In Your Captivity- A New RagNa FF- Part 9 Page 20 NO PM'S - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Pookhi

res!
unres.😳
Lovely update.


Thanks pookhs
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: riaka

Awesome update. What took u sooo long?? Eagerly waiting for next chappy

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Thank you..school.
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks
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Part 6
Kalpi: Mr. Raghav, would you please get your heavy body off of me!?!
Raghav: (Drama queen face) haaaw! Did you call me fat?!?!
Kalpi: No I-
Raghav: You think I'm fat! I'm not fat! Am I? Oh no! All these years I've been thinking I'm hot and muscular but no! I'm not! WHYYY?
Kalpi: No no! That's not what I meant!
Raghav: (sniff sniff)
Kalpi: No, Uhh..no! You are hot and muscular! Ok?
Raghav: really? (Sniff and pout)
Kalpi: Yes! You are! Sacchi!
Raghav: Hahahaha! I just wanted to hear you say that! You think I was actually insecure...bwaahhahah!
Get off of me!
Raghav: But you look so nice underneath me...how bout a picture?
Kalpi: I-U-Uggghhh! Grr!
Raghav: Kalpana, e-nun-ciate. C'mon...
Kalpi: no! Now get off me...
Raghav: fine...but next time..I won't.
Raghav bends down and kisses Kalpi's earlobe.
Kalpi: Ewww! Wet kiss!
Raghav smirked and kissed her face and neck all over.
Kalpi: No! No! Gross! Wet kisses!
Raghav: Now you may go.
Kalpi: I hate you..
Raghav: I love you too..
Kalpi: I'm done with you!
Kalpana stomps away.
Raghav: But I have just started...

Later Kalpi is sitting in her bedroom and coloring a picture of a flower as that was the only thing Raghav had given to her of her interest.
Raghav walks in and almost "Awww's" out loud.
Raghav then smirks getting an idea and walks to Kalpi.
Raghav: Kalpi.
Kalpi: What!???!
Raghav: Spider!
Kalpi gets up and jumps up onto Raghav's back and Raghav holds her legs around his waist.
Kalpi: Aaah! Kill it! Raghav! Kill it! Please!
Raghav: There is no spider lekin chalo, iss bahane karib tho ayi...
Kalpi: Please Raghav! Raghav! Spider! Kill it! Wait what?
Raghav: I like your legs...(runs his thumb over her bare legs)
Kalpi: hey stop it! This tickles! Ah! Hahaha!
Raghav: oh really?
Kalpi: aah! Hahaha! Stop! Stop! Put me on the floor please!
Raghav puts her down and smirks at her crossing his arms against his chest.
Kalpi is furious.
Kalpi: You're such a bully Raghav!
Raghav: You want me to be a bully? I'll be a bully.
Raghav threw Kalpi's coloring book on the floor.
Raghav: Ya take that! Now give me your lunch money! And I'm going to beat you up after school.
Kalpi: Hahaha! 🤣 you think you're so strong? I bet I'm stronger than you...
Raghav: Oh ya?
Kalpi: Ya!
Raghav: Oh ya?
Kalpi: ya ya ya!
Raghav: You, me, arm wrestle. Right here right now.
Kalpi: fine!
Raghav: Now, if you lose. Or I hurt you. You don't cry.
Kalpi: What do you think I am? A girl.
Raghav: uhhh...
Kalpi: 1,2,3 go!
Raghav: Should I go slowly? I think I'll go easy on you.
Kalpi: mmmh!!! Aaah!
Raghav: Are you even trying?
Kalpi: Shut up!
Raghav: You mind if I take a nap?
Kalpi: Aaah!
Raghav: You know what. Use both hands.
Kalpi: Haha! Now you can't win.
Raghav: really?
Kalpi: No!!!! That hurt! You're so mean!
Raghav: Baby, I told you. Don't arm wrestle with me.
Kalpi: Get out of my room.
Pushing Raghav out.
Raghav turns around and pins her on the wall.
Raghav: Husband ki insult karthi Ho?
Kalpi: Haan!
Raghav: Haan? Tho mein tumhara husband hoon?
Kalpi: ...
Raghav quickly pecks Kalpi's cheeks and winks at her.
Kalpi: I hate you...
Raghav: I love you too...
-Raghav leaves.
Kalpi: What is his problem? My coloring book! Aaah! Where are you?
Precap:
Raghav: What do you want?
Kalpi: I want pizza! Now!
Raghav: it's 2 in the morning!
Kalpi: mmmhmmmp! 😭
Raghav: Okay. I'll make you one...
Kalpi: Yay!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
res
unres.

Aww, verry nice update.😛 Raghav and Kalpi are both so goofy.😆

I especially loved the precap. Kalpi wants pizza during the night, and Raghav will make her one. Cute.😛

Edited by Pookhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
😛 nice dear...plzz update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update
Update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Cute 😳 and hilarious 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
RagNa are so childish lol
Wonderful update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Part 7:
Kalpi: 1,2,3 go!
Raghav: Should I go slowly? I think I'll go easy on you.
Kalpi: mmmh!!! Aaah!
Raghav: Are you even trying?
Kalpi: Shut up!
Raghav: You mind if I take a nap?
Kalpi: Aaah!
Raghav: You know what. Use both hands.
Kalpi: Haha! Now you can't win.
Raghav: really?
Kalpi: No!!!! That hurt! You're so mean!
Raghav: Baby, I told you. Don't arm wrestle with me.
Kalpi: Get out of my room.
Pushing Raghav out.
Raghav turns around and pins her on the wall.
Raghav: Husband ki insult karthi Ho?
Kalpi: Haan!
Raghav: Haan? Tho mein tumhara husband hoon?
Kalpi: ...
Raghav quickly pecks Kalpi's cheeks and winks at her.
Kalpi: I hate you...
Raghav: I love you too...
-Raghav leaves.
Kalpi: What is his problem? My coloring book! Aaah! Where are you?
At night Raghav comes into Kalpi's room with a few shopping bags.
Raghav: Hey Baby...
Kalpi: ikkkh...
Raghav: C'mon what's with that?
Kalpi: Get out. Bohut ho gaya tumhara! Now get out!
Raghav: I bought you some more clothes.
Kalpi: Then give it to me!
Raghav hands it to Kalpi and kisses her cheek.
Kalpi: aah! Why can you not just keep your lips close to your own face.
Raghav: Why can you not just keep your face close to my lips?
Kalpi: ...shoo fly!
Later after everyone falls asleep Kalpi gets hungry and decides to go to Raghav.
Kalpi: Raghav! Raghav!
Shaking him.
Raghav was asleep.
Raghav: Hmm...what do you want?
Kalpi: I want pizza! Now!
Raghav: what? Abhi! It's 2 a.m.
Kalpi: Raghav! 😭
Raghav: okay okay don't cry! I'll make you one!
Raghav makes Kalpi a pizza and she eats it.
Later Raghav is talking to Samar.
Kalpi finishes her food and is going back when she hears her name.
Raghav: Stop it Sammy!
Sammy: Why are you pampering her? You know we are just keeping her for torture! Torture Kalpana so much that she calls Rahul to save her!
Raghav: I know! I know!
Sammy: What are we going to do if she doesn't?
Raghav: simple. Kill her.
Kalpi's eyes widened and her heart started beating fast. Her knees were trembling and tears were about to overflow from her eyes. She started backing out when her hand hit a vase and it fell to the floor.
Raghav heard and saw Kalpana.
Raghav: Kalpi stop!
Kalpi ran away as fast as she could.
Raghav: Kalpi! If you want to live STOP!
Kalpi opened the door and ran out. She didn't know where she was going or who she would go to. She was just crying and trying to get away from Raghav.
Raghav: Sammy! Gaurds! Get Kalpana. She's a girl. How far can she run.
Kalpi was crying. She realized she was in a jungle. Suddenly she fell backwards to the ground.
Her eyes widened as she saw a big brown bear standing there. He grabbed her leg.
Kalpi cried as she felt her soft flesh rip from the bear's paw.
The bear left Kalpi and ran from there. Kalpi cried and pulled herself against a tree.
Kalpi: aaah...no!! I don't want to die so quick...
She touched her wound and before she knew it Kalpana went unconcious.
Raghav was running through the jungle trying to find Kalpi.
Suddenly he saw a girl lying by a tree. He went closer and saw it was Kalpi. Raghav saw her wound and kissed it. I won't let you die. I need you alive for my revenge.
He lifted her tender body in his arms and carried her back to his house. Raghav layed Kalpi in his bed and brought the first-aid Kit. He began bandaging her leg. Kalpi flinched. Raghav finished aiding to Kalpi. He got on top of Kalpi and kissed her on the lips.
He got in the bed with her and put a blanket on them.
Precap:
Kalpi wakes up and raises her hands to slap Raghav. He catches her hand and twists it back painfully.
Raghav: Don't you ever dare run away again.

Edited by Ragnaislife - 10 years ago

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