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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

loving this stroy, it feels like u are reading a stroy which has happened in somebody's real life, absolutely beautiful, please continue

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Simply FAB! Emotional upheaval of Rags and Kalpi, very well pictured. As usual wonderful things are short and sweet! I HAVE to compliment YOU for being a writer 'after my own heart' . Y ? Because you have not kept us 'begging' and waiting for your updates ! A BIG THANK YOU !

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

awesome...& thnx for updating fast...pls continue updating

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Smply osm yaar watng 4 more updt

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

It's just brilliant.. gosh you're fabulous writer.. loving the story please some more updates.. I'm really loving it...don't end so soon.😭

.would love to read more stories from u..

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Autumm

@Autumm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

its 4.11am here...n u keep me awake... dear..ths s not a gudnite story...coz i cant sleep...hot hot hottt!!!! uufff☺️ update soon dear...

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

awesome, awesome update, would Raghav take Kalpi to his home, a nd will he tell her that he is living in Dubai and not in india, if he does looking forward to Kalpi's reaction

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Chin2_n

@Chin2_n

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Going through all the updates was so wonderful journey so far and my thirst is not ended yet so please continue soon,😛

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Thank you so much for extending 🤗 what an update!! Oh my gosh I don't know where to start 😛 I love his bold ways, him touching her, making her melt! Reminding her of her feelings towards him! Love their close encounters 😉 and DAMN I love the dressing room kiss 😉! I'm so loving his hunger for her! Yummy 😉 now the only thing is for him to find out about his child!! Can't wait to see how you reveal it to him!! Awesome you are!! Your short story is very exciting and entertaining! Never a dull moment 👏

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Indra2012

@Indra2012

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

My goodness dear!!!You are a SUPER AWESOME writer,have read all the updates and can't wait to read more and more and more. Love this "what should have been" ending for Raghav and Kalpi. Wish you really were the script writer for EMA! Thank you.

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