ragna ff: raghav's revenge pr 5 pg 15 18/11

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys I am Diya can I start new ss
Prologue
Shanya gets a call
Caller : happy birthday princess
Shanya : Mujhe app se baat nhi krni aap bhout bureauho
Caller : Sorry meri princess abhi tak Mujhe se nara h ?
Shanya : nhi to kya khush ho ki Mere dad mere birthday P bhi mMujhse milne nhi aa aye
Raghav : chalo ab gussa chodo aur tum ghar jake apne ggifts dhekho
Shanya gets disappointed and says Mera maan nhi and cuts the call
Sammy enters in her cabin and drag s her to house
Shanya open s the door and runs to hug raghav Sammy smile on seeing father -daughter together
Raghav : happy birthday princess
Sammy says happy birthday kiya
Kiya so yeah aap dono ka plan tha right
Sammy : Yes Shanya
Kiya : Sammy Uncle Aaj no Shanya only kiya vsse bhi at least Aaj toh iss nkli naam se maat bolao aap dono

Guys Should I continue


Index
Part 1 Pg 2
Character sketch pg 3
Part2 page5
<div></div>Part 3 Pg 7
Teaser pg 9

Prt 4 pg14
prt 5 pg 15
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting...plzzz continue(RagNa=AshNa means no problem).
always ready to read new FFs/SS on RagNa/AshNa...continue soon
Edited by dimpleagar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds interesting.. Nakli naam and all..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: appyK

Sounds interesting.. Nakli naam and all..

Continue soon..


This ff has many secrets and mystery s and the biggest mystery is Shanya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting story!!! Do continue to write😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue Diya! Shanaya is Kiya, what's with the nakli naam and all. Interesting. Continue dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Nice prologue Diya! Shanaya is Kiya, what's with the nakli naam and all. Interesting. Continue dear


Its mystery and will try to continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guysI m here with my 1 st part of this ss
Part 1
Ragna come out of the mandir and hug sammy and says thnx for suppourting their decision
Raghav(R) : Sammy thnx yaar agar tu nhi hota toh shayad humari shadi nhi ho pati
Sammy(S): tum dono k alawa mera iss duniya mein h hi kaun, sirf tum dono hi toh ho
S says bye and leaves
R: kalpi tum theek ho
Kalpi ( K): R mhujhe jo aayi n kara usse koyi farak nhi padta I m used to this
**Flash Back **
R comes to chawl taking K 's rishta.
Kamla(Ka): R baba u should marry pakhi bcuz she loves u
Pakhi the bimbo (PB): R plzzz marry me I loveu
R: but I love kalpi
Ka: but she does not loves u
K: no I love him
After k's this statment ka steps forward and slaps k and says: how dare u say this R baba only belongs to PB
K: I not shocked by ur statment mom bcuz its not the 1 st time u choose PB on mw
R go on knees and says: Will u marry me K
K: Yes
Ka: how dare u say yes K
K: how u can choose PB on me every time? I will marry R today
Ka: if u do so u will be dead for me
Ragna leave and go to temple offcourse to marry and get married .
**Flash Back Ends **
Ragna sit in car and reach raghavs house where maya welcome them .
Maya(M): now we will do ring finding ritual
S: I m sure R will win
M : no K will win
R: we will see
K: yes we will see
R: oh overconfidence
K: no overconfidence just confidence
M places a plate b/w ragna and gives them instruction
Ragna puts hands inside the plate and starts searching and their hands collide in the background anko ki gusthakiya plays . When their hands collide R holds K 's hand K from eyes says leave her hand as there were maya and sammy. M pushes K's shoulder and says in a teasing way : If u finish this early u have much more time for ur golden night [;)]
K blushes [:$]
Then after a moment R gives kalpi the ring in her hand which is not noticed by maya and sammy and instructs her to say that she got the ring.
K: I got the ring
All the 3 clap
M: so that means K will rule the house so women power here
S: it doesnot matters who wins this competion bcuz every house has women domination
M: oh really I will showu tonight women power
R: S ur finished man
All the 4 laughs. Maya sammy leave
R carries K to their room.


Precap: Ragna sr [:$] . 6 year leap PB to shoot a lady and the lady to die.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hope that lady is not our kalpi plz n waiting 4 ur next update
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Character sketch
Kalpna Raghav Shinghania: wo raghav shinghania a girl witha golden heart she is caring, open minded. Trusts her husband a lot
Raghav Shinghania: ho kalpi. Loves her wife very much can do anything for her
Samar Raizada: BFF of rags ho maya love his family a lot (raghav,kalpi,maya)
Maya Samar Raizada: BFF of rags wo sammy loves him a lot . Is a suppourter of ragna

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