities which are very fimilar to her as they suffer from same kind of pain how could she don't understand him ???
She get up and hug him and say plz trust me raghav it's nothing like that
R- i know u never do this to me
K- then why are u punishing urself
R- bcoz what i saw his pain is unberable. I know this time also u get away from me
K- u are the one who always say no one take me away from my raghav then why are u saying all this she hug him more tightly
K- how i make u believe that no one take u away from me??
R- marry me
Kalpi look toward him
R- marry me kalpi plz today itself
K- raghav what are u saying ?? U are drunk right now come with me
R- marry me kalpi
K- plz raghav try to understand how we marry without aai baba ??
R-we will make them understand later but answer my question first
K- no raghav
R-what if ur aai baba not allow our marrige ?? and told u to leave me then also u leave me???
Kalpi look at him schokingly unable to utter a word
R- marry me kalpi otherwise if someone take u away from me then i'll die at that moment itself
and kalpi put her hand on his mouth she don't want to hear anything
She know his way is wrong but his all words are true if kamala not give permission this marrige due to pakhi then she lost him for foreever to pakhi she know ...
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Sry for delay and no marrige in this part but it's really too much long and i'm tired so much , i'll try to give marrige part tomorrow i know that u may all not like this do tell me honestly plz it's a request sry if u find it boring and for delay plz hit like if u like it and drop ur comments bcoz i need to know ur opinion about this part sorry if u find it illogical andif u want i'll try to edit this part in a better way...
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago

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