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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: niru04
Nice update.plz make ragav jealous to confess his love for kalpi.thanku so much for d pm dr.

No need to thank for pm.. I'm glad u read the story..

Glad u liked the update.. You want jealous rags and you'll get it😉

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Yes, I do feel it's short but I don't feel bad because the update is so sweet. Ragna feeling the pull towards each other. Raghav is still angry with her for having lunch with Prem but he couldn't help get happy on seeing her. Loved how he said 'ours' when Kalpi asked whose kids...lol. Now Gauri is in on mission ragna, thanks to Sammy. But first Gauri wants to confirm they like each other. No use asking them though. They will immediately reject. But even a blind person can see the love in their eyes.
Arpi, about your question, I think the best person to answer is you. You know your story better than anybody. So whatever you decide will be ok with me. You are a great author and I respect your decision. And you know I have a thing for 'jealous Raghav ' 😉 Love you. Seems you are busy with your studies nowadays, I hardly get to interact with you 🤗

OMG... Can't tell you how happy I am after reading that you feel my story is better than others .. Though i know that it is a plain lie.. Coz i myself am a big fan of many other writers..

Lol.. Everyone here has a thing for jealous Raghav😆

Ya kiara.. A lot busy.. Technically i should be busy with studies but here i'm busy with managing studies,IF amd MP together😆

I too miss interacting with u.. 🤗 Love u too babe..

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sharanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

wow nice update appy😳

sammy tho sacha dost hai yaar😊

rags said ours kid and kalpi blushing☺️

continue it as ur wish dear..btwn, i love to see jealous rags😛

continue soon ..

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: lolor
nice update...I like jealous raghav...but I think hes already knows his feelings...now its kalpis turn...

Glad u liked it.. You'll see jealous sode of both but to clear one thing.. raghav hasn't realised his feelings yet..😉

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: appyK

Oh yeah finally I updated😆
Guess so everyone is obsessed with jealous Raghav.. Ab woh nahi diya toh jute padenge..😆
Haay tu phir rofl kar rahi hai ms.rofl.. Bahut time baad tujhe yeh smiley use karte huye dekha..🤪

Yes after a long time..i m 🤣

feeling good using 🤣

whenever i use this 🤣 a smile automatically appears on my face...right now also 🤣

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow nice update appy😳
sammy tho sacha dost hai yaar😊
rags said ours kid and kalpi blushing☺️
continue it as ur wish dear..btwn, i love to see jealous rags😛
continue soon ..

Thanks a lot sharu.. Its jealous raghav and ..

I'm continuing it sooner than u think..😉

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Yes after a long time..i m 🤣
feeling good using 🤣
whenever i use this 🤣 a smile automatically appears on my face...right now also 🤣

Tere se zyaada bada smile mere face pe aata hai😆🤣

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: appyK

Didn't see this comment luckily read it now..
Glad u liked this ff... U too know me so well.. Itne jaldi thodi na mein sab reveal karungi and recent suggestions say I'm gonna make it longer ...😉
Short term memory loss hai na so bhool gayi kya wish thi.. But anyway thanks for fulfilling it ms.rofl🤗😃

yes multiname i know u much better..😎

memory loss..gauri affected u 🤣

ur wish was to unres my comment but i commented for whole previous updates.😃

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: appyK

Tere se zyaada bada smile mere face pe aata hai😆🤣

Uhi smile aati h ya mere rofl expression ko dekh kar aati h 🤣

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Finally found that comment.. credits for making Gauri cupid spontaneousmini aka mini who suggested that.. Today I'm in total writing mood and plus happy reading all your comments.. Jealous Raghav it is..so here's another update ...Kiss edited .. Edit in red..

Kalpi was searching for her bag ... she remembered keeping it near the couch but it wasn't there.. "Might be in Ma's room", she said and then went to Gauri's room.. she entered the room and just then heard the sound of the door closing behind her.. startled she turned only to find Raghav standing there...

Her heart again started beating in a super fast speed and seeing him coming close to her she felt as if he would either hear her heartbeats or her heart will jump out... "What were you doing with Prem??", he said while trying had to control the anger rising inside..

Kalpi still was silent... She kept wondering why he's asking about Prem.. she couldn't say anything coz she feared to reveal about the surprise party.. "Why are you always with Prem??", Raghav asked while stepping closer to her...

He was feeling restless and the only way he could silence 'that feeling' in his heart was talk to kalpi directly... He was yet again standing very close to her thus making her all the more nervous... after looking down for quite a while Kalpi looked upstraight into Raghav's eyes and said," Sir.. I'm getting late..", she picked up her bag and started walking towards the door... And then she felt a strong pull and in seconds she was pinned to the wall with Raghav leaning close to her.. His proximity was affecting her and more than that the thought that sje somehow was liking it was making it all the more difficult..

"You're not leaving without answering me", He said..."What's your relationship with Prem??"...Her voice was stuck in her throat .. The silence between them was broken when her phone buzzed and on seeing Prem's caller id the last string of self-control which had held his anger broke.. He grabbed the phone from her hands and threw it on the floor...

He was about to shout on Kalpi but then remembered the last time he hurt her in his anger... his angry gaze softened... removing his hands which were beside her shoulders he placed them on her cheeks.. brushing his thumbs on her lower lip he leaned more close to her... Kalpi couldn't understand anything... her senses went out of the window.. her mind kept saying,"Push him away.." but her heart overpowered... Raghav kept sucking her lips alternately.. He then tried to throbe his tongue inside her mouth to taste her fully .. After constant trying he finally succeeded.. Kalpi eventually began to respond to the kiss with the same passion..

Raghav moved away on feeling that Kalpi had ran breathless.. he looked into her eyes trying to convey those unsaid words.. those feelings which finally seemed to have gotten a name..

Kalpi couldn't think about anything.. Raghav moved back and Kalpi immediately picked up her phone which luckily landed on the bed and walked out...

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On the way back home she called up prem and told him that she can't make it and before he could enquire anything she hung up.. She still was reeling under the effect of that kiss.. The cab came to a halt and after paying the fare she went upstairs.. On entering her house she threw the bag on the couch and went in her room..

She banged the door and threw herself on her bed ...the kiss was not getting out ogf her head... her first kiss... the touch of Raghav's lips still lingered on hers...

Looking at her mirror immage she said aloud with an anger filled voice,"How dare he !!!! how dare he...", she looked away in disgust..."You let him..", a voice inside her said.. "No.. no", she yelled...

"Kalpana you can't feel anything about him except hatred.. hate him ...hate him"

"But you.."

"NO!!!! I don't ... its impossible..I just hate him.."

She got off the bed and began to throw everything she found... Finally lying on the ground.. tears began rolling down her cheeks...While throwing things around she hurt her hand but that external pain was not infront of the anguish she felt about herself for doing that.. the thing which for her was no less than a sin.. for having a thing for the guy who was responsible for her family's destruction.. the person who seperated her from her mom .. her dad.. who made her change her identity..

On one side Kalpi struggled and oppossed the feeling budding inside her and on other side Raghav still couldn't figure out what on earth was he doing.. why did he do it...

Sammy came for dinner but Raghav locked himself inside his room.. so that Gauri stops worrying he asked for dinner inside his room but couldn't eat anything as the only thing he felt was this pleasant feeling of having claimed her.. having claimed 'his kalpi'...

P.S This one is specially for Natasha who suggested cornering and claiming thing.. Tired to read it again so sorry for typo mistakes..

And its a request .. Pls no one liner comments.. Pls tell me what u liked,want to see or what u hated.. Pls..

For b.baheti(sorry don't know your name) Iske baad pakka And it happened ka update.. No bahaanas that time..😉

Edited by appyK - 11 years ago