Marriage:- Love or Responsibility Part 3 pg19 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Barkha, wat a coincidence!!!!
Mumbai is experiencing the Barkha in full shades nd so r we, in the shape of this beautiful FF.

LOVE Nd Responsibility two sides of the same coin , yet love is explored maximum by writers nd very few hv explored Responsibility along with love.

You are beautifully unfolding the story in this respect. When u truely love someone from the core of yr heart ,u automatically become responsible nd wen u whole heartedly be Responsibility of someone love develops, matures nd reaches to its Pinnacle.
Isn't it like theory of relativity of Eisenstein, E = mc2, E being energy of love is equal to loads of responsibilties enjoyed over the period of time. Sorry I became too Technical😉😉

Both Raghav nd Kalpana hv seen nd experienced love nd gone through its failures either due to cruel play of destiny or wickedness of human nature. They hv learned to come to terms nd move on. But they hv a lovely bundle of joy n luv who is their responsibility too to unite them. Muskaan is bringing back tenderness in life of Raghav nd same time becoming the cause of fear nd darkest insecurity n toughest test in the life of Kalpana nd foundation stone in making of Raghav.

I hv guessed about Ashok, stalker nd other things too , but will wait for u to reveal it in future chappies. You perfectly captured emotions of Kalpana who's betrayed in love, fighting against all odds of life , helplessness of single mother, feeling insecured nd fearful about custody of her child her life. She has lost the battle of love of spouse , now only love tht has remained in her life istht ofher daughter's, nd more than Muskaan needs her she needs Muskaan. Children r the strongest bond of mother nd weakest link on which abusive father nd cruel society findsmost easy to hammer nd break the Morales nd self esteem of a woman, a mother. Ashok isno less nd Kalpana is caged in his malicious plans.

However fortunately Raghav has known it ,nd probably aware of stalker ?It will be interesting to see how sympathy will transform to Responsibility nd eventually LOVE.

Thnx for a beautiful update, sorry for delayed response nd looking forward for new update.🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update yaar. How sweet muski is!! Poor Soul is yearning for fatherly love. Maybe not as a Father, but found a strong bond with him , maybe as a Friend cum Uncle.who wants to mint money on this baseless story of raghav Kalpi and muski. ?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

Hey Barkha, wat a coincidence!!!!

Mumbai is experiencing the Barkha in full shades nd so r we, in the shape of this beautiful FF.

LOVE Nd Responsibility two sides of the same coin , yet love is explored maximum by writers nd very few hv explored Responsibility along with love.

You are beautifully unfolding the story in this respect. When u truely love someone from the core of yr heart ,u automatically become responsible nd wen u whole heartedly be Responsibility of someone love develops, matures nd reaches to its Pinnacle.
Isn't it like theory of relativity of Eisenstein, E = mc2, E being energy of love is equal to loads of responsibilties enjoyed over the period of time. Sorry I became too Technical😉😉

Both Raghav nd Kalpana hv seen nd experienced love nd gone through its failures either due to cruel play of destiny or wickedness of human nature. They hv learned to come to terms nd move on. But they hv a lovely bundle of joy n luv who is their responsibility too to unite them. Muskaan is bringing back tenderness in life of Raghav nd same time becoming the cause of fear nd darkest insecurity n toughest test in the life of Kalpana nd foundation stone in making of Raghav.

I hv guessed about Ashok, stalker nd other things too , but will wait for u to reveal it in future chappies. You perfectly captured emotions of Kalpana who's betrayed in love, fighting against all odds of life , helplessness of single mother, feeling insecured nd fearful about custody of her child her life. She has lost the battle of love of spouse , now only love tht has remained in her life istht ofher daughter's, nd more than Muskaan needs her she needs Muskaan. Children r the strongest bond of mother nd weakest link on which abusive father nd cruel society findsmost easy to hammer nd break the Morales nd self esteem of a woman, a mother. Ashok isno less nd Kalpana is caged in his malicious plans.

However fortunately Raghav has known it ,nd probably aware of stalker ?It will be interesting to see how sympathy will transform to Responsibility nd eventually LOVE.

Thnx for a beautiful update, sorry for delayed response nd looking forward for new update.🤗


Well Ahmedabad is no good in terms of rain as compared to Mumbai.

Coming on to your comment well you have somewhere beautifully tapped the essence of story but not exactly...😉

You are absolutely right Kalpana needs Muskaan more than she need her...may be beacuse the little girl doesn't know what her mother is going through. Raghav does know about her problem...as he has promised to keep an eye on her.

Who is Ashok? Who is stalker? Whether Raghav knows about him? Well your questions and guesses will be answered in the future chappies.😉

You know this but I would like to reiterate i just love reading your comments. Your analysis is a treat for me as a writer. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Beautiful update yaar. How sweet muski is!! Poor Soul is yearning for fatherly love. Maybe not as a Father, but found a strong bond with him , maybe as a Friend cum Uncle.who wants to mint money on this baseless story of raghav Kalpi and muski. ?


Its so good to see your coment after suchha long time. Expect more like this from you in future.😊

Mushki is indeed very sweet. She has build a strong bond with Raghav (will get to know howin future chappies)😛

You have to wait to know who wants to mint money?😉

thanks for comment😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Please update the next chapter
b.baheti thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Will update soon dear but first in list is LBA.
That will also take time coz I'm down with fever.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hope you get well soon. Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lagta hai Diwali sweets zyada kha liye, jo fever chadh gaya.😉😉😉
Jokes apart get well soon, Nd update soon.😊😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pls update next chapter😭😭😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Please come back soon and continue this story

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