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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Nice update. Don't want kalpi to forgive raghav at any cost becoz no reason can correct his mistake. I just hate raghav here how can he do this with her. First story where i don't want ragna ever. Nothing can justify his actions. I am hell angry...

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#402

I dont know whats ur story going to be...but I dont want any physical or emotional relationship...btwn rags & maya...pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls

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till ur next update or shud I say when u reveal actual reason of divorce ...res...

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#403

Very emotional update.

What a wonderful portrayal of emotions in the last update.

Raghav and jealousy are like the two sides of the coin.When he loves Kalpi madly,how can we

utter non sense to her??????????????/.Not only this happens in Kalpi's life,but it happens in other's lives too.A male can be close and friendly with a female,but when the female has a male as her true friend,they can't digest that fact and she is termed as a cheat.

When she was with him throughout his struggling phase,how can he mistake her based on her character??????????????.

And the children are always an easy target during these arguments and fights.

What did Raghav do on that fateful night????????????/.We are assuming that Raghav had physical relationship with Maya imagining Kalpi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.But somehow ,u haven't planned that

thing in your mind and giving us a nice suspense.

U are so clever and knows where to put a full stop.But u are very very sweet and will not like ur reader buddies to cry for the update.

So pls reveal the suspense as we are on 'NO WORK STRIKE" as many of our writer friends are making us to cry cry cry and not giving updates.I know ,like us,they are too busy with their daily routines and other schedules,but the reading ka keedha just pushes us to switch on our lappies on its own and browse for the updates.Then where was our fault in it??????????/.

Because our writer friends are like the remote control to our minds and soul.

SO UPDATE SOON 😊😛😉😡😭

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#404

Nice to see u back. It was amazing update I loved the story plot hope Kalpana give another chance to Raghav as he realises his mistake,hope Prem, Bhawna and Maya help them but more they both have to workout for their relation for them and Ria.

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sampa79

@sampa79

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Superb update

very emotional

update soon next part

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#406

Guys do not keep so high hopes from me...As i said i am trying to make this one closest to reality so here no one is negative but all are having their own flaws... I am going to show Raghav and Maya in the next update as it is the basis of my FF. Though I agree with most of u that Kalpi should not forgive a cheater n move on but then this story won't be about a mother who forgives infidelity for her daughter and Raghav won't be the man who will realize his folly and redeem himself.

Maya is not negative here... She is as much real as RagNa are and so she is not the one who trapped Raghav and Kalpi said that she saw Raghav fully drunk than she has a reason for it. Please forgive me if RaMa are hurting u but without that my story will have no strong reason for Kalpi hating him and not forgiving him.

i assure u that Kalpi will not give in Raghav's demands easily and he will have to win her trust. Coming to Maya's POV. It will come soon.

M on updating spree so update is in progress but now Dad is back from office and m not sure whether i will be able to complete it today or night. 😊

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

So Prem brings himself into the picture!!!! Good atleast KAlpi will have some help!!!

And as for Raghav I have no words for him other than pity him!!!

Doubting your spouse has always lead to destruction of families and relations!!! So if I had even the slightest doubt that whether Kalpi was at fault in not being a good wife to him...it got cleared with this update that explains again Raghav is the sole reason for this mess!!

And whats with Maya is she trying to do damage control?????Now??Even Prem seems to be upset with her!!!!

Maya had gone after him after the party! So what actually happened that night is very crucial to the story!!! Hmmm

Cheee disgusting!!! Raghav!!!! Even he was a bad husband but a good father I think Kalpi would have probably not thought of separating from him...But he failed miserably as a father too!!!

Instead of giving time to Ria on her birthday he gifts her fear of abusing her mom in front of her!!! And he was not even available when he was needed the most for his daughter!!!

Poor Kalpi what all she had to go through!!! I was almost in tears Vish!!!

It was a heart wrenching update. It brought tears to my eyes. I dunno but Raghav has to take a massive and intense corrective measure to improve his relations with his wife and daughter!

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Great chappy yaar!!!!
i knw something is terrible wrong between them...
continue soon...

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: fairylover
Guys do not keep so high hopes from me...As i said i am trying to make this one closest to reality so here no one is negative but all are having their own flaws... I am going to show Raghav and Maya in the next update as it is the basis of my FF. Though I agree with most of u that Kalpi should not forgive a cheater n move on but then this story won't be about a mother who forgives infidelity for her daughter and Raghav won't be the man who will realize his folly and redeem himself.
Maya is not negative here... She is as much real as RagNa are and so she is not the one who trapped Raghav and Kalpi said that she saw Raghav fully drunk than she has a reason for it. Please forgive me if RaMa are hurting u but without that my story will have no strong reason for Kalpi hating him and not forgiving him.

i assure u that Kalpi will not give in Raghav's demands easily and he will have to win her trust. Coming to Maya's POV. It will come soon.

M on updating spree so update is in progress but now Dad is back from office and m not sure whether i will be able to complete it today or night. 😊

But I feel Raghav should get another chance, I know many of them might be angry on me but Vish after reading ur story I felt Raghav had strong realisation of his mistake and truly want to rectify his mistake, sometimes humans get weak in any moment but breaking full relation is not correct by this Kalpana is also not doing right with Ria she needs both her parents we can how much she was happy to know that Raghav is going to spend time with her. This I feel but ur way of thinking as writer is the best go ahead as per ur thoughts.

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Aru18

@Aru18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: fairylover
Guys do not keep so high hopes from me...As i said i am trying to make this one closest to reality so here no one is negative but all are having their own flaws... I am going to show Raghav and Maya in the next update as it is the basis of my FF. Though I agree with most of u that Kalpi should not forgive a cheater n move on but then this story won't be about a mother who forgives infidelity for her daughter and Raghav won't be the man who will realize his folly and redeem himself.
Maya is not negative here... She is as much real as RagNa are and so she is not the one who trapped Raghav and Kalpi said that she saw Raghav fully drunk than she has a reason for it. Please forgive me if RaMa are hurting u but without that my story will have no strong reason for Kalpi hating him and not forgiving him.

i assure u that Kalpi will not give in Raghav's demands easily and he will have to win her trust. Coming to Maya's POV. It will come soon.

M on updating spree so update is in progress but now Dad is back from office and m not sure whether i will be able to complete it today or night. 😊

go with u r flow i understand..but plz..plz update soon

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