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@ovee and bricka.. Update coming.. (Full tomorrow)😉
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!

Precap:

Road closed !!!

The yellow board in front of us read...

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Why?? Why?? Why???

What the hell did I do to deserve such an awful day??

We both looked at each other.. This was the last thing I would wish for.. coz no matter how handsome the guy besides me was he was a stranger and today would be my doomsday if I don't reach on time at home...

Raghav quickly pulled out his cell phone from his coat pocket and.."NO INTERNET", he said..."Darn his service-provider"..This just keeps getting better .. doesn't it.. It started with a boring wedding then that 'chatni giri' (literally) .. my phone is dead.. my mom dad are probably freaking out right now and here I am stuck with this guy.. Wow.. just awesome.. My brain just kept making sarcastic remarks..

The road was quite deserted one.. a rare thing in mumbai but this place actually had no shops just few under-construction buildings and no people walking around ..

I think we have to take a reverse turn.. then we could ask someone for alternative way", I just nodded and just when he switched the gear and was about to hit the accelerator while looking back I said," Umm.. Raghav can I have your phone?? Maybe this time my call will be connected..".. "Ya sure", he said with a smile and handed me over his iphone..

Hush.. I sighed almost audibly on hearing the phone ring.. Pick up baba.. pick up.. And probably the first great thing of the evening baba picked up right after second ring.. "Hello baba??".."Kalpi..??"..."Ha..(Yes)"...

And as expected just after yes the question bombardment started... Where are you?? Why didn't you inform us?? etc etc

"Baba.. mala bolu tar dya..(baba, let me atleast speak)...", his already panicky voice was making me nervous and I began to second my thoughts on whether to tell him that I'm travelling with some stranger and we have probably lost our way or I should make up something..

And then I heard my aai's voice," Kalpi.. beta where are you?? When did you leave the venue?? We were searching for you and then we thought you may have come home but then you were not here too.. atleast you should have informed us.. where are you and when are you coming back?? Please don't tell me you again got called to he hospital for some emergency", and guess so that was my answer..

Still unsure whether I'm doing it right or not I stammered nervously" A.. aai.. I.."... Sach bola toh Aai is gonna be totally tensed till she sees me back at home and jhooth bola toh she'll be fine and plus I would be reaching jome in some time.. Happy with my decision I started speaking," Ya I just got a call so I left immediately without informing plus my cell phone wasn't working... So just borrowed my colleague's phone to inform you huus.. I'll be back in sometime. you both don't worry and go sleep I have the house keys.."..."But how are you coming..??".. she asked in worried tone.."No need to come by cab or anything I'll send the driver.."... "No.. no.. aai.. Its ok I'll manage.. Ok bye I have got to go..", saying so I immediately ended the call before aai could enquire more..

I looked besides me and that's when I noticed the empty driver's seat but before I could look around the door clicked open and Raghav was back.. "Got the alternative way.. We need to ask the route again at the right turn at second signal..", I just hmm..ed while nodding my head.. "You informed your parents??", he asked while fastening his seat belt.. "Yup.. thanks", I replied while handing him over his phone ...

Maybe my bad luck was finally over.. I have informed aai-baba .. Raghav got the way and now in few minutes I'll be at home..

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"Ouch", I yelped on feeling the hard plastic of the dashboard hit my head.. Rubbing my forehead I slowly opened my eyes.. God knows when I fell asleep..

The car had stopped.. maybe we have reached ... slowly adjusting to the light in the car I looked outside the window happily thinking that finally I'm back home but the scene outside was totally unfamiliar...

"Raghav where are we??", I asked worried,scared and with god knows how many other emotions.. He just looked at me blankly.. The kind of expression we give to anyone when we have messed up .. "You have no idea right??", I said in hope of getting a negative reply but his nod just gave me the opposite answer..

And here I was thinking that finally my day actually night was better.. "Somewhere between Mumbai and Pune..", I heard his meek voice.. Pune??!!! How on earth did we reach Pune..??!!!.. "Raghav??", I started saying," You didn't take the new highway did you??"

"What new highway??", he asked.. "Oh great.. !!", This time really I was loosing my cool.. "You drive without knowing where you're going?? God ..how can you?? Arrghh!!??", I immediately got out of the car .. coz a minute more and I may say things that I'll regret..

Raghav too got down .. We both didn't talk after that and then after about ten minutes he said," I have called up my driver.. he's gonna take time to reach here till then lets see if we get some other mode of transport.. I looked at my watch,"At 12??", I asked..

To which he just pointed at some place behind me.. I turned to see and there was some dhaba.. He took some stuff from the car and after locking it we were walking to the dhaba..

While walking there I felt as if the silence around us was yelling at me.. He was actually helping me and for the same reason we landed up here.. Technically it wasn't his fault.. I mean it was but all he was doing was to drop me home safely... "Raghav", I said my voice low maybe even inaudible but he heard me and turned his face to look at me.. "I'm sorry.. Actually I.. "..

"You were worried I know..", he said not letting me complete.. I again opened my mouth to say something and he said," Actually I don't travel by road a lot.. and even if I do I have my driver is with me.. So I don't know the roads much.. And plus there wasn't a toll plaza on the way so I didn't realise that we were going out of mumbai.."

I nodded knowing that he was right as the last time I went by this road with Aai-baba I didnt remember coming across some toll plaza.. "But you should've asked", I said.. seriously why didn't I tape my mouth??.. "I thought we were on the right road and I didn't realise that we've been travelling for so long until now when the petrol got over..", Raghav pov: Coz hell I was busy eother staring a you or thinking about you..

K Pov:
There were many trucks parked outside the dhaba.. We went inside ... Those stupid anklets and bangles making noise in that way too silent atmosphere made me feel awkward as I felt as if all eyes were on me and while I was lost in all this Raghav's hand slipped into mine and he pushed me little close.. Oblivious to my gaze he kept walking ahead..

We walked to the counter were a sardarji was busy teloing something to his workers.."Bhaiyya yaha par koi bus stop wagera hai kya?? (Is there any bus stop nearby??"), Raghav asked the sardar who probably owned the dhaba.. And then they were talking while I looked around..

Winters are really pleasant but definately not when you aren't wearing warms clothes.. The constantly blowing breeze made me shiver and I wrapped myself in the dupatta but it didn't really help but then something warm covered me.. It was Raghav's blazer..

At this speed by the end of our journey I'm going to be full on lattoo.. I sarcastically to myself and then he snapped his fingers in front of my eyes.. Oh boy I was lost in eyes.. Again.. I quickly lowered my eyes and then he said," That man said that most of the truck are on their way to Mumbai.. We could ask for lift.. What say??", he looked at me anticipatedly and for once words came out of mouth instead of a nod," Ya great idea.. And if we wait for your driver to come it'll be morning by the time we reach"..

Next few moments went with me looking around while moving my kegs back and forth while Raghav went on May-We-Get-A-Lift mission.. The darkness had civered the greenery around but yet everything shined because of the bright stars in the sky.. Another not-very-common sight in cities 'Stars'.. This place had many and I was busy admiring them..

R Pov:

Finally one of those truck-drivers agreed to help.. I called up my driver Ramu and informed him to get the duplicate key of the car coz I was gonna leave before he comes.. And as I neared the place were Kalpana was sitting I saw her looking at the sky.. Her eyes twinkling and the dimlight around her along with tge moonlight making her look no less than an angel..

K Pov:

"Kalpana", I heard hkm call out and I immeditely got off the chaar-paai (I have no idea what's it calldd in englished.. It a bed like thing made up of rope)... "A guy agreed to give us lift and in three-four hours we'll be back.. Actually its a truck na so its gonna gake a little longer..".. I smiled on hearing his words.. finally we were going back..

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And the silence was back.. We were now sitting on opposite sides on the not very yet little comfortable hay with our backs touching the wooden boxes ...

Fifteen minutes too seemed like an hour.. Finally I broke the silence," So you were from groom's side or bride's??"... "Groom's.. Actually it was my friend's wedding.. You??".. "Oh me.. I was from bride's side.. It was my uncle's cousin sister's brother-in-law's daughter's marriage.", I ended in an overly dramatic way and he was laughing... "Feeling sleepy??", he asked.. "Nope.. you??".. and he nodded his head in negative..

And again silence descended.. but this time just after five minutes he said," So what do you do??"... "I'm a doctor.. ".. "So.. Dr.Kalpana..."Jadhav" ,I completed.."You??".."Family business"..

With that we started telling each other about our lives.. He had shifted back to india just a month back after spending his teenage years studying and then helping his father in business.. now he was here to set up his own company ..

Then till the time we reached at my place we were just chit-chatting... The almost three and a half hours seemed not more than a few minutes ..

Raghav got down first to help me get down.. And here it was.. probably the last good bye.. I thought sadly..

R Pov:

"Bye..", I heard her say.. Trying hard to smile I too bid bye.. She just turned and walked away.. Watching srk movies(thanks to my pretty-much annoying sister) had taught me one..

DDLJ dialogue: Raghav agar yeh tujhe pyar karti hai toh yeh palat ke dekhegi ... palat ... palat!!!

(Raghav, If she loves you then she will turn around and see you ... turn ... turn!)

And I saw her disapppear behind her building gates but.. not before she turned and waved her hand at me.. And just when I was about to turn and go "Raghav!!", I heared her voice from.. That moment I could swear was the best one ever . SHE CAME BACK...

to give me my blazer..

I sighed in disappointment.. She handed me my blazer and after a quick thankyou.. she left..

K Pov:

I again turned to look back at him.. holding his blazer he hopped on the truck and here I entered the my building.. My situation was such an antethesis.. Hours ago I was super eager to reach back home and now I just felt .. actually woshed that I could rewind time..

Standing in front of the elevator I pressed the button and just a moment later I heard someone's huffing sound.. "Raghav??!!!", I said slightly shocked-more happy-but still shocked.. And the next moment I felt his lips on mine..

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The elevator sound brought us back ... His hand held my waist while mine was on his chest , his heart beat as fast as mine..

We just kissed.. but why.. I mean.. it felt right yet it was just so.. weird.. We both stared into each others eyes .. My hand slowly moved away from his chest and so did his.. With a blank mind I turned and entered the lift.. Glancing at those 1-20 numbers I finally clicked on 12..

Now when I think about that I can't help but laugh.. Everything in slow motion like it is in hindi movies .. but that day I understood why is it always in slow motion.. It helps in increasing the duration of the best moment of your life giving you enough time to live each second of it..

The elevator door was slowly closing and the only thing I wished for is he stops me.. but it didn't happened and the lift started moving.. The feeling at that moment couldn't possibly be described in words.. I was loosing something really precious to me but how much ever I wished I couldn't really do anything.. maybe I could but I didn't..

P.S Sorry for not completing yesterday.. I was really tired..
Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Disclaimer: I'm writing it without using dimaag so I suggest you too read it in the same way..

I was planning to use some dimaag while writing RagNa confession but then aisa kuch hua nahi..😆

Three days later..

"What happened??".. "Nothing ..nothing.. and for the last time nothing Maya!!".. I finally yelled tired of her questions.. This girl uses her lawyer-giri 24x7 ...

Oh yeah I forgot to tell Maya's a lawyer in fact a pretty good one and that gives me my pretty great reasons to stay away from her..

One she knows me better than anyone else and two she can make anyone tell the stuff the other person does not mean to..

"Fine.. You don't wanna tell then don't..", She said while jumping on the sofa where I was sitting startling me a bit.. She giving up is like a tiger (or lion.. or whatever) taking two steps back to pounce on you.. But then we started talking on random topics..

"So what's your plan for tonight??", Maya asked while taking the TV remote from me.. Confused on what was it today I just replied," What's today??".. "New year's eve buddhu..".. Oh wow.. this is called being female-devdas.. I didn't even know that it was 31st.. great going Kalpi... your Paro urf Raghav is really getting in your head and this Chunnilaal urf Maya is so not helping.. But I'm wondering who chandramukhi is..

While I was busy in my thoughts about Devdas and all Maya just said in a casual tone," You know what you should come with me to the party.. You never know maybe you'll find your Raj..".."Raj nahi Raghav..", I corrected her.. Oops..

I closed my eyes tightly and looked away.. Raghav why do you just have to crowd up my thoughts.. And my sister was busy smirking..

Some people don't need words to convey what they wanna talk you can just make out from their look and hers said,"Now tell me the whole story..".. We never kept secrets so it was ok telling her everything.. minus the kiss of course.. I was still reeling under its effect.. Gosh that.. Ok back to real world and I began telling her the whole awesome unlucky evening..

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"Oh my god!!! You are in love Kalpu!!!", Maya excitedly stated her conclusion pulling me off the sofa and twirling me around.. With great effort I made her stop.. "Sorry I thought you said love??!!".. And Maya looked at me like I said something out-of-the-world and the look was followed by a huge laughter..

Controlling her laughter she finally spoke up while placing her hand on her waist, "Then Ms.Know-it-all tell me why are you behaving like a female devdas from last few days??"..

I was tongue-tied but then it can't be love... I was quite sure.. Umm maybe not really but still... "Whatever the reason is.. its not love..", I said and sat on the sofa crossing my arms.. And before Maya could say anything I said," And how can it even happen .. I mean I know him for like just twelve hours.. It so does not make sense..".. "Its never meant to..", Maya said smiling as she sat beside me.. "Love isn't supposed to make sense.. Its totally illoligical..", I just looked at her trying to absorb her words.. could it be?? Was I really in love??

Back to present..

"Ouch", I said on feeling the pinch.. "Get out of your dream world Mrs.Singhania..", Raghav whispered in my ears making my cheeks turn red.. No matter how old we get the romance will never die..

Ok so the marriage had ended and now we were at ... Ok where were we??.. I asked the same to Raghav but all I got was the usual mischevious gaze .. He got down the car and the opened the door on my side and led me to some place.. And I felt as if my jaw was so widely opened that it could touch the ground (like in cartoons😉)..

It was the same place.. I said and his soft & warm gaze made me smile widely and we both walked hand in hand remembering that day.. reliving it together..

*Sigh*... this is not sad or happy waala sigh.. this is memory waala sigh..

And I'm back.. to the place where that thing which has right now turned my life from simple to a super complicated one..

"Kalpi..", Maya called me.. And with my tinkling payal's noice I went to the centre of the stage... It was Maya and Prem's engagement..

Three weeks and still I just can't that person out of my head and to just add salt to my wounds Prem, of all the places got this hall booked ... the same one where I met HIM... not that Prem did it purposely but still didn't he get some other place for his engagement...

I was standing beside him keeping the bouquets he and Maya recieved and he as usual got to his chapad-chapad, "You look like you're gonna blow off any moment.. you know like.. steam blowing out of your ears and your already red face becoming more red and puffy..", Prem teased me..

"Don't you have the guests to greet with your battisssi", I muttered staring at him with angry eyes..

Before we could create a scene there Maya glared at both of us and we looked away .. God knows why Maya loves him.. and why does he love irritating me ??..

I told one of my cousins to do my work and then walked off the stage..

Walking out of the hall was another huge task.. it was as if I was a celebrity and every second person wanted to shake hands with me.. After a lot "Hello Kaka,kaki,mama,maami,aatya, dada, vahini.. and etc. etc", I got out of that place..

Unlike that day here I knew half actually more than half of the people present.. but the 'being-love-sick' has its own cons and this was one of them.. 'Feeling alone in a crowded room'..

Once upon a time I used to joke around about these things and now its seemed to be totally true..

Out of the hall now I was in the lawn area staring nowhere in particular..

"Kalpana", I heard someone call out to me.. with that familiar voice my heart rate rose to about 720 beats per minute it felt as if the 5 litres blood in my body just doubled up..

"Ka..kalpana..", I turned around to find HIM standing in front of me.. The noise around faded away and the time as if stood still..

Sure all of it may sound filmy but yeah it was true..

Remember 3 idiots waala dialogue

"Jab woh tumhaare saamne aat hai kya tumhe aise lagta hai jaise hawaaein chalne lagi hai... Dupatta slow motion mein udne laga hai... Aasmaan mein chaand kuch zyaada bada ho gaya ..."

Winds blowing.. Check
Moon growing bigger.. Check
dupatta flying in slow motion.. Check

His touch brought me back.. I didn't realise that the wind was making my hair fly and cover my face and before I could move them away he did..

"Ra.. Raghav..", I finally managed to speak something (with a great difficulty.. trust me it took herculean effort)..

Was he really here?? I raised my hand to pinch myself but he stopped it midway..

"I love you", he said..

My tensed up shoulders relaxed while eyes went on becoming wider wider and wider..

He lifted his hand and pushed my chin up thus closing my open mouth..

"Before you start with your questions or in worst case run away from here let me tell you my side of story..

That day when I saw you at my friend's marriage I just couldn't take my eyes off you.. It may sound creepy but I was following you all evening..

Your anklet falling off was my golden opportunity to talk to you and I just grabbed that opportunity..
Then helping you was an excuse to spend time with you..

Trust me I had no other intentions but I never ever felt this way for any girl.. what they call 'Love at first sight'..

I always thought that there can be just attraction towards someone at first sight.. a complex thing like love in just few seconds.. not possible.. but..

With each moment I spent with you the feeling just became stronger and then when you got off that truck I felt I was losing something very precious.. the most treasured thing of my life..

I wanted to stop you.. I wanted to say many things but words just weren't enough to explain what I felt.. "

By the time he was done I felt as if my heart would be out of my chest any moment and with my welled up eyes I looked at him with pure adoration while he bent down on his one knee and said..

(Yeh waala specially for my source of story mariee who loves original Raghav Singhaania's dialogue baazi)

"Kalpana mere saath aisa kabhi nahi hua hai ki raaton ko meri neend ud jaaye.. kuch ajeeb si feeling hoti hai har waqt sirf tumhaare wajah se..(holi dialogue)

Uss din shaayad na din thik tha na mauka na mahaul.. lekin aaj main apna dil tumhaare saamne khol dena chaahta hu..

I love you Kalpana.. I love you..

Kya tum mere baare mein wahi sochti ho jo main tumhaare baare mein sochta hu..

Kya tumhaara dil mere liye wahi mehsoos karta hai jo mera dil tumhaare liye karta hai..

Do you??"...

Every moment we spent together flashed in front of my eyes.. And what else could I say.."Yes.."

Today after so mamy blissful years of togetherness Raghav brought me back here..

My Richie-rich (sorry mariee puche bina RR ko use kiya) bought this place as this was the place where the parents of his children met..

And here it ends..the story of our first meet and the start of a beautiful RagNa journey😉

Note:

First of all thank you all my lovely readers for literally shocking with your amazing response.. I never imagined such sweet awesome response for a ranting se bhara first part.. Thank you for proving me wrong..

Next to the source of this story Marushka (Mariee) ... If it wasn't for her complaints then shaayad ye story mere dimaag mein nahi aati..

And.. Umm.. Ok that's all..😉
Thanks once again...😃🤗
Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Appy dear ...lovely update...please complete it soon
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Resss 😆
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Wow!! Awesumm and lovelyyy update!!
Loved each n evry scene and their pov's 😳😆
And at last their kiss 😉 syperbbb dear!! 😃
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Aww lovely update kalpi bad moment will be best moment of her life she did miss him n when she met him it was magical his proposal best rag style just love it too good
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lovely update appy dear... But its incumplt.. Koi nahi cumplt it soon.. So finaly kalpi apne aayi baba se baat ker hi li.. Ok.. So nxt part aur intrestng hone ja reha hai.. Yaa jaldi pura keri m waitng
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awsm chotu part
update complete dear
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Pls pls pls pls pls dear complete soon update
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Please complete the update soon

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