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Anusuya

@akshara82

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Wow... Noce SS..

Just finish reading all chapters just now..

update soon..

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Just read last update! Awesome;)love what you did to Paaki!! How long did the separation happened between him and Paaki?! What happened before with him and Kalpi before she left?! I love how you made both rags and Kalpi form their own opinion of eachother!! And both being completely wrong about eachother! Hats off to you ;) 👏 👏 👏 I'm so loving this! 😃 each time I res their is a new update lol! I'm sending kisses to you;) tell me your name plzz! I'm Dianne aka Di 😉

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Res lol unres! Didn't get a chance to read and comment! Yet another update 😛 I love the way you describe everything so clearly! Pictured how rags looked 😛 your're awesome!! Love you 🤗

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Chickee

@Chickee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Bass! Ab padho sab ... and i will take a break for a bit ... next update will probably be a wrap.

😊

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Chickee
<font color="#cc0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Bass! Ab padho sab ... and i will take a break for a bit ... next update will probably be a wrap.</font>
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What?? NO!! Don't end it yet!! I love this too much!! Plz extend it!! An awesome creative writer you are I'm sure you can do that 😉

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Chickee

@Chickee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

aarey baba ... thats why it s a novella ... longer than a short story ... but shorter than a full novel 😃

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Autumm

@Autumm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Am i a stalker now...lol...awesome update dear..n plz update soon...very soon...haha...im addicted to read more nowdays...ohoh...really huge trouble...thk u for ths...

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Nice update. So finally raghav convinced kalpi for day out, will kalpi do shopping for Ranveer, will Raghav will come to know about his child with all this waiting for ur next update.

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Wow, another awesome update. Why didn't I get a pm this time? Did I scare you away with my questions? Hope not.

Raghav is waiting for her at the coffee shop. Relief etched on his face when he realises that she has not actually disappeared. The rendezvous was nice. Finally she comes to know that he's no longer with Pakhi. Loved his reaction when she was stunned. 'Take that Miss.CEO of the year'! Typical Raghav style. ...lol. He doesn't want to scare her away . But doesn't want to lose the chance to make her his as well. So request her to spend the day with him. She can't say no. She agrees to go with him thinking that she will at least have the day's memories with her for later.