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Posted: 10 years ago

VISHESHA,

WHERE ARE U DEAR,
NO UPDATES OF UR FFS ,THAT TOO,IN 2015???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
QUITE STRANGE
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a FF !! Emotional and immersed in family bonding . Sad that it has to be Kalpi who has to pay for the 'sins' of others ! It started with her mum's hatred for her. She was more a 'punching bag' for Kamala's inadequacy ! Next her father ,on whom she was depending for support and love, he abandoned her when she chose her own life partner. Next the most important person , Raghav , who is supposed to have loved Kalpi has used her as 'stepping stone' to his success and 'kicked' her off when he is successful . Where there is no trust ,there cannot be love! Love and trust are the same word ! He should have verified his doubts before falling into bed with another. How does his cheating on Kalpi be right , just because Kalpi has cheated on him [ according to his warped thinking ] . Next , her 'beloved' sister ,who had no qualms 'sleeping with ' BIL ! How can she ever face her sister again but she does ,as a shameless person! ! ! Even if Rahav has regretted his mistakes and Kalpi forgives him and accepts him, the sight of her husband and sis after 'love making' will be strongly 'carved' in her mind ! No amount of love or regret will bring back the 'Love " RagNa had in the beginning. But for the sake of an innocent child , they should be together. !! Fab FF. You are very sensitive writer who has written such 'touching' FF ! Thanks a lot. Please don't let dust collect on this amazing FF . KINDLY UPDATE , If it is not asking a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
when u r going to give us update...I want to see crying raghav for kalpi...ya crying raghav cuz after that only I can think for kalpi forgiving raghav...
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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE:
(Behalf on VIsh)
She is busy with some personal work so she say's athat she update her ff on weekend..she said sorry to you all for waiting u all long...but she is not get time to visit here also..so she apologise for that..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonder queen,
As u are back to the If,pls update urs ff's soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all apologies for not replying to ur feedback but u all know the reason!! I read each and every comment and want to thank u all for showering so much love on me. Ur encouragement is what keeps me going.
Now sorry for not updating from a long time. I was busy with some or the other thing. Now when i got time I feel I am not into correct mode n not writing properly. Though I tried my best in this but I still feel I can write better than this n I promise to improve in future updates.

As always I have not read the update after writing as I might delete it due to dissatisfaction. Expect lots of typos and spelling/grammatical mistakes. M learning creative writing so u can hope that I will learn the art of proof reading as well.. Till than bear with me.

Coming to the update... Some of u might not find it important but with this update I am just showing the effect of divorce on each n every character of the story.

The update dedicated to Lavanya who was constantly pinging me for it.

A day before hearing date

@Kalpi's College

Kalpi is sitting in her cabin preparing some test paper for the next class... From last 20 mins she had not written max one or two lines on the paper...He mind was distracted and all she was thinking was about the reason for preponing the date...

Tap! Tap!' Someone tapped on her shoulder to bring her back to the world where she belongs.. She turns around and finds Arti, her colleague standing behind her.

"Don't u want to attend the lecture??" Arti asks her.

"Arti... Will u do me a favour... Can u attend this class for me?? Actually m having slight headache n was planning to give them a class test but my paper is not ready yet." Kalpi said while showing the empty paper to Arti. Arti was aware of Kalpi's divorce news as no one can hide such matters and hence accepts the request without asking further questions... Kalpi thanks her and rests her head on the table when she hears another knock on the door... She gets irritated and lifts her head to see who it is... Smmy was standing at the door with his famous killer smile. Sammy's face reminds her of the day when Raghav doubted her character.

" What r u doing here Sammy??" She asked annoyingly.

"Looks like someone is annoyed!! I think I should stay away from u." Sammy felt offended. She realized that she went too far with her tone and apologized immediately.

"I am sorry Sammy!! I dint mean to offend u... M just having slight headache." She replied in as calm way as possible.

"Can I come in first??" Sammy asked politely. Kalpi nods in affirmative n offers him chair.

"What is it Kalpi mam that annoys u about me?? Why r u avoiding me after that party?? What is troubling u?? Did Raghav sir said something or Is it about ur divorce??" Sammy bombarded her with all the questions she had in her mind.

"Sammy... I am not avoiding u... I just want to be alone." Kalpi tried to stop the conversation.

"Why r u taking divorce??" Sammy was not ready to leave the topic.

"Sammy.. it's my personal life. I think u should stay away from it." She replied in a stern voice. Sammy understands it and gets up immediately. Before leaving the room he turns back and looks at Kalpi once again... "I wish I could tell u how much u affects me... I always admire u for the person who u r and u r my ideal... I think I like u." He thought and left the place.

"I am sorry Sammy but I do not want to share my thoughts with anyone... I can't tell u what is troubling me coz I myself don't know what I want... I do not know why he still affects me so badly when all I want is to go away from him. Sometimes I want the time to freeze n I do not have to face this separation while other times I want the time to flew away so that I can end this case soon and start my new life again. I wish I could know what I want."

She rests her head on the table once again and shuts her eyes tightly to stop the tears that were threatening her to come out.

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@Ria's school

Ria comes out with a diary in her hand and smile on her lips...

"Yippie!!! It's last day of our school!! Vacations start from tomorrow." She said to her best friend Pooja who was lost in her own world.

"Pooja.. What happened? Why r u crying?" Ria asked on seeing tears in pooja's eyes.

"My dad is not coming for tomorrow's PTA meet. U know, my new mom won't let him come. She is too bad." Replied Pooja and started crying once again.

"But why?" Ria asked innocently.

"My step mom is not good. She hates me and my father only loves my step brother."

"Step mom?? What does it mean?"

"My father divorced my mother and married a new lady who became my step mom. Ur parents are also getting divorced na. U will get a bad step mom too."

"No, I will stay with my mother and she loves me a lot. I won't live with any step mom. Why don't u go to ur mom? Tell her to come in PTA meeting."

"My mom won't come. After divorce she dint even come to meet me. Ur mother will change too. Will she come for PTA meeting??"

"I dint ask her yet, but I know she will come. I am sure she loves me a lot."

Pooja smiled on her reply. Both of them were kid but grown up before time coz of their circumstances. Ria managed to reply that her mother will come but somewhere the fear of losing parents deepened after her conversation with her best friend. She just wished that her mother proves the fear wrong and she doesn't cry like her best friend. She was unaware of the fact that her mother has to go to the court tomorrow and hence won't be able to attend the meeting.

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@Raghav's office

Raghav was sitting lost in her cabin thinking about tomorrow and praying for the success of his plan. He gets a call from Maya and remembers the night when he ditched Kalpi. With a little annoyance he picked the call.

"Hello... Yes Maya." He said in frustrating tone which Maya understands but keeps calm.

"Hello Raghav..Sorry to disturb u but I need u to sign some papers urgently. I have send them to ur office." Maya said in professional way.

"N what are they?" Raghav asked.

"The Non objection documents. I am breaching the contract which I have with ur company as I got an offer in some movie. Before signing the deal, I need an NOC from u." replied Maya.

"Ohk. I will sign that." Raghav replied in a nice way. Now he won't have to see Maya's face again which means he won't have to face his guilt again and again.

"Raghav, Kalpi loves u a lot... I hope u will bring that genuine smile on her face again. I will never show u my face again." Maya said before hanging the call.

Maya's word affected him.. She was true. Kalpi always loved him but he never respected her.

"Will Kalpi forgive me ever?? Had I forgiven her, if she was in my place?? I made a big mistake...not mistake but a sin and I know I do not deserve forgiveness... I am ready for any punishment Kalpi except this divorce. I know it will be tough for her and I will give her as much time as she wants... I will win her back." thought Raghav.

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@Kapoor's home

Bhawna is preparing herself for tomorrow's case, It will be her first hearing for this case and she wants to give her best.. She notes down all the possible ways that opposition lawyer can use for Ria's custody when Prem enters the room and reads her notepad.

"Do u think Raghav will fight for Ria's custody??" PRem asked.

"No idea but I should be prepared for everything." Bhawna replied.

"But Ragahv is already guilty. Is this divorce necessary?"

"My client Kalpana Jadhav wants it.." Bhawna replied in stern n professional way. Till now Prem never interfered in her cases but this time he was taking too much interest n it was irking her.

"Kalpi has gone crazy.. I know what Raghav did was unpardonable but she should think about Ria as well. The girl needs her father. I know Kalpi very well.. She has a big heart and she has the strength to forgive Raghav. I know she doesn't share her pain with anyone and she is broken from inside but knowing her from childhood I know that she can do it."

"N why should she show such strength?? Why should she compromise with her happiness?? Yes she has a daughter about whom she should think but did Raghav thought about his daughter before sleeping with another woman? Just coz he thought that his wife is cheating on him, he assumed that he got license to have one night stand. Yes,, I agree that Kalpi can have the strength to forgive him but then she will have the strength to move on from him. Why do u guys think that a man has all the rights to get forgiveness... Enough of this Prem. Kalpi is ur friend and I can understand ur concern for her but she is my client and if she wants divorce than I will be with her. And not only as a lawyer but as a woman I am with her. U need to think about this issue from a woman's prospective... How she must be feeling on thinking that some other lady was in her husband's arms.. What was rightfully hers was given to someone else. His face would have been reminding her about the betrayal.. She must have been dying several deaths each day." Bhawna said in one breath... She was irritated on hearing the same thing again and again from Maya and Prem. Being a woman, she was against Raghav and hence Kalpi giving him one more chance was not ok for her. Prem stayed silent after listening it but being a man he was still unable to completely understand Kalpi's POV.

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@Jadhav's residence

Kamla and VItthal are having tea in the small lawn of their home. Though the place and tea was supposed to bring peace but their mind was not at peace at all... Both of them were thinking about tomorrow.

"Kamla... Why don't u talk to Kalpi?? After divorce she should come and stay with us." Vitthal broke the silence.

"How can I Vitthal. I never showered any love on her.. How will I convince her that her daughter will get all the love here? Not only that but this home will remind her about Maya which will make her heart bleed again and again. I think it's better if we shift with her to a new apartment."

"I think u r right, I will talk to her about it and who knows she might start her life again with our support."

"DO u want her to give another chance to Raghav?"

"I do not know Kamla, As a father I am unable to forgive what he did but I know Kalpi's happiness lies in him.. And for Ria... I think I should leave the decision on her."

"Hmm.. What about Maya vitthal?? Don't u think she needs another chance too?"

"I can't forgive her. She broke my trust. I need some time Kamla. Please do not talk about her."

"What If Raghav marries Maya?? I mean they already..."

"No... that's not possible! Don't ever think like this else I will... I do not know what I will do Kamla, but I hope u r not being good with Kalpi coz of this dirthy thoughts of urs. "

"No Vitthal... I am just expressing my doubts... M not a bad mother, Vitthal. I know u can't trust me but I will prove that to u."

Kamla started sobbing on seeing the mistrust Vitthal had on her but she herself was the reason for this doubt. He intention for asking the question was not what Vitthal thought but she was genuinely worried for Kalpi and din't want her to get hurt anymore. She promises herself that she will give so much love to Kalpi that tears won't ever come in her eyes again.

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@Singhania Mansion

Pakhi and Gauri are having their tea and snacks... Pakhi was busy in her mobile when she receives a text about the reminder about her trip.

"Mom, I am going Vegas. U know how exciting it will be." Pakhi said in happy tone.

"Pakhi.. postpone the trip, U know tomorrow is an imp day and ur brother or niece might need u."

"But mom... Divorce isn't a big thing in today's world. I know bhabhi loves bhai too much and it will be tough for her but than what can I do in it??"

"How will u understand the pain of broken heart Pakhi..ur brother never let u feel any pain. But let me remind u that if u need ur brother's love in future than u need to give him love and support as well."

"Hmm... Okay!! I will see!!"

"Not see Pakhi... I want u here. All ur trips are sponsored by ur bro... If u want to enjoy in future than u have to listen to me today."

"Ok I won't go. Now, I know why bhai hates u so much." Pakhi screamed and left the place angrily. Her words hurt Gauri but she was happy that Raghav won't be alone. She wanted Pakhi to stay as Raghav will have someone to talk with. She knew her reasoning was wrong but that was the only way to make PAkhi understand.

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In the night

@Ria's room.

Ria is lying on the bed and looking at the bed.. Her mind was abuzz with Pooja's words... She was wondering whether her mom will come tomorrow or not... Kalpi enters the room and looks at Ria.

"What is my baby doing??" She asked her.

"Mom.. tomorrow is my PTA meeting.. Will u come??" Ria asked directly.

"Tomorrow?" Kalpi asked in shock.. "Actually I have some urgent work tomorrow but I will meet ur teacher later." She added.

"Ok" Ria replied in low tone which dint go unnoticed by Kalpi... She picks Ria in her arms and make her sit in the lap...

"What happened to my Ria baby?" Kalpi asked while caressing her head.

Ria tells everything that happened in the school. Kalpi gets emotional on hearing it and hugs Ria tightly. She was very well aware fo Ria's mental condition and hence comforts her in the best way possible.

"Ria.. do u trust ur mother??"

Ria nods her head in affirmative.

"Than ur mom promise u that u will never feel alone... Ur parents love u a lot and u will never get any step dad or step mom to harass u. I will never miss any of ur functions or meetings... and will spend lots of time with u... Even u can visit ur dad whenever u wants u."

Ria looks at Kalpi with smile... Though she was a kid but she can sense the truthfulness in her mom's voice and hugs her back with affection. Kalpi makes her sleep peacefully and leaves for her room.

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P.s. " Sorry for the mistakes. From now onwards I will try to edit them. Please give honest feedback.. If u are not liking anything or u feel there is chance of improvement than let me know.

Regards

Vish
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Posted: 10 years ago
This ff is so close to my heart vish! And you write it so so so well!
I just loved the feelings that everyone goes through because of a divorce between just 2 people. Its strange that a relation between two people could affect so many lives!

Ah does Kalpi know that Raghav had cheated her because of Sammy?
Is that the reason why she avoids him? Or is it just because she wants to keep her life to herself and not involve anyone else!

Sammy likes her? As a friend or something more? Maybe he is unaware how his simple admiration for Kalpi had led to destruction of her life.

A loving husband and wife who started going apart due to many reasons got the final blow when Raghav broke all the limits.

This is what happens when communication cease to exist!

We all know how important it is to communicate and how simple it is but the big fat ego comes in between and catches hold of the tongue!

Where things could have been solved across the table reached to such level that even mending relations seem so difficult!

And poor Ria is the one who is most affected by this! I feel so bad for her and many more children like her! Why do people even give birth to children if they cannot handle a relation!??

Paakhi is disgustingly silly as ever! I mean some silly can be cute but silliness like Paakhi's is so cheap!

Gauri is heartbroken and feels but only for her son? What about Kalpi?

And then I know that in the end Kalpi will have to oblige and accept this relationship just for her child! But will it ever be as it was?

Is it really possible to start afresh? Relationships when broken can be mended or joined but the crack is always there!!!!

And Maya??? Well no matter what you say no amount of justification or her future sacrifice will reduce her sin!

Though I do not forgive Raghav but no one can clap with one hand and she equally participated in the wrong! And now what does she think? By not showing her face whatever she did will be undone!

For a moment of pleasure she destroyed her sisters life!!! I understand a woman losing control and giving in to her desires but I despise women like Maya who are nothing but homebreakers!

I would have seriously not mind if Raghav and Kalpi were already into divorce proceedings and this deed was done! But this cannot be forgiven or forgotten!
She could have had as many men she wanted! why her sister's hubby?

But it is a good way to show Vish to your readers that how a moment of weakness could create havoc in ur loved ones' lives!

Please continue this ff regularly na dear! Pleaaassse!

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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional update...after long reading this ff again I hate this Raghav for spoiling a happy married life for stupid reason... 😡
waiting for next update ...to know whats raghavs plan ?? why he prepone case date???
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Posted: 10 years ago
welcome vish
the update was superb emotional u describe the effects so well how a small mistake can destroy ur full life
dont be offend anyone as a small mistake just said was meant a night of feeling cheated n got on the wrong path
ria is afraid of step parents n how would any child wounldnt we always want our parents t be in all sphere of our life
really lovely update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vish its not less at all ..
amazing update..u show everyone pov so well..
bhavna is right..if kalpi do something like this raghav will forgive her???
also raghav ready for punishment..but not for divorce..he want her back but how??
and ria..her fear to lose mom-dad u very corrcetly..any child think like this..
according to me..its really good update
continue soon

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