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Posted: 10 years ago
suprb update... I luv this raghav.. Nd elevator romance was Ahem Ahem.. Thnx for PM... Update nxt chappy soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update as usual i wonder wat will rags do now to win kalpi
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh! wow.. finally, not very long, but, a reasonably lengthy update from you... And thankoo Deva for the mention...😉
Now I will go and read the groping... I mean... the gripping update!😳

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Amazing update.
You made him confess to himself that he is in ❤️. And, he proposed to Kalpi!!
Was he serious or just trying to prove his 'I m serious' point. Which basically does not prove anything if he is not serious about the proposal... I know, I know... I am blabbering..

But the Elevator ride was quite eventful... total 'Lift kara de', life changing, mind boggling, heart in right place but mind gone for a toss moment, at least for Kalpi.

Rags, on the other hand totally proved that he is serious about her, his hold on his control.😆

Now, I want to know, what Kalpi is thinking, What she felt about this whole, his control and letting the moment slip, but not the kurta!! 😛 I hope she is not feeling rejected or wondering she looks like a wanton while he totally made her eat from his hand... then left her high n dry... acting all in control and suave.
ps- If she is thinking all sort of muddled up thoughts about what Rags thinks of her acting putty in his hands and drowning in self pity and reacts is full force on Rags next ... awesome... 😆 Angst baby, angst...

Love it... Chickee... Praying God give you loads of free time, meant only for IF.

plz keep going.
Edited by _Mini_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Chickee that was sooo sensuous!!! Ufff!!!! Thanks for turning the radiator on!!! LOL! Phew!! RagNa in a steamy scene trapped in an elevator!!!!
I love love love RagNa Kisses and you have given plenty in this episode so this is my most fav update of the day!

I just dont want Kalpi to feel bad about this incident and hope she realises that even though she lost her control and melted in his arms...he did not!

She is still in denial that Raghav Singhania could actually fall in love with her! Wow waiting for Kalpi's reaction in your next update!!!

Thanks suppu for the lovely update!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
You know supriya my sweet;) your update are always exciting never a dull moment;)!
What a hot and spicy update!! Now!! Now he knows that she wants him too;) she cannot resist those sexy lips and that sexy chest she touched 😛 im sure she's gonna think about that and also the fact that she couldn't acquire the strength to push him away but only encouraged him!! I'll bet she wouldn't be able to face him 😆 boy now I can't wait for next office scene 😉 things are gonna get more and more enticing 😉 how is she gonna face him now 😉 knowing that she didn't want him to stop and she made no effort to stop him 😛 man she will be so damn embraced this will only make it sweeter!! And sexy although showing Kalpi how much he wanted her even jumped to saying 'lets get married' 😆 and him questioning himself about it was too funny 😆 even sexy got carried away by Kalpi's wanting groans made him feel he could have taken her there and then 😉 love it when he questioned himself about allowing himself to stop 😉 only goes to show how carried away he can get wen the one he loves is in his arms 😉
You always leaves us wanting more, which I love ;)and this update was much appreciated considering how we begged for it LOl ;) Loved it, and you know what?! In each and every update you give you always make it hot and spicy, which I love 😉 Tks so much for the dedication my sweet 😉 love you Muwaaah 😉
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my goodness!!!!! I need a cold shower!!! Awesome update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was sizzling HOT 😳👏 wonder how Kalpi darling managed to handle the hotness 😆😆😆 for once I thot she wud faint on Raghav 😆😆😆...after hearing marriage proposal 😆😆 & what a perfect place & time to propose 😆😆😆 in Elevators 😆😆😆 is he planning to get married before his friend sammy 😆😆 Guess Mr.Singhania wud prefer in same mandap 🤣 considering how difficult it was for him control 😆😆😆






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Posted: 10 years ago
Chickee meri hang up queen there is something I forgot to give you for this garm a garm update 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Whoa !!!!! What a sensuous and sizzling hot update! Supriya, you totally rock !!!! Girl, your updates always leave me longing for more and more and more. ... What I wanted, you literally gave it to me on a silver platter !! Guess I'm still reeling under its effect ... I don't care I'm married because right now I'm hopelessly in love with this Raghav. Gosh...how I love him ! ❤️

Kalpi breaking away from Raghav's kiss and his embrace and running away to put as much distance as possible from him. She was shocked to find him entering the lift when all she wanted was to keep away. Kalpi was trying hard not to give in to his touch when her own body was betraying her. She found that her body has a mind of its own when it comes to being with Raghav.


Did he actually proposed marriage to her? OMG! I was as surprised as her but then so was he! Was it her statement that he's playing with her that made him propose? Or it came out of his subconscious mind?


I'm all for groping in the elevator too and when it's your favourite couple doing it , it's special ! His closeness, his scent making Kalpi forget everything else and she couldn't resist touching him. And then Raghav's mouth comes crushing down on hers and we get to see the most passionate moments they have spend so far. She has lost control of her mind and her senses with Raghav showering kisses all over her face and neck . So lost is she at the attention she's getting, she doesn't even flinch when he removes her kurti and straps off her shoulder and kisses her there.


There is nothing Raghav wanted more than to make love to her then and there , make her his in the elevator itself as Kalpi's soft moans reached his ears. But he knows she won't forgive herself the next day and he stopped himself! Hats off to him for that! I think that's where I fell for him. 😳


Then he giving her much needed privacy to gather herself as they wait for the security to arrive. He was literally cursing himself for stopping when she was standing there with all messy, loose hair and swollen lips ... ...


Wonder how will they react tomorrow when they see each other? Raghav still ridiculing himself for letting go off the woman he loved madly when he could have made her his... Eager to know Kalpi's reaction. Will she be happy that he stopped because he loved her ? Or will she be offended thinking that he exercised control when she was a mere putty in his arms?


I know you hate asking so many questions. ... Sorry! 😆

Hey babes! That was so sweet of you to dedicate the chappy to me ! That too such a happening update! I'm honoured!

Love you dear
Mwah
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dam god Chickee. It was a awesome and most sensual update. Loved it. Thank you sooo much. Kalpi is falling hard for him. A request, pls update regularly. It kills man, to check it out whether you have updated or not.

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