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Posted: 11 years ago
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As it is my first ff I'm trying guys please bear me😭 and give me ur suggestions😊.. Hope u like it😃


Chapter 1:

Hyderabad:

At Banjara hills, Road no.10, in an apartment at morning 5.30 am

First rays of sun falls in a room, which was covered with baby pink curtains and full of photos. The room was painted with multiple shades of colour's which brings a brightness and liveliness to room. At an inclination to the window there is a glass painting. When the sun rays falls on frame it illuminates and reflects light all over the room giving an angelic effect. A beautiful girl is sleeping comfortably on her round shape bed. The reflection of light gives a perfect image of girl.. She is such a prettiest one, her dusky skin is literally glowing a lot with the illumination.. She is so divine in appearance.. she wore a beautiful white gown with sleeveless hands, she just resembles like an angel

Someone knocks the door of bedroom

Aruna: kalpi beta get up soon.. Today is most important day of ur life... plz get up soon..

Kalpi: No mom plz let me sleep for 5 mints pleaseee...

Aruna: By entering into the room she says no and goes near sleeping beauty gives a kiss on her fore head and wakes her up.

Kalpi: By saying mom with a smile on her face, hugs her and Kisses her😳

A person standing at the door enjoys the beautiful scene filled with tears in his eyes and capturing every moment of it.

Person: im also here please both mom-daughter don't forget me😒

Kalpi: Dad dnt be jealous, I will never forget u by saying this she hugs him and says love u😃

Dev: love u to beta, will miss u dear

Kalpi: dad dnt start again and mom dnt start rona dona plz mom it's my important day so no crying plz give me a smile.

Aruna: who is crying😭 try to hide her tears but cant , kalpi goes to her mom and hugs her and says I will miss u a lot ,love u...both are crying a lot😭 , kalpi compose herself and tries to cheer her mom😉

Kalpi : Dad, why mom is crying is it because of I'm leaving or that she will don't have any company who will accompany her while shopping.

Dev: may be dear, I'm not sure😉

Aruna: Dev u too and kalpi what did u say, she holds a stick and runs behind kalpi all over the house

kalpi : with laughing, says to her mom -u can't catch me and runs

The laughter of mom - daughter was filled all over the house, it takes place for some time at last kalpi lost game to her mom... she hugs her and kisses ... then kalpi leaves to her room to get ready..

After 3 hrs..

Kalpi is placing in living room with anger.. How could he do this dad how could? Today is most important day im leaving to Mumbai and here my bro is nowhere. Only 2hrs left for my departure but where is he. Mom dad I'm not going to leave him today, where her parents are laughing listening to her. Don't laugh mom and dad I'm not going to forgive him this time.

Arjun: Oh so whom u are not going to forgive my angel?

By listening to familiar voice a smile appeared on kalpi's face she jumped and ran into his arms for a hug. By hugging him she starts scolding him a lot. Dada how could u do this and thus without quitting she quotes a dozen of questions to him.

Arjun: gives her a glass of water, calm down my angel calm down I just went to bring u a gift.

Wow gift kalpi jumped like a 4yrs old girl and everyone starts laughing. Arjun handover a box to kalpi, kalpi was crying after seeing the gift.

Arjun: in worried tone , don't cry my little sister u are my angel if u don't like the gift say me .. I will bring u another one my angel.

Kalpi : no dada I loved it, its most precious gift, this gift will never make me feel that im far away from u all.. Love u dada by saying this she gives a tight hug.

Dev and Aruna: at a time-- hello mere bache , we to want to see the gift, show us na

Gift: it is made up of ice, family members faces were sculptured on it

Wow they exclaimed, really arjun its wonderful gift now kalpi will never misses us and all of them share a family hug🤗

They all went to karuna- old age home and orphanage. The place was fully decorated with flowers and ballons. Everyone is waiting for kalpi. Kalpi is like apple of their eyes, they love her a lot. She bid byes for every person in her second home

After enjoying some time they move to airport from there she catches her flight for Mumbai...

Kalpi pov : I'm so happy and excited to come to Mumbai, as I love it. Mumbai I'm coming😃

At Mumbai:

Mansion of Mr.R:

The entrance will be followed by gardens surrounding around the huge building, the out ward looks gives an impression of maharaja palace.Its painted with milky white color and golden paints. The entrance arch was made up of gray granite and marble domes, and huge elephant sculptures were present on either side, it gives a feeling of royalty. Everyone will be mesmerized by its beauty. A gigantic array of courtyards, gardens were present. The inner beauty is not less than any royal palace. The entrance leads to huge hall, it is decorated with furniture of maharaja's style and the inner beauty was increased more by the decorations and idols. The rooms were painted by white and black which gives a pleasant look. Everyone will be spell bound with the interior look.

Everyone in the house are full busy, the maids are moving fast and handling the works.. There are nearly 20 maids some are cleaning the walls, some are cleaning the idols some floor and some are changing the cushions covers.. They are working like a robot..

Their faces show fear and tension, not a small smile can be seen on their faces. They are so much stressed as their boss Mr.R is coming back to home from London after 3 months. A small mistake may cause them a life time punishment. One of supervisor is checking every bit of place.

At airport: A chartered flight landed from London. Mr.R comes out of airport he is the person of punctuality, he plans every second of his life for how to earn money and power. PA of Mr. R who must be at airport before Mr. R arrival, didn't arrived. Mr.R is waiting for his merced car,its nearly 5minutes he has been waiting and his anger has no boundary at all😡. At the 6th minute his PA arrived, by seeing him one can easily compare him to angry lion. His eyes are shooting out daggers. PA was sweating a lot..

PA: Mr..Mr...Mr...Mr R I'm so...so...sorry, due to traffic I was unable to reach the airport on time sorry sir.

Mr.R: shut up😡 what is it are u school kid, who is giving lame excuse? Doesn't u know I hate it? I want everything in punctual and how did u do this? U are expecting for forgiveness 😈don't forget it I'm Mr.R and forgiveness 😈 it's not in my dictionary. U deserve punishment that's it..

PA: please sir please think about my family and sir please think it once with your heart sir please..

Mr.R: Heart.😡 I think u have memory loss problem, don't u know that I'm person without heart so don't try it. Yes if u want ur job then reach to the office before I reach it and one more thing u are not going to take any help and u must use ur own vehicle i.e legs..I think no one is going to offer u any help as they know what Mr.R can do ...so your time starts now go.

PA: starts running from airport to reach the office before his sir.

Mr.R: Yes i m heartless person. Forgiveness is not in my dictionary.. One should deserve punishment for mistake. I hate this city and the people.. This city deserves only pain only pain. By saying this he starts his car and moves to his working area with 60km/hr speed.

What will happen when destiny brings them to face each other..


Sorry for all the mistakes... I haven't checked it .. let me know shall i continue or not, ur suggestions are welcomed😳

Edited by sharanya0011 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Res🤣
Unres😆
me 1st me 1st
tune kalpi ki room ki jo describe kiya na...loved it
kalpi nd uski family ki bonding...wow
awww...arjun bht cute hain...
nd dis rags😡😡😡
i hope future mai kalps usko accha sabak sikhaye...😈
awsm updt...janemaan😃
kaun kahega ki yeh teri 1st ff hain...😳
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 4 u janemaan😃
love u😳
Edited by wildcatluvragna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
hey sharanya...update it wid ur title dt u have updated part 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ban18

hey sharanya...update it wid ur title dt u have updated part 1

k dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm u have entered in d wrld of os as a writer...i tll u nw u cnt control ur hands from updating os nd mking new post...😃 m sharing my experience 😉..lts come to the update nw
hmmm rghv ki chartr plane entry 😛 reminds me of his entry in ema ...nd i luvd klpi nd hr cute family...good job babe !!👏 watng for nxt prt 😊


Edited by ban18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ban18

hmmm u have entered in d wrld of os as a writer...i tll u nw u cnt control ur hands from updating os nd mking new post...😃 m sharing my experience 😉..lts come to the update nw

hmmm rghv ki chartrd plane entry 😛 reminds me of his entry in ema ...nd i luvd klpi nd hr cute family...good job babe !!👏 watng for nxt prt 😊


Thank u rishu😊
im glad u liked it,hope i will try to reach ur expectations😃
raghav ka entry ka trial hai, abb puri picture baki hai😳
Edited by sharanya0011 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
urmi tu phir se gayab😭
unres kardona😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: wildcatluvragna

Res🤣
unres😳
kalps nd rags ki c tho mindblwng hain...
accha hua tune kamla ko pakhi ki bana diya...
vitthal nehi hain😆
nd kamla sahil ki biwi🤣

awsm cs hai meri jaan...👍🏼

thank u dear😳
vitthal nehi hai yaar😆
mujhe kamala aur sahil ko ek karna tha poo baby keliye🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: appyK

Nice cs..😃

Samla😆

thank u arpita😊
haan samla😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: lailabatrisyia

😆 Kamla kapoor...look more suitable...continue soon..

Thank u😃
yes kamala kapoor😉

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