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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

I take back what i said before.. You're not good.. You're awesome..😃 Can u pls continue .. I'm really excited to read what happens next..

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Cinderella

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Appy Fizz this is for u on ur motivation I'm trying

Sammy comes out of room and thinks how to find out what happen to Kalpi, then he start searching for someone suddenly he hear someone is calling him he turns and find out person is coming towards him he start smiling.

Sammy:Priya , I was looking for u only.

Priya(excitedly):R u doing to take me for a date ?

Sammy: oh stop it u and Raghav can't think beyond this btw, where is Kalpi

Priya:Why is Raghav again troubled her this time I'm not going to leave him😡

Sammy:oh my lady dara Singh leave him we have find Kalpi, u know how emotional is she, she need us so don't waste time and tell me how we r going to cheer her up?

Priya:That u leave it to me I know how to cheer up my sweet BFF , but what about me honey who will cheer up my mood😉 huh, something I should also get naa.

Sammy:😊take out dairy milk frm his pocket and says is this enough to cheer up ur mood?

Priya:This time this enough par agle bar pappi jappi se kam mein nahi manugi ok 😉

Sammy thinks tu toh gaya: Ok now don't waste time and come we have find Kalpi.

Edited by Cinderella81 - 10 years ago

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Sammy:Priya where will be she, hope so she is fine, before going home I have to make mood fine otherwise maa will scold me for not taking care of her.

Priya: Relax u know when ever she is upset she sit in garden below the tree and writing in her diary or talking to bappa.

Talking about Kalpi both head to the garden where she was sitting below the tree and writing something in her diary.

Priya:Hey Kalpu what's up

Kalpi: nothing 😕

Priya: Haan Haan pata hai tu aur teri diary aksar baatein karte hoo, par kabhi humse thodi baatein karlo😉

Kalpi:Stop it ur so call drama baata tu yahan kya kaar Rahi aur dekh agar Raghav ke barre mein main kuch baat nahi karna chahatihoon.

Priya:Oye common tum don ke barre mein yahan apni dukh Bari Kahani sunnane ayi thi par he Bhagwan iss dukhi aatma ka yah an koi apnea nahi hai and started singing dost dost na raha pyar pyar na raha and fake crying😭

By seeing all this Sammy and Kalpana can't control there laughter 😆🤣

Kalpi:Dada ab apne Ne kya kiya jo iss drama queen ka drama start hogaya.

Sammy:😕 nods nothing

Priya:Dada ki camchi tere dada kuch karte nahi hai na date par lekei naa long drive pe bas book worm ki taraah book mein hi gusse rate hai.

Edited by Cinderella81 - 10 years ago

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

WOW WOW WOW.. Its rocking awesome fabulous!!! Getting more and more interesting..😃

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: appyK
WOW WOW WOW.. Its rocking awesome fabulous!!! Getting more and more interesting..😃

Thank you😃

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Arpita I need ur help when I'm start writing I thought of characters as below I need ur opinion can I proceed the story keeping this in mind if any changes need to made please guide me

Kalpana kapoor: Daughter of Sahil and Neetu Kapoor both successful business person always busy in their work but due to high egoes they always fight they live in same house but separated long back Kalpi never got love from her parents ,the person who care whom she love is her nanny Kamala Jadav.But bcoz of her parents she become very reserved girl her world revolve around three people her Kamala maa. Samrat dada and her BFF Priya, she build a strong wall around her never allowed anyone to enter her life other than these three.

Priya Raizada:Sweet, bubbly and bfff of Kalpi. Loves Samrat Jadav.

Samrat Jadav: Ambitious, obedient and serious about his relationship and follows from heart. Consider Kalpana us his real sister,BFF of Raghav and loves Priya but never told her.

Raghav Singhania: Very lively person, believe in enjoying every moment of life never serious about relationship.

Edited by Cinderella81 - 10 years ago