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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Yea I will take it slow... It was just that on top of not feeling well... My brain was clogged... It refused to think... And I felt if I force myself... The update would be below par.

Maybe my brain was over worked... Coz constantly thinking of plots... Is exhausting.

yes, its always like that with writing. the more you write the more you want to write... even when writers are physically tired and unable to write. the brain just keeps busting with ideas. thats the magic of writing. I guess.

Brain clog also means there's just too much and all your ideas wanna come out at the same time. Gurl.. awesome going! 😊

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

oh! and once you finish this one. Lets send it to Sooraj Barjatiya.. I think he will love this one. 😊

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini
oh! and once you finish this one. Lets send it to Sooraj Barjatiya.. I think he will love this one. 😊

Lol... Only if salman Khan is Ragav... Though might have to rename the character prem for him😳

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Awesome update. Rags promising to marry kalpi and sahil is deadest against it. Now sahil has seen rags with kalpi which brings me to ask what will sahil do to break those 2 apart? But on the other hand loving the sibling bond and the way paks and Sam band together to bring kalpi to rags. Now I ask this every update and here I go again can u update when love 😳

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Loved this Chapter.

This one was all about Rags n Kalpi.

In the serial I never got the impression that Rags cared about Kalpi. He always seemed like a ziddi. He had confessed accidentally. And all he did after that was make it a mission to make Kalpi confess rather than make her fall in love with him.

Here, its a redemption of sorts where Rags is concerned about Kalpi's shy nature, her feelings and taking care that they dont get caught by elders of the family.

Of coz he has gr8 help from the sibling team. 😉

The marker shaadi was hilarious and cute. appropriate for teen lovers. Although Rags is 23/24 if I am counting right.

Saahil and Neetu ka ab kya hoga. especially Neetu's fast 😛

Bring on the drama now. Kamla Vs Saahil Vs Neetu

or can we just say Rags Vs Be-reham Duniyaaa

Okie... Now how about the next update!?!?!?!

Besharam me!! 😉

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Saumya

@SamBricka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

suprb update dear... Nd sahil nahi uska naam super nalayak singhania hona chahiye... Nd neetu... Well i m fallng 4 neetu day by day... Aaawww... Neetu darlng keep it up swtoo... Plzzz ragna ko alag mat hone dena... I luv sammy nd pakhi also... Nd wow.. I luvd wen rags calld kalpi wife... Awww... Plzz update nxt part soon can't wait dear... Jalsi update kero plzzz

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

One more update pls. But if doing when love then do that first. 😳 and glad u r feeling better. Missed u

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Good to see you back Fuzz. Hope you are well. Please take good care of your health.

Realisation dawned on Raghav that he may have overreacted. But he explains to Kalpi what this marriage means to him. That it was him making a promise to marry her one day and will always be there for her no matter what.

He's fasting for her, how sweet!!!! Sammy falling asleep and snoring away on the breakfast table was funny.

Neetu caught them... Though Sammy and Pakhi tried to cover up, she understood what the red marker meant.

Siblings have once again teamed up to make love birds break their fast together. While they were proclaiming their love for each other, unknown to them Sahil has been watching the whole thing. He's furious at what he has seen . How will Neetu convince him that Raghav's happiness lies in Kalpi?

Take care dear!

Mwah

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Aww Raghav also fast for his wifey...
Neetu is a loving and understanding mom. And Sammy and Pakhi are awesome siblings
Oh no! the big and egoistic fox saw RagNa feeding each other
I wonder what he will do now???
Fabulous update