Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07

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ReezaZul

@ReezaZul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

SOOO LOVELY UPDATE...
PLEZ CONTINUE SOON..
IM WAITING😃

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Aru18

@Aru18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

1st so sorry for late reply..

there are some problem come suddenly so not reply before..

double update..

awesome..

kalpi is on sapna..to good...like kalpi also loved to see jelous raghav...😆

raghav is accept somewhere that he need kalpi in her life but kalpi still runway from that fact.

hope kalpi listen to her heart once..

and ecited for next update

continue soon

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Charu is back with her master stroke... Romance at its best !!!! Too good dear !!!!

Read both parts together. First part was all about Raghav teasing and enjoying Kalpi's discomfort. Loved Raghav's subtle hints to irritate Kalpi. His mention of the gift ' the kiss' and she turned beetroot red...lol. She managed to change the kiss to saree but he was not going to leave her. He enjoyed her restlessness.

Sapna turned out to be the catalyst he needed to get her to admit the feelings she had for him. It was lovely to see a jealous Kalpi, she thought how can her friend hug and kiss ' her Raghav ' ! Unknowingly she admitted he was hers... lol.

Latter part was totally ragnalicious. Had goose bumps all over the body while reading it. Song made it all the more romantic. I played it again and read it twice. ... awesome sweet heart! The bathroom scene and how he tasted all the cream and fruit from her body ... oh my!!!!! 😳 But he controlled himself and asked her to change before she gets sick. Like a true gentleman he said he will wait till she get dressed.

Fabulous dear 👏... my 'romance queen'... 🤗

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ovee

@ovee

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#524

Romantic update dear. I like jealious kalpi and naughty rags a lot.pls update soon next part.

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charvi3

@charvi3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Wonderful update charu...full of ragna loved it..

Update next part soon dear

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shoonya9

@shoonya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#526

Hey charu, u gave us Kalpi's day out in Raghav's office, then came Raghav's day out at Kalpi's home. Now when are u giving us Kalpi's day out at Raghav's home as Gauri too is eager to meet her daughter, or u r gonna give family gathering? Whatever it is wherever it is RAGNA are after all RAGNA! Puri duniya k Samne bhi gracefully Romance kark hi chodenge. Such is ur caliber and creative imagination tht we can't wait for another stunningly, rocking, hawwt , sizzling, romantic and what not... Update. Please update soon dear.

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swati

@Ragna1302

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#527

Hi, chahat

I am swati & i'm new this forum .😊

suganghii suggest me to read ur story, so i am reading your FF COF
It is awesome😉 story, u r a fab writer👏. I love u r ff it is different concept.😃
omg 😲raghav & kalpi childhood enemy & there journey had started.
I recently read part 7 , Raghav Kiss Kalpi☺️ & he would kiss her again to prove her wrong
too Romantic 😉& Hot 😳 update dear.

to be continue & update next part soon

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: switymango
Hi, chahat

I am swati & i'm new this forum .😊

suganghii suggest me to read ur story, so i am reading your FF COF
It is awesome😉 story, u r a fab writer👏. I love u r ff it is different concept.😃
omg 😲raghav & kalpi childhood enemy & there journey had started.
I recently read part 7 , Raghav Kiss Kalpi☺️ & he would kiss her again to prove her wrong
too Romantic 😉& Hot 😳 update dear.

to be continue & update next part soon

Hi Swati, First of all a very warm welcome to the forum. 😃🤗 Hope you have a great time here, we have some amazing writers here which make uo for the void of RagNa. Sugandhi is a darling always, so sweet of her to suggest my name. 😃 Thanks a lot for liking my story thus far. Hope you enjoy ahead also. I'l try to update it soon, after updating other neglected FFs. 😆

Thanks for your sweet feedback, made me smile. if you want PM for further updates, please send em buddy request.

Lots of love,

Charu