Ch4 pg 31 - 31/03 - The guardian: forbidden love

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@smileysmile

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: angelpureness

He has always loved her... Now he realises she is a woman... There is a sexual awareness that has mixed up with his love

Thanks for explaining it. That's why he was missing her badly when he was out of town and was eager to meet her the moment he came back. The way you described him yelling at her was so good. It gave many meaning to his character like he was angry on himself for not checking out where is she. Then he had the guilt of feeling uncontrolled emotions and awareness regarding her feminine touch. His yelling at her also shows his feelings and right over her as a guardian and protector.

He was not bound by any contract or forced to take her to his place when his Nanny died. But he did. And he spoiled her with his immense love and attention. And Kalpi, she by hook or crook got him to bed 😆.

Please update soon with more insights and flash backs.

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Fabulous update

Both r in pain unable to express...specially Loved last line which completely depicts raghav's pain n immense love for her

So fake eng for kalpi to move on...eager to read next part

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pads23

@pads23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

angel...ur a talented writer...pl do pm ur updates...they r too good...

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

RES

Yesss!!!! So Rahul is in the picture is it? Will he be able to make Raghav jealous enough?

Ha Ha Angel my jaan aise incomplete update na choda karo yaar cos unable to sleep peacefully yaar! Love it love it love it!!!! mmmuuuaaahhh to u!

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Really really good start. And this Rahul is he here to make rags a bit jealous and possessive. I m do liking this ff as well. But complete pls.

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Why haven't you replied to my comment??
See you brought in Rahul!! Will he be the one to make rags show his true feelings for kalpi?! Want to see rags grieve! Want to see him yearn!! Want to see him demand his rights lol and at the same time want to see him angry;)!! Lol let me see what you've got ;)!!

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Does he know he loves her?! Is guilt bothering him?! He feel that it's his duty to protect her and instead he is taking advantage of her?! Is that it?! Cause that is the feeling I'm getting!! He was suppose to be the one protecting her from ppl trying to get into her, and he is the one doing it!! He's guilty! He can't control himself because he loves her and believes he is her protector!
I love it! I love his dilemma!! And as far as maya is concerned she knows Kalpi loves him!! Will she be the one to tell him that it's ok to love and that there is no age limit to love!! And priya, how can someone be so stupid?! She is just playing along so that she can get RS when she fully knows he doesn't have an ounce of feeling for her!! Plz correct me if I'm wrong!! I love your way of writing! Love you love scenes! It brings out emotions within!! It really does!! You're awesome!! Tks for each and every update you give with every one you just leave me wanting more and more!!
PS: love Kalpi's reaction towards him! He will not be able to see her hurting and she ignoring him!!
Will you give us another guy so he will know how much he loves and wants her?! Would love to see that! I feel it's the only way possible to bring out his true feelings towards her! Do take it into consideration!

Sorry

Oh bless I thought u were penning out ur thoughts in question form and then answering it.. Lol

Yes he knows he loves her. He feels guilty for breaking Kamla's trust in him and also for sleeping with her coz he knows it is not going to head anywhere. He feels that her feelings are just infatuation n tht eventually she will feel trapped.

Priya is not interested in RS. In fact she and Maya will help make Ragna one. I have no idea wht is happening next. When I sit to write, I just feel the characters and the words just pour out.

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Why haven't you replied to my comment??
See you brought in Rahul!! Will he be the one to make rags show his true feelings for kalpi?! Want to see rags grieve! Want to see him yearn!! Want to see him demand his rights lol and at the same time want to see him angry;)!! Lol let me see what you've got ;)!!

not sure if Rahul will be the one... But he will help.