BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Raghav being slap by Gauri and Kalpi staying calm even though she did not like it was nice
I like what Raghav said to Gauri before he left the room. And Kalpi always the sweetheart, her staying back and comforting Gauri was amazing. These wicked Kapoors will never learn 😡
They did so much damage but still scheming and thinking they can bring Raghav down by using Kalpi
I like that they underestimated Kalpi because when she strict along with Raghav their revenge will be that more sweeter ;) Pakhi listening to everything was superb. I hope now she now why Raghav did what he did and not follow in her evil parents footsteps
Aww RagNa little romance in their office was beautiful. I like that they still find time to be alone even with all the chaos that's going on in their lives...
Kalpi getting Dr. khanna to help Gauri is wonderful. I hope she get better soon
Another fabulous update. I love it

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Katty

@Cute_Kate

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Lovely Update.

I am falling for RagNa all over again

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Nice update...

Another heart break for Pakhi... Finally her parents truth is in front of her...

Raghav is so romantic 😳

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali
resh
unres
both part r amazing charu.
Full on u turn in story, dats realy bonus.
Love to see ragna r married n living together. There is no rakhi married, no seperation.
Hope gauri wl recovered soon.
There is any danger for kalpi frm sahil?😲
superb update

Hello dear, thank you so much. Glad you are loving this bonus part. 😃

Originally posted by: abxetz
Hi charu great update 😛

Hello dear. Thank you so much. 😃

Originally posted by: lolor
If... ems team would hv visited here...& would hv taken tip from all our ff/ss writters...
awesome...always wated this in ema

Thank you. 😊 Yes, there are so many talented writers here to take tips from! If only...😭

Originally posted by: shahsb_26
Charu.. am loving this more and more..!!! <3

Thank You Sejal! 😃 ❤️

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Hi charu!!!!!
Kya baat! kya baat kya baat!

Ek story ke do do version!!! Isey kehte hai double bonanza!!!!

Hi Priya, Thanks and glad you are loving it. 😃

Originally posted by: Aru18
very nice update charu..
both strories are amazing
continue soon

Thanks Aruhi dear. you'll get update of this one soon. 😃

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi
plez update soon..beautiful story😃

Thank you dear. You'll get its update soon! 😃 ❤️

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Really awesome update lovely

Thank You. 😳

Originally posted by: Asyalover
Aww...kalpi ROCKs love ragna

Thanks for feedback. Yes, I too love Ragna. 😃

Originally posted by: sampa79
Nice update
Update soon

Thank you dear. You'll get its update tomorrow.

Originally posted by: eishe10
Amazing!! Little office romance for RAGNA is cute😉

Thanks dear. 😃😳

Originally posted by: niru04
Nice update.but want more ragna scenes

Thanks. You may get one good Ragna scene in next update. But since this track needs to finish soon,, I have some limitations.

Originally posted by: anjyy
Nice update...
Now pakhi can b usefull for raghav as proof..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..

Thanks dear. No mention for the PM. Shall update tomorrow.

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Mind blowing! I love it!! Nowninseenwhere you're going with this! Awesome charu!! Muah

Thanks Di. Of course you know! 😃😳😛

Originally posted by: charvi3
Amazing story charu...simple & sweet I mean no separation, no rakhi ...&yesss u gives us two part of it double Monzaaa

Thanks dear, for liking it. One thing more, can you please tell me your old username?

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: vyshuu..
RESSS
unres!!
heyyllooo dear..
I'm really lykng this version of d story.. lyk no pain.. no regrets.. I'm loving it!!!
update was as usual nyc n lovelyy and lykd d part where kalpi ll get angry "The wife inside her could only make tight fists of her hands when she saw Raghav being slapped for no fault of his.".. dunno why bt i lykd it.. n im happy dat u made raghav stand on his decision of not marryng pakhi.. n pakhi.. nw dat she got to knw asali face of her parents hope she ll support our ragna.. and even revenge part is on its way.. waitng to read more..

Hellooo sweetie. 😃 Yes this version is closer to perfect fantasies! Thanks for liking it dear. That scene was close to me also, thanks for mentioning it. 😃

Originally posted by: Cinderella81
Beautiful update😳
Res

Thanks dear, but have you RES for writing more?? 😕

Originally posted by: Anjinie
beautiful update, it would be nice to see Paakhi doing some good by telling the truth about her parents, waiting for Prems entry, Gauri was being selfish, hope she does not blackmail Raghav

Thank You dear. Let's see what Pakhi does! 😉

Originally posted by: Cute_Kate
Lovely Update.
I am falling for RagNa all over again

Thanks dear, so good to see you in this thread also! Glad you are liking this. 😃

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Nice update...
Another heart break for Pakhi... Finally her parents truth is in front of her...
Raghav is so romantic 😳

Thanks dear. 😃 Yes finally Pakhi knows the truth. Wait for the next update for a little romantic scene! 😛

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: laavanya4u
Excellent update.

Inspite of being ruined totally by Raghav,the wicked Kapoors haven't learnt their lesson.

And is planning to use kalpi as their pawn against Raghav,Quite shameless,and they deserve

a place only in the hell.

Pakhi was overhearing their convo and conspiracy.She should be really ashamed to have them as her parents.But ,she is also a kapoor.Can we expect some good deeds from her???????????????????.

So,Kalpi had to be extra alert when it comes to her being with her Tai and while moving out alone.

As the kapoors might kidnap her to trouble Raghav.

And the sexy lady is in the office>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

And Their Office Romance.Is the red light not on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.Kam se kam ek ghanta to

lagegha naa apna Romeo kho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Abhi tho just shurukiya romance karne kho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello dear thanks for your awesome comment again. 😃 Kapoors will surely or may surely get what they deserve! let's hope things turn out as you and em want them to be!

Yes, Pakhi should be ashamed! Good deeds from Pakhi?? Let's see! 😛

Sexy lady, 😃 quite like this word! 😃 That means my dress up for her was not that bad! 😆😃 ha ha, left rest for all of your imaginations! Office romance ka overdose original version mei bahut mil jata hai na! 😛

Once again thank you for commenting, but still waiting for your comment in Celebration because I know you have read it!

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Superb! Hmmm so here ragna won't have to hide their relation. Khullam khulla office romance karege hum dono...😃

But i like that tadapta chatpata raghav even more 😆 😉.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
sory Dida comnt nahi de payi wo ghar mei puja so u kno... Ok now baat kerte hai update ki ... I luv dis dida... Kalpi is angl... She kno how 2 manag her tai cum mom... Awww... I luv ragna romanc in office... Nd Dida mei to rachu ko uss sari mei imagin ker k pagal ho rehi hun god kitni mast lage gi rachu uss sari mei...jaldi se ye sahil nd neetu jail jaye... Mere ragna ko dard dene ka plzn bana rehe hai... Aaa... Finaly pakhi ko pata chal gay k uske mom dad ne kya kiya hai past mei... I feel bad for pakhi... Kitna bura lagta hai jab aapko pata chale k aap jisko angl samajhte ho wo devil nikle... Pakhi ko pata chal hi gaya k raghav sach bol reha tha... Plzzz update...

It is okay as long as you people continue commenting, because if you all don't do so then I feel no one wants to read it. Like I felt so in Celebration of Fates update. After hearing continuous requests and demands that I have ignored that FF for long, not even one-fourth of regular readers took the initiative to comment! Not after incomplete update and certainly not after I completed it. That when PMs were sent to all. I really have doubts in such situations if all those requests were superficial, and was I wrong in feeling guilty! I had my own valid reasons for not being able to update; but still it was more than a month of its update.So I had to give its one update at least.

Coming to this FF feedback by you: yes Kalpi really is an angel. I love her character so much. Thanks for liking their office romance. 😃 Aww...so relieved you liked Kapi's saree because I was nervous with regard to my selection! 😃😳 Yes, poor Pakhi her own parents broke her heart. You'll get an update tomorrow! 😛

Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Raghav being slap by Gauri and Kalpi staying calm even though she did not like it was nice
I like what Raghav said to Gauri before he left the room. And Kalpi always the sweetheart, her staying back and comforting Gauri was amazing. These wicked Kapoors will never learn 😡
They did so much damage but still scheming and thinking they can bring Raghav down by using Kalpi
I like that they underestimated Kalpi because when she strict along with Raghav their revenge will be that more sweeter ;) Pakhi listening to everything was superb. I hope now she now why Raghav did what he did and not follow in her evil parents footsteps
Aww RagNa little romance in their office was beautiful. I like that they still find time to be alone even with all the chaos that's going on in their lives...
Kalpi getting Dr. khanna to help Gauri is wonderful. I hope she get better soon
Another fabulous update. I love it

Hi Natasha, so look forward to reading your comments! Glad you liked the first scene of Kalpi-Gauri-Raghav.

Kapoors will always be Kapoors! 😛😆

Pakhi's role will be clearer in further updates.

Yes, Gauri shall be better soon. 😃

Thanks a lot for your comment and for liking the update. 😃😳