BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16 - Page 27

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

happy new year dida... Waitng for epilog ns TMS orignal update..

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Resss😃
Unress
Whoa!! Awesum update charu.. I loved it!!
So sahil is the one who got shot.. thankgod.. I was thinkng it might be either kalpi or pakhi or prem.. 😆 at last the revenge has cumplted.. 😃
And then ragna.. khulam khulla romance.. 😉 😳 their romance has no end at all 😆 😛 and then next her delivery scene n all.. u wrote veryy well I mean the support which raghav gave and their happiness n all.. superrbbb dear.. the dialogues u choose were good, dat itself depicts the love dey have fr each other.. very well written dear.. 👏 👏 marriage story ka ek version toh almost came to an end.. im waiting fr its real version nw and yess! Fr d epilogue too.. 😃 😉

Originally posted by: eishe10

Amazing update!!!! Beautifully written😃

Originally posted by: Kiaraah

Awesome Charu! A very fitting end to a beautiful story. Loved everything about it. I agree with you too. There's no point in dragging a story unnecessarily if it has run its course. To think that , this was an alternate version of your already ongoing story makes it all the more charming . Hats off to you for giving us two different versions of the same story, without repetition. I knew already that you are an amazingly talented girl, so no surprises there. Hi Kiara, how are you?😃 I missed you comments dearly. So glad you loved this version and the ending also. But epilogue is stil left and I am scared for readers' reaction in that. You'll know why! 😛 Aww..thanks you so-so much for the amazing compliments. Muah.🤗❤️

I told you last time too, loved the way you changed Prem's character for good. It got better in this. To think that he actually fell for a middle class girl , his assistant proves how much he changed. It was so sweet to know that Raghav, Kalpi and Jhadavs became his extended family and Kamala has assumed his mom's role. Life has come a full circle for all of them. Oh, that is a huge relief that the change in Prem's character was convincing, it was a tricky thing to show!!!

Ragna had a son named Nihanth. Googled it's meaning which means ' never ending '. Apt name , just like ragna's love! They are embarking upon a new course of journey, a new chapter in their lives named parenthood. Awesome dear!!! Yes, Nihanth means "never-ending", that's why i chose that name for their son. 😃Glad you liked the name. 😃❤️

Will wait for your epilogue after you come back. Till then enjoy your holidays. Yeah, I forgot to tell you. Paarth is fine. He's rocking, enjoying his Xmas holidays! Thank you! Hope your mom is fine too. Love you sweets ! Epilogue is written and I'll upload it once I am done with replying all the comments.😃 Good to hear Paarth, your son is fine. 😃 Give him my love.🤗❤️ yes my mum is better.😳Thanks.😊

Merry Xmas and a happy new year ! Thanks for the wishes sweets, and belated wishes from my side also. Hope you had rocking celebrations. 😃 BTW, I love your new username also.😃🤗❤️

Originally posted by: sunyy

Awesome update and ragna baby. Awe. 😳

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

CHARU DEAR,

A BEAUIFUL COMPLRTION. Thank You so much Dear. 😳

JUST READ THE CHAPTER ONCE.

I LIKED THE CUTE RAGNAS' ROMANCE IN THE MARRIAGE HALL.AND THE NAME OF THE CHILD. Glad you liked their romance and their son's name. 😃

I AM GOING ON A VACATION WITH MY FAMILY AND WILL BE BACK TO KOLKATA ON 2ND OF JANUARY 2015.IF POSSIBLE,I WILL TRY TO COMMENT DURING MY JOURNEY.

OTHERWISE,AFTER 2ND JAN PACCA.Hope your vacations were rocking.😃 Waiting for your new comment on this update and original version's update now.

DEAR, A MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A VERY VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR 2015. Thanks for the wishes. Hope you had wonderful celebrations also and belated wishes from my side.😳

THIS BONUS TRACK,IS TRULY A BONUS TO US.I DIDN'T WANT THIS TO END AT ALL.U HAVE REALLY GIVEN A NEW DIMENSION TO THIS STORY.AND NEVER GET DISTURBED,OR

CONFUSED ABT WRITING IN FUTURE,U HAVE THAT POTENTIAL,EFFICIENCY AND EXCELLENCY.

Aww...you know your comments inspire me. I am so glad and happy you liked this version so much. If possible I would not have ended this version. but it is stressful to think and write two versions of the same story, avoiding overlaps and still keeping their common thread intact. it was taking a toll on my other updates. but nevertheless I really enjoyed writing it, and learnt new side of me. 😃 Thanks a ton for your appreciative and encouraging comments.😃 Love you.🤗❤️ Muah. 😳😊😃

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

hey charu first Merry Christmas to u dear


Thank you for the wishes 😃, it is so beautiful! Hope you had a good celebration time also. 😃
coming to update
dis story end so soon😭, m going to miss it😔 Aww, I am sorry. I am sad also, but couldn't help it.😭 But thanks for all your love.😃 🤗 ❤️ Muah. 😃
fabulous last part😳 Thanks dear.😃😳

as i cmented last tym, kalpi is safe and sahil got injured and dat too from raghav, wow thats what i needed😃. Hw dare sahil said 'loveless life' to raghav 😡 nw suffer.Ha ha, 😆 happy you're satisfied.😛😳😃
Kalpi hold rags hand tightly with her both hand, she is nt afraid of losing her own lyf bt afraid of rags stone hearted life aftr her. Bt hw cn raghav let his life go away frm him, n here he is to protect her frm all cruel thing.Glad you understood and liked this part. 😃

His gut feeling told him to put gun with him, evn he knw dis nt aceptable by kalpi bt still he put it. And here he is ryt n for his kalpi only he use it n still he ask for forgiveness frm kalpi. Kalpi undstand him n sooth him with her words so touching moment😳

prem got married and that love marige with his assistant. Wow he truely change, no matter rags and he still nt best frnd bt dat coz of their bsns competition bt still they r frnd Thanks for liking both the above scenes and sequences. 😃

ragna romance is just amazing. I get speechless wen it cum to ragna romance as dis my favrt alws n u write it marvelously charu. So no more words m on dreamland.Thanks a lot.😃😳

Finaly day come and ragna bless with a baby boy whose name is Nihant. Charu if u knw please tell me meaning of Nihant, i love dis name.😊 Glad you liked the name. 😃 Nihanth means "Never-ending". 😃

Amazing bonus track dear, love it.[l] Muah, Tight, tight huggies and loads, and loads of love, chocolates everything to you. 😃 Thanks a ton sweetheart. 😃🤗❤️
Thanks dear for dis lovely story👏👏 Thanks to you also for liking ti and for giving your feedback. 😳😃


p.s. Waiting for original marriege story ragna farm house romance 😳 I have updated original version's Part-26. Hope you've gone through it. 😳

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Merry Christmas!
Beautiful update
I love that sahil was shot instead of RagNa or any one else
Raghav shooting Sahil in the hand was awesome because shooting him to kill will be a easy death
I like that RagNa remain close with Prem and help in his wedding
Aww Raghav don't care where he is but romance is always on his mind lol
Love their cozy moments. Kalpi having a baby boy is amazing.
I love the happy ending. RagNa journey was inspiring and wonderful
Thanks Charu for writing this version of the marriage story :)

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Brilliant!! Awesome!! Amazing!! Mindblowing!! Capturing!! Gratifying!! Touching!! Loving!! This was absolutely amazing charu!! Wow!! I loved it!! You've done a fabulous job, amazing writer you are and you proved it once again!! What a wonderful ending to a fresh begining ;) you're amazing!! Thank you for this amazing BT;) loved every minute of it!! Have a wonderful Christmas Charu.. Muah love you

Originally posted by: Susheela123

Ohh !! Waavv !! Dear Charu , awesome this Part 17 of this Marriage Story. !! Very very sweet & fabulous story of RagNa. !! & it had a shocking & thrilling too. Charu really u hv enthralled the readers of ur this Marriage Story of RagNa FF !!

But dear Charu, pl.clarify 1 thing that what about that Thread 2 of Your Marriage Story which u updated till Part 25 !! ? Do u continue that story ?? & vch u vl also post now in We Want AshNa Back FB Page ?? What u vl do ?? &

Also r u continuing this (Bonus Track) marriage story also ?? Now/ later after u return here after a week ??

Thank u once again dear Charu for this wonderful & beautiful enthralling RagNa Bonus track story all parts from 10 - to 17 & also the other Mg.Sty.part 1 to 25 !! The twists & script lines r simply fantastic & making the characters live & fascinating in ur story 's beautiful & thrilling script & superb mind blowing lines through out !!

God Bless u dear Charu & Pl.keep up the Good work of RagNa story writing like this & thank u in advance for your upcoming & future stories of RagNa . With lots of sweet hugs & love to you dear Charu.