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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG they are so fast! 😲 gone so ahead already! Maybe because Raghav thinks Kalpi to be Candy; or had he still wanted her had he known that she was Prem's sister and that dancing was a part of dare. he is so possessive for her already, why? when he has a steady gf? Wonder when Sammy and Raghav will know about Prem-Kalpi relation. btw, it was too hot, loved that totally. I still can't believe that Kalpi didn't get to know they had moved so ahead. Really hope she doesn't continue with the dare now! 😆😳 Feeling bad for Kalpi still, don't know why? Amazingly written and words always fall short for your awesome writing skills! 😃👏 Can't get enough of it.
Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW...romantic scenes...😳

very lovely update...😃

Dear, plez dont make me wait so long...plez2x, update..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!

Me first yaayyy!!!

Ur stalker is here!!!!!

Oh I know what Raghav is going through because only I know how much I controlled myself all this while to not trouble you asking for updates!

Phew! Actually you are the reason why I started my other ff and ss because if I dont keep myself busy then I will keep bothering you for updates!

And my my what an update you have come up with! Mindblowing! Raghv's mind also seems to have got blown away seeing Candy!!! Ha Ha Ha😉😉😉

Oh wow! See what you have turned me into fuzz!!!!! A stalker!!!!!😆

Oh no no dont I mean dont just dont stop there!!! Dont leave me hanging!!! I need to know what happened???? Raghav stalking Kalpi like me stalking ur thread!!!!😆

Look at his attitude ---I hv to woo Kalpi for Prem n Maya!!!😆 I almost fell off the chair laughing!

And why does he always see Kalpi/Candy in a compromising situation with Prem? hmmm Raghav's fury is trouble for Kalpi! Poor little girl how will she handle all of his furied hotness! ufff!!! Bacchii she is Raghav dont scare her! Poor Kalpi must have got a mini heart attack!!! and maybe so scared that she went to pee!😆

Pllleeeassee fuzz please complete this chappy or else me going crazy! I want to know what happened between them in the house!!!! uhhuuuhhuu

Arrrggghhh Fuzzz!!!!! I am going wildly crazy here!!! How dare you update this now!!!!???? ufff!!! This one's tooo hawt I almost burned my hands!!!!😆 You should have given me some warning!!! I am on a strict lent and you broke it!!!!!! LOL My bad I should have not got tempted in the first place!!! Should have know ur updates could be dangerous and I knew in a way something was about to happen!!!


ooohhh I must admit I have read some highly adult stories but this one leaves everything behind is it because RagNa was involved???? Maybe???? But mannn!!!! Phew! I am sweating and throat is now dry and am all 😳☺️.

Raghav is too quick huh!!! Wow she didn't even realise when he undid her innerwears????
Too dangerous he is!!!! Kalpi got to stay alert! Oh my Raghav complaining that he did not have protection man what is he upto!!

I think he has lost all his sane mind, cant think straight else he would have thought that why would Prem get a stripper/ club dancer to his aunt's place and have his sister be friendly to her and introduce her to his fiance!!!!

Raghav's brain has stopped processing his memory full of desire for Kalpi his brain is soon about to crash! Look at him!! How dare he??? Poor Kalpi must be so shaken!!! Ha Ha she has sworn to forget that bet! And is now scared to be anywhere close to him. I swear now Raghav will find it difficult to catch her being alone as she is surely gonna follow his mom or someone else in the house all the time and then I would love to see Raghav's desperateness of his inability to have her close to him with him all over her.

Oh that fury will be worth watching! Oh I am loving him and hating him at the same time!! Fuzz you have made me go cuckoo!!!! Thats it! Period!!!! 🤪

My poor hubby is gonna bear the brunt now!!!!😉 And you shall be solely responsible for all this!!! he he he!!!!


Lol girl... I was more excited reading ur comment than my update... U actually made me go back and read my update... I was like what did I miss...😆 When I write I am so focused on how the characters are dealing with it on an emotional level that I ended going back to read about what was so hot.

I guess Ragav is a very very naughty boy... I just want to make it clear that it is just physical for him right now... And maybe subconsciously he does not want to accept that Kalpi is not easy, hence his mind has refused to work.


I guess am trying to stress that it is only chemistry between them as neither know each other... Very strong physical attraction.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

I don't have words.

But you said this will be a light story. I think you are a very intense person. You can make me feel all these things with just words.
You better start planning your novels soon. waiting for chapters is getting torturous.


Light is not working.. Though still trying... But I want to try not having any heartache... No emotional distress... Those r exhausting to write.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

OMG they are so fast! 😲 gone so ahead already! Maybe because Raghav thinks Kalpi to be Candy; or had he still wanted her had he known that she was Prem's sister and that dancing was a part of dare. he is so possessive for her already, why? when he has a steady gf? Wonder when Sammy and Raghav will know about Prem-Kalpi relation. btw, it was too hot, loved that totally. I still can't believe that Kalpi didn't get to know they had moved so ahead. Really hope she doesn't continue with the dare now! 😆😳 Feeling bad for Kalpi still, don't know why? Amazingly written and words always fall short for your awesome writing skills! 😃👏 Can't get enough of it.


Ragav will find out about prem and Kalpi's equationafter he sleeps with her. Oh be ready to hate him... Hopefully... Depends how I end up writing😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
No angel don't have her sleep with him. Pls don't have kalpi give in. I hate that makes her weak. Also with him already being somebody's fianc and sleeping with him makes him unfaithful and her a cheater as well since she knows.
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing, just loved the update, I really hope Raghav does not mess with Kalpi, let's see how Kalpi stays awAy from Raghav
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey i am back😃
Ur stalker is right here right now!!!!!

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Ok!!! fuzzz kill me kill meee torture me with these updates!!!!! U r just too much!!! Just give a breather girl!!!! And you used my name for Raghav's gf????? And you made him break up with her!!!!😭 waawwwaaa I know you hate me!!!!!!

Just because I trouble u for updates???? How unfair!!!! sniff why fuzz why!!! Though I liked the passionate kiss chalo Candy ke naame se hi sahi!!!! So I forgive you!!!😳 Do I sound loony!??? Well not my fault your update created short circuit in my head!!

Raghav is hellbent to do the deed tonight itself is it????

Oh my god!!!! He has the guts to openly threaten Kalpi!!!

And poor her she is so scared and more embarassed thinking she let him do all this to her and a guilt that she had even probably enjoyed it to some extent!


Please complete it naaa...I want full update nowww yesss nowww abhhhiii!!!!!



OH NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rags paid her!!!!He paid her!!! What???? What ????? What????? HE PAID HER>>?????

Oh my pooorrr pooorrr Kalpi!!!! Did he not realise it was her first time!!!!????? Did he not realise she was inexperienced!!!!????? He thanks her for the amazing night!!! Twice he woke her up! Can I borrow him please for a month!!!! Ha Ha LOL😆 Man what does he eat???????? And he is still hungry for more after devouring her like a crazy monster!!!!

Sh#t!!!!!! What will happen to Kalpi??? She will be fiercely angered now with his behaviour.

Oh Misunderstandings galore!!!! But I am loving it and want to see his face when he will come to know the truth!!!! And also that it is not just a physical desire for him. But that he is also possessive about her! If he thinks she is a hooker then why not let her touch anybody else!!

Wonder how come Pakhi did not notice Kalpi was missing and not in her room!!!
This is sooo interesting!!! I am hooked and I am sooo mmmexcited!!!! He He!😆

Oh fuzzz u back and that too with a bang bang!! in real sense😆
Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago

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