Ragna FF~Hatred Till Love (ch-32)updated on pg-144 on 10 Jan 2015 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Nice story! But is it a RagNa story or will Kalpi continue to be with Yash? Love the updates dear!

However Your updates seem to be written in a hurry! Do u type them into ur phone?

Sorry dont want to sound like a teacher but consider as a request.

If possible take time to write ur updates and be more descriptive and elaborate that actually adds to the story as the readers can imagine the scene and the surroundings and can relate to it! Like I felt the flashback narrated by Yash seemed to be rushed through. I still did not get it how the relatives come to know of what Kalpi did in school? Was the issue hyped to that extent that the principal had to insult her parents?

But otherwise the content is very interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks all of you for your wonderful comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter-8. Both Sammy and raghav knocks on yash's room door and yash allows them to come in and then yash ask from both of them that why did they came here then raghav reply that. we both came here to ask for your help then yash reply but for what then raghav say for uniting kalpi to her family then yash reply that if you want to unite kalpana with her family then I am with you because I too want that then raghav thanks yash for helping them but yash say their is no need of thank you because I am not doing this for you but I am doing this for kalpana because she misses her family a lot" then yash also ask raghav that did you planned something or not then raghav reply not yet but I will plan something and let you know about it and after saying these both raghav and Sammy goes from their.******~~~~~~Night 12:00am~ ~~~~~~******** All the friends silently enters to neha's room to wish her happy birthday and then they all together loudly wishes her happy birthday and then neha cuts the cake and feds her friends one by one and after that they all share a group hug and after that all went to sleep. ~~~~~~*******Next Morning *******~~~~~~~~~ All very busy in preparation and are very happy but raghav is very sad and yash notice this so he goes towards raghav and ask him that why he is so sad but raghav doesn't reply anything but yash says to raghav please tell me because now we are friends too so you can tell me then raghav reply that I was thinking that how did all this then yash reply what then raghav say I mean how tells principle about that accident because I didn't tell them and how come kalpi's family & relatives come to know about this because I didn't tell this to anyone then yash reply that may somebody less had done it and blamed you for all, these then raghav says that it is possible but I don't know how can go such a low I need to find out then yash say raghav if you need any help please let know I would definitely help you.*********~~~~~~~~~At Night ~~~~~~~~~************ Some were busy in welcoming the guest and some were busy in seeing last minute preparation and then party starts everyone gathers at dance floor to dance and yash and kalpana dance on song zehnaseeb and raghav becomes sad seeing both of them so close to each other and after that when it is cake cutting time kalpana gets a call and after listening to the call kalpana shouts what then everybody looks at her with questioning eye and then kalpana tells to everyone that yug and sia meet with an accident and they both are in city hospital and after listening this all rush towards city hospital. ~~~~~~********City Hospital ******~~~~~~~~ All of them enters the hospital and quickly goes towards reception and ask the receptionist about the patients which meet with accident then receptionist tells that they are in OT and then they all go towards OT and in OT sia is on bed with pool of blood but their is no doctor to operate her whereas yug is sitting besides her and crying and then yug sees everyone and then he ask kalpana to save his wife. and child as he can't live without them and then kalpana calls the doctor and ask him that why did they all are not attending the patient if anything happens to her then how is going to be responsible for these then doctor reply that they can't attend the patient because the case is very complicated and a doctor like you can operate the patient and then kalpana examine sia and tells yug that we need to do a quick operation and then yug reply that do it but please save my wife and my child and then kalpana tells him that it is not possible can only save one life so you have to decide whom you want to save your wife or your child then yug reply that I can't choose please do something and save both of them then yash asks kalpana is their is no other way we can save both of them but kalpana reply that their is no other way and ask yug to take a quick decision and sign the forms so that we can start the operation and after hearing these yug sit on chair and crying continuously and then yash console him and tells him that you have to take decisions
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
hmmm felt bad for Raghav. He was so sad seeing Yash and Kalpi togther! So does Kalpi really love Yash? as it is never shown yet! And I am sorry but who are Yug and Sia? OMG Yug has choose betwen a wife and a daughter! Poor Yug! Hope Kalpi manages to save both mother and child.
So Raghav is all set to reunite Kalpi with her parents.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_remix

hmmm felt bad for Raghav. He was so sad seeing Yash and Kalpi togther! So does Kalpi really love Yash? as it is never shown yet! And I am sorry but who are Yug and Sia? OMG Yug has choose betwen a wife and a daughter! Poor Yug! Hope Kalpi manages to save both mother and child.

So Raghav is all set to reunite Kalpi with her parents.


yes kalpi really loves yash a lot but it's going to be ragna as a couple and yug and sia are kalpi and yash friends
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc n beautifulll update dear..
Nw raghav n hash has becum frnd dat sounds good..
And I feel lyk der ll be sum conneciont with the accident..
Waiting fr d next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope Kalpi saves both mother and the baby, hopefully the principal will beable to help them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjinie

I hope Kalpi saves both mother and the baby, hopefully the principal will beable to help them

For that you have to read next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update n thanks for the Pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read last two updates both were superb
Loved dat raghav realized his mistake n want to unite kalpi wit her parents n asked 4 yash's help
yash is nice human being despite wat raghav did he felt his pain n became his frnd
Omg major operation n yug have to decide betwn wife n child hope kalpi manages to save both
Eager to knw who is main culprit...cont soon

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