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Posted: 11 years ago
The only thing I want angel is for kalpi not to get all crybaby types. I want to her to be strong like how she turned the tables and paid him. I want her to not give in I want her to dish out this time And put him in his place. You've created a fiery little spit bomb let her be one and since she's already given in and he's insulted her I hope she fights back if he tries anything this time. Then it'll be fun. But I love whatever u write it always ends up being awesome and totally kickass. And agree don't change rags he is attitude king and it suits him all I want is to see them both fight and sparks fly.
Edited by sunyy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So my boy is attracted, possessive and bold!!! I love him!!;) I knew he wud want more:) he cannot do without the candy;) all he cares about is his needs getting satisfied!! And only by candy;)
I love paaki's character!! Crazy girl!! They're so close!!
So who is gonna fall in love first??And who will be running to whom for love care and support?! Another awesome incomplete update lol couldn't wait!!
Edited by DiVirgo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Angel!! One thing I don't understand!! If Kalpi an rags are just using eachother for sex!! Why did kalpi feel so broken after she realize what rags taught of her??


Just imagine... U think u r both on equal footing... Having fun... Then the guy pays you... Suddenly u r not an equal but somebody hired to please him. That has to hurt.

After the hot night u were expecting sweet words and warmth... Caresses... But u get cold hard cash.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

I have been checking the forum like a loony every 15 mins!?!?!?!? where is the next chapter??? 😭

Oh yes mini welcome to the loony world! So fuzz you've got to desperate loonies who are lusting your aghav he he😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix


Oh yes mini welcome to the loony world! So fuzz you've got to desperate loonies who are lusting your aghav he he😆


very true priya di
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Posted: 11 years ago

Dude... U three...

U r not supposed to lust after him... Ur supposed to be outraged!

Obviously I am not writing this right😆
Edited by angelpureness - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpureness


Dude... U three...

U r not supposed to lust after him... Ur supposed to be outraged!

Obviously I am not writing this right😆


Well dear you know exactly why we are not that enraged!!! We have seen him perform and so we are lusting after him!!! Can you lend him to us dear??? What say girls😆 I am sure ur Rags will die of heart attack!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 God fuzz I have never I mean it NEVER been this naughty in my entire life!!!!

You brought the elf in me and now you shall pay for it!!!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix


Well dear you know exactly why we are not that enraged!!! We have seen him perform and so we are lusting after him!!! Can you lend him to us dear??? What say girls😆 I am sure ur Rags will die of heart attack!!!!! 🤣 God fuzz I have never I mean it NEVER been this naughty in my entire life!!!!

You brought the elf in me and now you shall pay for it!!!!😆


Priya,
I want kalpi to give Rags a hard time and then I can be there to give him some moral support in exchange of his ☺️Services☺️
But before that happens, Fuzz has to keep writing the chapters.😉



Edited by spontaneousmini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome angel so 1 after the other continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Hey, I'm back after a long and tiring day at the hospital with my brother and family. My nephew is so gorgeous to look at! 😳 I'm so tired but couldn't resist the temptation to read the update when I received the pm. So typing away on my phone though I know I need to take bath first. What to do? Fuzz, you have become quite an addiction for me. I also know you will wait for my comments. I didn't want to disappoint you.

The story is going awesome. Now its become almost as favourite as 'hate me today' for me. What happened to "I'm going to keep this ff light" decision? But I'm not complaining because girl, you revel in writing intense stories involving lots of heartbreak. And I'm a sucker for such stories.
Loved how Priya was able to put some sense into the thick skull of Raghav. She had thought about it a great deal and could point out each and every thing that he thought wrong about. She made him see his mistake and how bad he treated Kalpi even though she herself was nursing a broken heart. It would have hurt her to think that he has made love to Kalpi thrice in a night whereas their relationship has lost passion long back even after being together for so many years. Raghav on the other hand was shocked to learn that the girl whom he thought of as a hooker was just a young college going girl. He had thought Prem was obsessed with her when in reality she's like a sister to him. The final blow for Raghav was when Priya pointed out to him that Kalpi is a virgin. He's in a total shock, too much of a mess now thinking he has taken advantage of an inexperienced girl and has even paid her. But I don't think he has fallen in love yet. He's just attracted to her and feels kind of possessive about her. Maybe it's just great sex for him right now.
I know the comments suck. Maybe I'm too fried up. Should have waited till tomorrow to have a clear head. But you have spoiled me silly! Mwah!
Just one doubt- what's with the pregnancy track? Did I miss something?


Oh bless... Babies are cutie pies... Make the most of it now... It is the adorable stage... Why am I even telling you this... You already know... Being an aunt is awesome... U get to give the baby back when u have had enough 😆


Bang on girl, you understood raghav perfectly... Was heading towards the darkness... All heartbreak with the pregnancy track n miscarriage... Took in viewers request... So trying to keep it light. No pregnancy track.


Am glad you didn't wait for tomorrow... U know how much I look forward to your views... Mwah

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