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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
This Raghav is so confusing
First he asked for massage which he received and then save Kalpi from falling
And afterwards yelled at her... I wonder is it because he has split personality 😆 or he wanted Kalpi 😛 and is angry at himself
Oh gosh that prick has lots of nerves to follow Kalpi and then tried to have his way
I like that Raghav show up and kick the hell out of him
Oh wow! Raghav insisting to drop his Miss Kalpana home
Awesome updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
nice update dear.. Feelng baf for kalpi.. Poor grl.. Update nxt chappy soon waitng
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Ooo...Raghav ka character thoda samajh aaya !!
Raghav & fighting ...they toh like go hand in hand ...aur agar vo kalpi ke liye ho ...phir toh ho chuka..saamne wala is dead !!
Waiting for d next update desperately
Hero-heroine akele in a car has always been 1 of my favorites ... which adds on to my desperation for the update😃😃

MARUSHKAA
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Omg so so so so good. But yaar Itna chota. Please update one more. Poor kalpi had to deal with athat ass molesting her. Thank god rags beat him To a pulp. Rags is so possessive. Loving it. But one more update pls 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Heyylooo dear..
Update was great n lovelyyy..
Waitng fr d veryy veryy next intrestngg update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Nice update waiting 4r next update 😉
plz update soon
Edited by switymango - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
My very famous DISCLAIMER 😛 : Unfortunately I do not own the wonderful characters (MINUS Dumbla and Dumbli).. The stupid not at all creative DJs own them I know its too bad. BTW, I've been thinking about what track to put next and then I rememberd that I promised you guys something interesting in this chapter 😃 So here you go..



I went along with Mr. Dracula CUM Angel to his car.. Well Draculabecause he always seems to go behind the darkness and Angel because.. Oh Well, he saved me... So he deserves the credit for saving me.. He got into the car and opened the door for me,"Get in." I stared at him.. Wow.. Mr. Dracula can be gentlemanly at times.. He said,"Stop staring a me Dolly Daydream. Get in.. I don't have all day..." Hmph !! So much for calling him Angel and gentlemanly. I got into the car.. The car ride was silent.. There was this question that kept nagging me. I decided to ask him. I asked,"Can I ask you something ?" He said,"Go ahead." His eyes were fixed on the road ahead. I asked," How did you know I was in trouble ??" He replied,"You were screaming.." I said,"Yes.. I was.. But I know for a fact that the music was too loud for anyone to hear me.." He said,"I was near only.." I replied,"No.. You were in you couch.. Not near me at all.." He said,"Seems like you hit your head.. You need some sleep.." I stared at him bewildered.. I couldn't help but ask him,"Why did you save me ?" He replied,"You don't know what was going on in his filthy mind.." I asked,"You do ??" He replied,"That's not the point.." I argued,"That is... Why did you save me ?" Raghav replied,"Because you are allotted to me.. You are my responsibility.. If something happened to you, then I would have to pay your family.. And I don't want to do that.." I asked,"Then could have just let me to my fate and let me die.. You could have told some other reason.. You could have done this without regretting saving me.." The grip on the steering wheel tightened and Raghav said,"As I said, you must have hit your head. Go to sleep.."
I said,"My house is near.. We'll be there in a few minutes." Raghav said,"No we won't. We are taking a long route." I asked,"What ?? But why ?" Raghav said,"People are working on those roads.. So we have to take the long route." People working on the roads !!! That was strange.. I would have known if something like that was happening.. He said,"It'll take two hours. I hope ur family isn't worried." I scowled,"Dnt worry... They won't." I started to yawn. What he said was true. I needed some sleep.. I fell asleep in my seat.. I didn't know when but due to the movements of the car, I fell asleep on Raghav's shoulder..

WHILE AT NEETU'S

Neetu was pacing along the living room.. She was looking at the time and to the door.. She thought,"Damn it !! Where are you, Raghav ?? What is taking u so long ?? You should have come back by now.." She started pacing again.. She thought,"What is Chahel and Shahanya come to know about this ?? They's be so angry and sad and so disappointed and soo..." She called Raghav. He picked up the phone..
Raghav : Yeah Neetu..
Neetu : Where are you Raghav ?
Raghav : Driving Kalpi back to her home..
Neetu : What !!! She was supposed to be home some half and hour ago.. And you must be driving home now.
Raghav : What's the big deal, Neetu ??
Neetu : Raghav.. Dnt be childish.. I dnt want to be the one blibbering to Chahel and Shahanya about your whereabouts..
Raghav : The roads to Kalpi's house have been blocked due to work. So I had to take the long route..
Neetu : What ???! Hello !!! Hello Raghav !!!

He had cut the call. Neetu threw her hands up in exasperation.. She thought,"Yeah.. This was the only thing left to happen.. What ever am I going to do with this guy !!!!!"

RAGHAV AND KALPI..
Raghav noticed Kalpi asleep on his shoulders. She looked so beautiful while asleep.. Everything was beautiful about her except for the fact that she was too thin.. He wondered why. She murmered in her sleep. He smiled a little and then his phone started buzzing.. It was Neetu.. He thought,"Damn !!! I totally forgot about her.."
Raghav :Yeah Neetu.
Neetu : Where are you Raghav ?
Raghav (controlling his voice) : Driving Kalpi back to her home..
Neetu : What !!! She was supposed to be home some half and hour ago.. And you must be driving home now.
Raghav : What's the big deal, Neetu ??
Neetu : Raghav.. Dnt be childish.. I dnt want to be the one blibbering to Chahel and Shahanya about your whereabouts..
Raghav (Eyes widening) : The roads to Kalpi's house have been blocked due to work. So I had to take the long route..
He cut the call saying this.. He didn't think about Chahel and Shahanya.. He was only thinking about Kalpi, Kalpi and only Kalpi.. Now he realized that he cannot make Neetu lie for him.. He drove fast but tried not to wake Kalpi.. He reached her house and looked at her.. She was still sleeping snuggled to him like a cute doll.. He didn't want to wake her up.. He wasted her to remain like this forever. He gently stroked her skin with a small smile gracing his lips. She moaned a soft moan and in an instinct, the small dropped from his face and he pulled his hand away.. His face became the same scowling face again. He shook her firmly yet gently.. I woke up and yawned. He said,"Your house has come.. You may leave.. See you at work.." I nodded and got down. I started walking but then I felt dizzy. Raghav got down from the car and in a second he caught me just in time. He said stiffly,"I'll walk you to you house." I quickly said,"No need Sir.. I'll go myself.. You must be getting late." Honestly, I didn't want him to meet my so called family.. The step-mother who is an obnoxious as a bull and the step-sister who is always ready to thrown herself on any handsome guy that visits.. Hey !! Wait !! Why and I thinking about him ??? I am not jealous.. I repeat.. I am not jealous.. Get that right... He walked me to inside the house..

Ok.. So this part (Dnt know the Part's number) is over.. I know its pathetic.. I just woke up from my sleep.. And since my exams are over, I thought to update.. This chaoter is updated in my half-sleep.. So ignore the mistakes and the boring chapter.. And dnt expect logic from this chapter.. I promise I'll try to have logic in my next chapter.. The next chapter will reveal a few things and there will be some things that you won't like and some burning jealousy 😆

BTW, I started reading Narnia again for the twelfth time or son and I am completely and hopelessly in love with Edmund.. Peter and Caspian are amazing too.. But Peter is being too level-headed and Caspian.. Well, I like him but in the movies, he just jumps from Susan to Lilliandil and tht's waht I dnt like about him.. Edmund was a prat in the first part but then he is good.. He is handsome, strong, brave, funny and has a great sense of humor.. Just like me 😳 I want an Edmund of my own...
BEWARE : Stay away from Edmund.. He is mine and only mine and I am in no way going to accept any sautans for this 😈

NOTE : More than half of the people here are thinking that both Chahel and Shahanya are females 😆 Let me clear it for you.. Chahel and Shahanya are both NOT females.. Shahanya is a lady and Chahel is a guy.. I hope confusion cleared 😛
Edited by veeranu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Just loved it. Who are the 2 girls Neetu keeps talking about? Poor kalpi didn't want to be saved , I feel bad for her. Please do another part this is so interesting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
👏 suprb update deepu di.. Waitng for nxt chappy.. Update soon.. Nd how was ur xams.. Hope u did well...
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Posted: 10 years ago

nice update ..😃 but who 2 girls talk about netu ? y she tensed about that girls?
update nex part soon..

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