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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww. .. Fuzz! I'm numb. Everything is in a haze... Here I was expecting the love story to start and you straight away went to marriage. Don't know if it happens or not, still...
I'm so loving this Prem. Wish I had an elder brother like that who's possessive about me and is always on the lookout for me. Could totally connect with him, his anger, his guilt on humiliating Kalpi publicly. Then when he went to ask forgiveness the sight that awaited him caused his blood to boil. The very couple who rejected the idea of marriage is passionately kissing each other. How can the poor guy keep his cool?

Raghav is turning Kalpi mushy at his hands. How he takes advantage of their attraction and kiss her! Even demand kissing him back and nuzzling her neck when he knows she won't be able to resist him. His big fat ego not letting him believe she could reject him, he's hellbent on proving she can't resist him.

Loving Gauri -Priya bonding as well. Gauri wants her son to be responsible and accept his doings. Loved how she said 'he should have gone on one knee and proposed to her'. At the same time she's concerned for Priya. Priya is a darling! I'm sure she's not yet over Raghav but still trying to hook him up with Kalpi knowing that's where his happiness lies. Loved how she understood when Prem told to handle Sammy and Maya.

Now that Prem has demanded the marriage to be conducted today itself, wonder what's in store for Raghav and Kalpi. Will they or not? I seriously wish she could know the truth about Priya . It changes everything.


Thanks Fuzz for this awesome update as a Diwali gift. Happy Diwali to you too... !!!!!
Good night!
Mwah
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update dear...hapy dat ashna getng married...but sad at d same time coz kalpi is forcd 2 marry rags...nd god prem caught dem kissng...how mbarsng...gos just thnk ur eldr bro find u kisng sum guy...spcly wo jise tumne abhi rejuct kiya ho...nd rags usko uske hormons pe contrl nahi hai kya???? Jab dekho kiss kiss kisss...huh...aur beta kalpi is not ur propty k tumko jab man aya kiss kero ge...


Gosh soch k his bura lag rha hai...kalpi ko kitna bura laga hoga jab prem ko uske aur rags k bare mei pata chala hoga aur jab prem ne undono ko kiss krte pkra hoga...aaa rags tumko kiss krna tha to rum lock ker lete beta...
Av kro shadi...pepepe pe pe pe pepepe...sorry socha shehanai mei baja dun... I kno i kno it was bad phir bhi...kam se kam bajaya to ab koi dhol bhi baja dena plzzz shadi bina dhol nd shehnai k achi nahi lagti hai...aure jab sabko ragna k bare mei pata chalega to kya hoga god soch k hi darr lag rha hai...


Nd plz ask rags 2 say sorry...


Dear plzz nxt time pm me...plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy diwali dear...hav fun b safe njoy ...light up ur life nd othrs also...muaahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
WAY TO GO big bro! 😛 somebody finally pinned rags down. Loved the update and prem was superb! Loved how he kicked rags ass. And rags let him because he knew deserved it. So now they r getting married and rags has the nerve to say what if I don't want to ! God that man needs help he can't keep his hands off the girl and in private asks her y she doesn't want to marry him? But angel u can't end this ff without a proper SR and a vocal I Love You from both sides. Pretty please with a cherry on top. But I gotta say pakhi got off easy had it been me I would have ripped into her she had no right discussing anything in front of anyone and especially Sammy and maya. And also glad prem was in his senses to get rid of them before marriage. Oh and I hope u will also show us proper wedding. 😉
Edited by sunyy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmm so Raghav -Kalpana, loved the Prem the way he cared his sister, worries for Kalpi, Gauri understand why Kalpi reject for marriage ,thinking how make Raghav to propose Kalpi. Raghav was angry that kalpi rejected him then when Prem say about their marriage why he rejects it. Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waw great update Ragna ki kissing scene WO bhi prem ke samne 😉 your a great writer 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Gawddd!!!!! What drama!!!! HIGh intensity Drama!!!!

I am loving this!!! Prem was absolutely right!!! LOL they just cant keep their hands off each other!!!Especially Rags!! Raghav is just impossible!!! Hmmmph!!!😡

Every time he corners her and kisses her she hates it but gives in to him! Hell!! She just cant resist him!!! Just a putty in his hands! He must love doing that to her!

And Prem!!! God first he got a shocker!!! and then he blasts Kalpi in front of everyone!!! And then he gets to see them snogging!! Ewww!!! Imagine your bro catches you smooching someone he just bashed few min ago!!! 😛Oh no Raghav you could have bolted the door!!!😆

And then Gauri LOL she is thinking her son should have proposed to Kalpi on one knee!!! ???? Is she really his mom???😆😆As if, he would! LOL I mean she doesn't know her son? Priya knows him better I guess!!!!

And now what does Prem want to hide from Sammy and Maya because I thought they were a witness to the entire thing! Now what else to hide? RagNa marriage? Why so? Though I loved Prem commanding Raghav what to do! He He Rags must have never imagined he will be told what to do!!! LOL😆 this is just the beginning Rags let Kalpi enter your life once then you will be her slave😆😆

Hmmm Pakhi is so confused poor thing! And so guilty too!! Though I am upset with her as I think she went overboard discussing matters between Kalpi n Raghav with all of them or for that matter even Gauri! She should have asked them to talk to Kalpi instead!! But since she is so close to Kalpi and considering her age I might decide to overlook her mistake!!

You are just talking about marriage and I have butterflies in my tummy thinking about the night after their marriage! There are so many things they need to talk and sort out!!! First they did not have enough time to talk because their mouths were busy😛 I understand that and now when they were trying to talk everyone in the house have decided to marry them off! Now Rags be ready to bear the brunt! You just love to snog snog snog now hope he continues to do that once he is married to her😆!!! I hardly think so!! Husbands dont kiss their wives like this😉😉 So in a way this is a good way to keep him away from her.

You know such updates from you compel me to say that you are indeed a wicked wicked writer!!!!

I had almost given up the expectation that you will come up with another update but you gave me a pleasant surprise! 😳

What else can I say? RagNa kisses are sooo addictive! Infact I just dont want them to keep their hands off each other😉 There is something special about this couple yaar!!!!

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I rate this update 5 ⭐️ +⭐️

Extra one star for the Diwali bonus update!

Love you and please if you plan to continue this for longer then please atleast update once in a week else I will be depressed!

mmmwwwaaah Take care busy bee! Lotsa love
Edited by priya_remix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updated my comments for the previous chappy on pg 95. Do go through them when you have free time dear!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi guys... My last update... From tomorrow no updates for 2 weeks. I shall try to make this a long one.
I will respond to comments... During the 2 weeks as I shall not be updating the ff.


Chapter 16



Once alone Ragav turns to face Kalpi, his gaze softening for he is no longer angry. Seeing her bruised lips, he tries to hold back his smile, unsuccessfully. Kalpi seeing this fumes even more, says, "what are you smiling at?" Ragav folds his arms and continues looking at her. Unable to contain her anger, she lashes out, "damn it! I am too young to get married. I have exams and assignments. I should be focusing on my studies... Not..." She sighs deeply, trying to keep her tears at bay.


Feeling guilty for placing her in this position Ragav looks away, his mind working on overdrive, trying to think of how to avoid the marriage when a voice within asks, "do you really want to stop this marriage?" Immediately another voice within replies, "no." Stunned, Ragav freezes. He turns towards Kalpi, who is muttering and crying silently and thinks, "I don't know her. Why do I want to marry her? What the hell is going on. How can I want to marry her right now when I know nothing about her... Her likes... Her dislikes... What makes her tick... Omg... I can't marry her..." His heart racing as he tries to contain his panic.


He stares at Kalpi when he hears part of her muttering, "... Don't want to marry him. I don't care. I am not going to marry him. I better pack my bags and leave. If prem can't find me, he can't bully me into marrying him." Ragav gets angry hearing Kalpi's rejection, he says, "too bad, you are going to marry me tonight." Startled by the ferocity in his tone, she glares at him and says, "like hell I will. I am not going to marry you." "This is all your fault," Ragav says, "the least you can do is accept the consequences." Sputtering, Kalpi says, "my fault. My fault! How is it my fault? You kissed me." Grinning Ragav says, "well you should not have kissed me back... And it is your fault... For having such kissable lips... Totally your fault." And quickly walks out of the room before she reacts. Kalpi states after him in disbelief, thinking, "huh!" As her fingers automatically graze her lips. Curious, she goes to the mirror to study those kissable lips. Flushing, she says aloud, "what nonsense!"


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Priya watches prem pace up and down the landing. She asks him, "why do you want them to marry tonight?" Closing his eyes in anguish as her words sink in, he opens them, stares at her sorrowfully and asks, "how are you handling this? He left you and went straight to her." Priya looks away and says softly as she tries to keep the hurt away, "I am coping. And Kalpi didn't break anything that was not already broken." nodding, prem says, " you know Ragav. He can be quite ruthless when he goes after what he wants. He is obviously interested in her and I don't want him to mess with her education and to..." Priya completes his sentence, "you don't want Kalpi standing where I am several years later." Embarrassed for his thoughts, prem looks away. Priya places her hand on his and says reassuringly, "I am glad she has you... But you don't have to worry. I doubt Ragav will ever leave her."


Clearing her throat she says, "I better go." She walks away only to stop and turns back. She hesitates for a split second, then asks, "why don't you want maya and Sammy to be here?" Flushing prem replies, "I don't want my inlaws to be present should something unpleasant happen. Gosh I haven't thought this through." "I think it is a good idea. Better safe than sorry," Priya says and leaves.


Prem watches Priya walk away then says, "you can come out now." Flushing with embarrassment for having been caught, Pakhi comes out of the room that is partially closed, says, "bhai I did not mean to eavesdrop." Shaking his head, prem replies, "it is okay. Forget about it." Looking at her, he says, "ask what you want to ask." Hesitantly Pakhi asks, "bhai are you doing the right thing?"


Sighing deeply, he looks at Pakhi, his gaze filled with worry, he replies, "I don't know if what I am doing is right or wrong. I just know that Ragav always sticks to his commitments and responsibilities. I know that once he marries Kalpi, he will never leave her. I also know that Kalpi has some feelings for him and she is a gem of a person so I am not worried about Ragav. He is getting a good deal. I am worried about Kalpi. How she will take it. She is going to be so angry. I know she is young, that she wants a career... And I know Ragav, he will let her grow up and won't stop her from doing what she wants. He is good for her in the long run." "But bhai," Pakhi says when prem interrupts her, "let it be. I am not going to change my mind. We were lucky that this time the pregnancy alarm was false. We might not be this lucky always."


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The priest looks at Gauri in disbelief and says, "asambhav! There is nothing ready for the marriage to take place" as he looks around the lounge. Ragav sits up and says, "panditji nothing is impossible. Everything is arranged out in the backyard. Shall we go." He looks at Kalpi who is dressed in jeans and a top, her arms folded in front of her as she looks at him defiantly. Standing up, he mutters sarcastically,"let the circus begin", loud enough for Kalpi to hear.


The priest turns to Gauri and asks, "where is the bride?" Gauri hesitantly answers, "here she is" and gestures towards Kalpi. Stunned the priest stares at Kalpi for several seconds then says, "she is dressed in jeans!" Ragav chuckles and says, "yes she is... A girl after my heart... We are modern... Both bride and groom are dressed in jeans." Prem scowls at both Ragav and Kalpi and says, "panditji please follow me."


Pakhi runs down the stairs and calls out, "Gauri masi here are the things you asked for." Gauri masi smiles and says, "prem... Ragav... Please go out with panditji... We girls will be right over." Taking the red chunri which is heavily sequenced, Gauri masi smiles and says fondly, "I had worn this veil when I married Ragav's father." She then proceeds to tuck one end into the side of Kalpi's jeans and pins the chunri on to Kalpi. Once Gauri masi is satisfied, she and Pakhi guide Kalpi outside.


Seeing a small fire in the backyard, Kalpi stops walking, she says softly, "please go ahead. I need a moment alone." Her gaze focused on Ragav she remembers last night. She thinks, "I danced with him last night under the stars and today I am marrying him under the same stars." Wondering why she stopped, Ragav looks towards her, his heart racing wildly thinking that she has never looked so beautiful before. He gets up and walks towards her, raises his hand towards her. Kalpi nervously places her hand in his as she stares into his eyes. Reading the anxiety in then, he gives her a reassuring smile and guides her to the group.


As they walk around the fire hand in hand... Their gaze locked to one another... Lost in one another... Both hypnotised... They take a short trip down memory lane... Firelight... Moonlight... Starlight... And the ocean for music... Arm in arm... Ragav whispers, "after last night I never thought you could look more beautiful. I am glad I was wrong." Blushing, Kalpi looks down as the priest interrupts the prayer to chastise Ragav, by saying, "no talking" then continues with the prayer.


Ragav then places his mother's mangalsutra round Kalpi's neck and fills her maang with sindoor. Seeing the panic creeping into her eyes, he whispers, "too late Mrs Kalpana Ragav Singhania" then adds, "I never knew your name is Kalpana. It is a beautiful name. I like it." Seeing the horror in her eyes as tears whelp up, Ragav curses himself for reminding her that they did not know each other well enough to marry.


He looks towards prem who is standing several feet away and says, "prem some help here please... I seem to be suffering from foot and mouth syndrome", he ends wryly. Seeing Kalpi's tears, prem walks towards her with concern and regret. He hugs her tightly first, then wipes her tears and says, "Kalpi do you trust me." Too overwhelmed with emotions Kalpi responds by noting her head affirmatively. Smiling he adds, "i am right here. I will never let harm befall you. Trust me... All will end well."


Prem places a hand on Ragav's shoulder and says, "you remember what we discussed." His gaze hard, Ragav looks at him and says, "I promised didn't I?" Feeling reassured, prem nods affirmatively and walks away. Unable to contain her curiosity as she wonders what Ragav and prem are talking about, she asks ragav, "what did you promise?" Ragav softens his gaze, smiles and says, "now is not the right time. Come let us take blessing from mum."


Gauri masi hugs Kalpi and says laughingly, "looks like I no longer need to adopt you daughter." Kalpi bursts out laughing as she hugs her back, saying, "so true... I shall have to cancel the adoption application." Ragav who is conversing with prem and Pakhi, looks up at the sound of laughter, curious and happy to see his mother and wife bonding well.


Once the priest leaves, Gauri masi says, "The four of you need to leave. Don't worry, I shall get everything cleared up here."



P.S: Next update after two weeks.
Edited by angelpureness - 11 years ago

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