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Part-16
Kamla was feeling lonely. The feelings that her children harboured on meeting ignorance from her were now making a place in her heart too. She could not expect Kalpi to insist on staying for few more days and she knew she wouldn't even do so but her own husband didn't suport her.

After Kalpi and her family left she turned to see Pakya and Vitthal to ak them why they didn't support her decision but they were too busy amongst themselves. She had tears in her eyes. Everywhere she looked she was met with ignorance. She ran downstairs and went towards Bappa's mandir to cry her out.

"What did I do Bappa that my whole family ignores me. I no longer see myself as a part of their happiness or sorrows. What have I done...am I such a bad mother?" She questionned Bappa but more so she questionned herself.

After a while when her tears dried she was about to get up whrn she heard a voice. It was familiar, she turned to see who the person was and was stunned to hear from the lady standing before her.

"I'll tell where were you wrong. You never met ignorance from your family earlier you know why not because you are a good mother to them but you were not interested in knowing what your children needed you were just interested in being mother to Pakhi coz she didn't get her share of love from her mother and you inorder to fill that void gave your own children's share of love to her. Tell me one day Kamla when you were with your children in their happiness through out the day." Kamla lowered her eyes to recall a single day if she was with her own children...she close her eyes to think..."Don't think much Kamla because you wont recall any day when you were with them. But yes give me one day when you were not there with Pakhi to hare her happiness...don't try hard to think coz you were always there." Kamla was shocked at the revelation...how could she do this to her own children.

"Kamla its only and only Vitthal who took care of his children and gave them yiur share of love too. But then everything has a limit. You chose someones else daughter over your own daughter's happiness and wanted Kalpi to forget Raghav...why and for whom...for Pakhi... the girl who at the end is a Kapoor. The same Kapors against whim you faught to get the chawl back, the same Kapoors who falsely took away Raghav's property...what do you think you have brought her up so she is your shadow. Tell me Kamla Tai...one day after Kalpi's marriage...just one day when Pakhi didn't try to instigate you against Kalpi through her sugar coating words" Kamla pondered an her heart gave her the answer. She was feeling suffocated. It was getting difficult for her to breathe.

"Kama Tai your family has sealed the space that belonged to you in their hearts coz you never gave them proper time and space that they needed from you. I have never seen a mother like you...you know what you tried to become God mother and just look at tge irony of the fate none of your own hildren nor your foster daughter is standing with you. Kamla look at Kalpi...she stood up for her love and today she has got her own family who love her so much n look at you...you never stood up for them...its true you worked hard to meet all your children's basic neccessities for life but is that enough as a mother...what about love...that you never gave them. So slowly and gradually they distanced themselves from you. You realised this fact only when Pakhi decresed her visits in this chawl otherwise you wouldn't have given it a thought." Every word that she said was piercing her heart but he could not stop her because she was right.

"Though you have worked more with Kapoors than me but lemme tell you one thing not a single Kapoor I repeat not a single Kapoor is good enough to deserve your sympathy. What do you think why did Pakhi come today to this chawl. To see you and seek your blessings...she laughed at her when she looked at her with confused eyes..."Don't look at me like this Kamla wake up open your eyes...she came here coz she wanted to spoil your daughter and son in law's evening...she came her beacuse I called her." Manda said with a smirk on he face on seeing a defeated look on Kamla's face.

"Abhi bhi der nai hui Kamla tai tu naseeb wali ki tera tujhse bahut pyar karta hai...naraaz hai par nafrat nai karta...its ok to be selfish someties for our near and dear ones...its time you start understanding your own family" Saying so Manda turned and went to her room leaving a spechless numb Kamla behind.

Morning rays brought a new beginning for someone while for someone else it was taking her more near to her end.

As said by Raghav he didn't leave Kalpi during the night. The distance of these 5 days was hard for him to bear and he poured all his feelings last night. Kalpi woke up though she didn't want to, given the fact Raghav didn't allow her to sleep properly. She made her way to bathroom. On looking herself in the mirror she realised their depth of love...she blushed heavily and remembere the moments. "He kept his words, as soon as we came in our room he didn't leave me. Crazy he is...but I liked it... I too needed him badly. Raghav what have you done to me."

She chose a hugh neck salwaar kameez with full sleeves to hide the signs of love Raghav has left on her. She didn't want Maya tease her. She came out to make breakfast for all. On much insistance Sammy and Maya joined in and will now stay with them since Maya stays all alone here while Sammy's parents had left for abroad. Much to her surprise everybody were already awake. "Why won't they" she thought and went towards dinning area.

"Tai shall I help you in something." "O definitely... before the cock starts shouting Jaan...Jaan...jaan...wake him up." Maya daid teasingly while Sammy and Gauri laughed on seeing an angry Kalpi shooting daggers at Maya through her eyes. She turned to leave but stopped when hear "Jaan..." and post that the laughing sound of trio sitting behind. She rushed to her room only to find a lazy Rghav still lying on bed rubbing his eyes trying to know what exactly is the reason for the laughter he is hearing from outside.

Few hours later in an executive conference room few gentlemen were sitting. Kalpi and Raghav entered together. After taking their places the meeting started. Soon one by one everg body started to represent their company. They knew it was one sided game. The moment they got to know when they entered in the conference room that Singhnia Industries is participating they all knew the contract will go to Singhanias.
Soon it was Kalpi's turn.

Raghav was looking at Kalpi. Every moment of her was oozing the confidnence she had within herself. He smirked and thought "Though the company is new and the risk involved in this is far less than the rik he took when he backed out from the project that Kapoors had won but it is a big victory...it will not only register profit for the company but will also shake Kapors to the core. He knew being a high profile company this project stands no where near to the goodwill and reputation of his company but he cannot let any Kapoor enjoy even an inch of victory. Moreover with last night incident he knew Pakhi won't be able to come over it and this presentation will only worsen her situation. He cannit give Kapoors a chance to stand united before him, a united army though week is better than single man and he just cannot afford to see Kapoors united. Before Prem arrives Pkhi has to be crushed. Prem doesn't listen to his parents much and considers himself very smart, he just has to give his over smartness a direction of his choice. Kapoors their own children is their weekness. They...wait weekness...Kalpi and Mom...they both are my weekness. What if Kapoors try to harm them to ruin my revenge plan. No...before tgey even think about this I have to do something and that too very fast. I cannot allow them to mould their ill thoughts into action."

Sounds of claps brought him out of his chain of thoughts. He felt bad that he couldn't concentrate on his wife's presentation but then what he was thinking was equally or rather more important.

He heard praises for his wife. Though the victory was certain yet she didn't leave any loophole in PPT. It was just perfect. His heart sweled with pride for his jaan and now he knew what exactly will be his next step.


"Sometimes we learn the biggest lesson of our life from someone from whom we expect the least. No person is strong enough to not have any weakeness."

Manda though full of negativity yet taught Kamla the biggest lesson of her life. Sge showed her mirror and made her realise her mistakes. On the other hand Raghav who onsidered himself stronger than Kapoors realised the fact that evn he has weakness in the form of Kalpi and Gauri.

So now what has Raghav thought...what will be his next move...will he keep Kalpana away from revenge or will he come up with a plan that keeps his original revenge plan intact. Kamla what will she do...from whom will she start in understanding her family.Has she realised the intentions behind Pakhi's face or she is still blinded with her false love.

Think about it...will update soon...but when don't know.😉

Thanks and Enjoy Reading.😊

A humble request to silent readers please drop in your comments. I truly wish good amount of likes and comments.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome
i'm glad u updare this story
as it's one of mine favoraite
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm surprised Manda she said al those words to Kamla n made her realize wow u just utilize each and every characters perfectly 😃
nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update rag n kalpi fulfill their lost moments n manda made dumla realise
Update soon

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