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Posted: 10 years ago
dear, plez update...waitggg 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Eagerly waiting for Raghav's frequent visits to their old paradise.
and to see the emotions of Kalpi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u guys for ur love... N sorry for not replying any of u...
@Lavanya : Thats sweet of u... Offcourse... u all are my frnz and I can share my issues with u... But I do not know what to share... mine is intercaste love marriage and u can imagine the issues crop in such marriages... Well my parents n in laws are about to meet soon n hope it will clear all the probs...

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Hope I replied to everyone... Those whom I missed... I am really sorry!! Kaan pakad k sorry...

Wait Priya... sorry is not for u... Reason u will know in the next post.😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Update dedicated to Priya... Thank u sweetheart for telling me that I should separate RagNa for a while... N I ma working on ur other suggestions too. N big wala thank u. I really want to dedicate this update to u coz while writing the dialogues of Bhawna.. I was thinking about ur comments on the story... I hope u will like it.

Complete update

Bawna rushed towards Kalpi to let her know that Raghav is adamant about his decision and he wants her to live in the same house.. "It is for her safety.. Raghav do not want his rivals to harm them and hence wants her to live in that house." She was repeating the reason to herself while making weird face... "Common Raghav... u think ur wife is fool to believe u... Anyone can understand that u want her to stay in that house to relive the past moments..." She said to herself and looks in the direction where Kalpi was sitting. She was shocked to see Prem sitting by Kalpi side holding her hand... Kalpi's devastated state was visible to anyone... Though she was unable to hear their conversation but the frowning expression appeared on her face.

"Don't worry, she is not a home wrecker like me." Maya's voice came from behind. Bhawna was astonished to find Maya in front of her.

"What are u doing here??" Bhawna asked furiously.

"I came to witness the divorce proceedings." Maya replied with guilt in her eyes.

"Why?? What u want to witness now?? Seeing ur sister going through trauma of broken marriage or u want to witness ur sister deciding to live her whole life with a cheater." Bhawna said with a sarcastic smile. Maya lowered her face.. Tears of guilt were flowin on her face but it dint move Bhawna at all... Right now her focus was only on Prem and Kalpi who was engrossed in their own talks. Maya followed her gaze once again.

"Kalpi is not like me... She knows her boundary and won't repeat my mistake at all." Maya tried to explain to Bhawna.

"I trust Prem completely... N I know a lady who went through a broken marriage won't ever give the same pain to others. Now Prem doesn't has any feelings for her." Maya said unknowingly.

Now it was Maya's turn to get surprise.. "So u know about Prem having feelings for her??" She asked Bhawna.

"When I met Prem... He was all broken. We were friends and he shared me how he wanted to propose Kalpi and reduced his weight for her but when he went to propose her... He saw her as Mrs. Raghav Singhania... Without meeting her, he came back. Our relationship is truly strong. I am just furious to see Prem here coz I do not want him to influence Kalpi... Like u, he also wants Kalpi to give one chance to Raghav... I wonder why." Bhawna explained her stand.

"Because Raghav is not at fault... He was furious on Kalpi and drunk. It was I who was in complete sense and I could have stopped him. I failed as a sister and as a woman." Maya said.

"Yeah... right. He was furious coz he had the doubt that his wife is cheating on him... He was a little kid... who dint know what he was doing while sleeping with u... Come on!! Cut this bullshit!! Why don't u give Kalpi some space to think about it... Let her decide what she wants... I am not against RagNa relationship... But all I want for her is the freedom to decide... Now please stop calling urself as homewrecker... It wasn't only ur mistake but u both are equally responsible for it... Either u both deserves forgiveness or u both deserve punishment... But both of u should pay equally." Bhawna said in a stern voice and reached where PremNa were sitting.

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"Prem... I am sapped of energy and I do not have strength to forgive him. The woman and wife inside me is not letting it go... I might accept him for Ria as u all want but Will it be same ever?? How will I trust him and tell me... will he ever trust me again?? He doubted on my character.. that too with a guy who is 10 years younger to me... Tell me Prem... What if he doubts on me again?? Will he sleep once again with..." Her voice choked... How could she take her sister's name... The sister whom she loved more than her life... The sister who was as baby to her as Ria was... "with some other lady." She completed.

"hmm.." Prem dint know what to say anymore... "I just want ur happiness." He added in a low tone.

"Kalpi... he is not ready to give in. U can be financially independent but u have to live in that house as Raghav fears that some of his rival will harm u or Ria. It is for ur safety." Bhawna tried to say as professionally as possible.

"It's ok... I will live there. When he doesn't matter to me than how does his memory will affect me." She tried to be strong while taking her decision.. btu something inside her was telling her that it is going to be too tough for her... She suppressed the feeling of fear and looked at her watch... "It's already 11 oclock. I think I should leave for Ria's school. Though I am not sure whether I will reach on time or not as I have to pick Ria too... Bhawna... u please submit the papers and let me know when I can shift... And Prem... thanks for ur support. " She said calmly as if nothing happened. Though the storm was already dwelling in her heart but she knew how to hide her real feelings from the world.

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"Meeting will finish in 10 mins... I won't be able to reach in time...Ohh Ria.. she will be so dishearten... I broke my promise... I broke her heart. If something happens to my baby than I won't ever forgive u Raghav... She is already scared of losing her importance in her parent's life.. I do not know how she will take this." Kalpi murmured while entering the Singhania Mansion... She told driver to park car outside so that she can come back as soon as possible and hence was running towards Ria's room.

"Mom... where are u going..." Ria screamed from the parking. Kalpi turned around to look at her... she was ready to go to school... Kalpi checked time once again... "It's of no use but I think we should just go to school once so that Ria might think I tried to attend the meeting but got late." She said in her mind.

"U r ready baby... that's so sweet of u. Let's go to school." Kalpi said with a smile and turned to go back to the place where driver has parked the car.

"This way mom..." Ria pulled her back and pointed towards the car where Raghav was waiting for them. After letting out his emotions in the private he came back to the home and ordered Nanny to get Ria ready for her PTA meeting... From last half hour they were waiting for Kalpi to come back home. Kalpi's smile faded away on seeing him.

"Now he is remembering his duty... If he was so concerned than he would have called me after attending the PTA meeting... now what's the use of going to an empty school." She complained to herself. "Neways Ria will be happy so let it be... It will be a short drive for her and she will be at peace on thinking that both her parents tried to attend her meeting.." She added in her mind and without thinking twice she proceeded towards Raghav. Raghav gives a charming smile to her... she dint bother to notice it but he kept his spirit high and opens the door of passenger seat... "No driver today.. What is so special today??" She said sarcastically but then bit her own tongue for letting it slip. She was just too annoyed on Raghav and hence was not under her control. Raghav's reply was just a plain smile. Ria sat on the back seat saying good girls don't come between parents and let them talk... as "baat karne se hi baat banti hai." She switched on her PS2 and started playing... This time she was really not bothered about spending time with her father as he was giving her plenty of time but this time she wanted her parents to spend time with each... At the age of 10 she was mature enough to understand that their parents are Katti(on loggerheads) and she need to do something to make them friends again.


The drive and a little flashback about how Ragahv comes to know about meeting will be in next part... This part is shorter than usual but I promise to give u a longer RagNalicious update in next part.


P.S. : PLease ignore mistakes and give lots of love in the comment section... Well u can criticize me as well...

Regards

Vish
Edited by WonderQueen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yes yes yes m 1st... Lovely update vishu di.. Plz cumplt it soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
its awesome vish..
kalpi know the reason that why raghav want to she stay in there old houes..but now what happen next...
she control feelings??? and how will raghav win her back..
i wish ye complete hota..but no problem..take u r time
and complete it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update yar u know what i like bhavna so much in this story she is real woman who cam understand other woman very well but missing our raghav but it's incomplete na but I'm sure u will unite ragna but love to see how many papad raghav has to make
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update vish rag adamant tfor kalpi t stay in his flat n bhavna though was said t be due t rival knows wat rag want n maya n bhavna conversation was well written as one could feel wat they are feeling each other n finally kalpi said she would stay
oh so sweet i was guessing that rag would go t the PTA meeting but here both are going so sweet
my name is humairaa
update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome update
but i feel like killing maya & raghav for hurting kalpi too much
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update...
first I want to thank u for whatever Bhavna talked to Maya... 👏 👏 👏
its superb...just as shes speaking all I wanted to...superb
it will be difficult for kalpi to stay in their ols house with all their memory ...
& why maya came to court 😡 ...to witness her sisters broken marriage cuz of her... 😡
waiting for raghav's reaction when kalpi will leave house...
pls complete it soon

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